AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Awsm update.Abhiya's fight was too cute.That jerk panchi-i hate her

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

amazing updates

pia's entire family is too mean to her and there she was ready to undergo that transformation to save panchi who doesn't deserve it.

lvd hw abhay saved her at the centre and also told everyone about their relationship.

abhay;s comments on panchi were hilarious..it was superb.

both the updates were simply fabulous.

My fav line was when abhay says he is scared of pia coz of the power she holds over him and his heart. jus lvd this line.

thanks for pm

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Woww another update. 👏
Just loved how Abhay stated about Panchi's character 🤢 she is disgusting and entire family is so mean to Pia. Thanks to Abhay for saving the day. but whats wrong with Pia that she tries to go away from Abhay though there's surely feelings from her side too.

Loved how Abhay said he is scared of Pia because of the hold she has over his heart 😳 I loved this part in show too...

Now where will Pia go? she has left her house forever... i appreciate her concern for the family but they are too mean to her.. i hope she lets down fear or concern whatever it is regarding Abhay... thanks for another update 😊

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Superb, Rafaella!
I love the way you write...I love the spitfire Pia is here...You're so good, I don't want this to end so soon...or maybe you should start another? Either way, it was AWESOME. I mean it.

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

awsome just loved it😉 "love me change me" just loved this dialogue😳
oh u are ending this ff so soon try to extend it if u can😊
continu soon...😛

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Awesome update dear.I so loved the way u described Abhiya's emotional scene.The bst line was 'I m scared of u have the power over my heart'. This line show tht even a predator is helpless infront of love.Love is human's biggest weapon & cure too.It gives pain & it takes too.

Panchi is retarded b***h.T is a sly vixen she too wnt 2 taste Abhay but na it will never gonna happen.😳😆

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Fabulous update 😃

eeewww i hate dis dobrial family ( except piya 😆)

dat panchi 😡 n i think T vil b another big trouble

loved abhay's mind reading ability, 😳

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Superb update Rafaella 👏 It was too good 😳 Gosh I hate the Dobriyals 😡 I wish Abhay had never saved birdie 🤢 n I hope Pia never has to set foot in that place 😡 Abhiya moment was just WOW 😳 I also loved the last scene, was power packed 👏 with wiccan magic. U r a terrific writer dear n please do continue soon but only if u get the time 😳

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Woaaa fab updates. I read chp 4 and 5 just now, suoerb work yaar. Seriously loved it. I hope abhaiya alag na ho, like the witches part and abhiya parts. U are a brilliant writer, update asap ok

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

read 2 chapters in one go
superb updates yar
loved the way u write and describe the story
its quite unique
aww piya wanted to end her realtion to abhay but our abhay is so cool how he can leave piya like this after all his soul mate yar
loved the scene f abhay introduction mate and last line the control of piya in his heart wow yar
t and panchi is such a jerks...
hope abhay always saved piya
cont soon

Edited by bellaaa - 13 years ago

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