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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

thanks and i think so ur commenting second time 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: ilove99
metz n abhay about to kiss!i'll kill u jhalli agar ab woh paas bhii aye toh

oyee jungli meera they r not about to kiss he just come closer to her so that he can look at her clearly 😉😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: tanvipareek
wow so abhay is principals son but why program was closed so early maybe because of pia and metz gang who are in search of horror

but nice update and thanks for pm.
😊 😊

thanks u wil get to know this soon 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

*important note*
guys i have seen so many questions who is trying to kill piya ? why did they re-open the previous cllg ? why did abahy and chand stop the party and go from their in rush ? what's up with metz and what she was writing ? why was party decorated with black and red roses instead of colour full flowers ? why abhay was there in the haunted cllg ? why did he came there ? who spoke in the room " new moon new beginning" ? and last who will get abhay ?
ans 1 ) 😉
ans 2) 😉
ans 3) 😉
ans 4) she had a very dreadful past 😳
ans 5 )😉
ans 6)😉
ans 7) ah someone's ghost 😆
ans 8 )yeah toh mujhai bhi nahi pata i first thought of ametz ending then there were so many req of abhiya 😆 then i decided abhiya ending then i decided that abhay will mary both 😆 but thats not good ghatiyah :p then i decided that there will be sad ending no abhiya or ametz in the end abhay will die but then ab mujhai sab jootai marai gai agar meinai is ss ki bhi sad ending ki so i don't know 😉😆

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chapter :5 " ? "

" love is the pain in the heart "

piya on her toes so that she can see his eyes maetz step towards him and said "never mind" and rolled her eyes
piya: who is this masked man?
misha:is he princi's son ?
maithili : i want to see his eyes?
kabeer: what a fool he left London and the second biggest university in the world and came there for studies, but for what ?
and the the bell rang for the class piya had her first class on trig with metz she and metz go there and say side by side and to their surprise that princi's son Abhay raichand is also there but he was the last one to come in class as he step in class miss protima stop him
miss protima :" oh so u r abhay raichand principals son and u r late on ur first day , why ?"
abhay didn't ans enter in class
miss protima : "i am talking to u abhay raichand r u deaf or u don't have any manners "
abhay : "i think u don't have any manners to how to talk with student and specially new students , btw i was in office to take my schedule "
miss protima :" so now u will teach me to how to behave in my own class" she snapped
abhay :" if u want " his voice cold and control and he give a smirk
the class starts he go and sat on the beack bench and remove hs cap from his face , now , everyone turned around to see his face , piya know him she had seen him before
yes , these eyes its the same eyes i saw tomorrow in cllg he is the same person who save me and later metz , what ? :o . piya thought with shock dhe nudged metz
metz : " what "
piya: " hey this abhay he is the same person i saw tomorrow on cllg the same one who save's me and later u "
metz turn to see him and yes he is the same but how and why and is it possible ? she thought
metz : " yes yes "
both were staring min then suddenly he looked up and stare them back and then give the smirk
in lunch in all classes and last in canteen piya and metz stare him but suddenly he vanish
and then someone spoke from behind them
" its rude to stare ... i am sexy and i know that "
they both turned around to see who it is and that's it . ts abhay raichand both were speechless
metz:" w..what do u mean"
abhay : " as if u don't know"
piya : with a small voice " n..no we don't "
abhay smirked and said : " stop staring me " he said it in piya's ear his cold breathe on her ear and in neck she shiver from head to toe and then he give smirk to metz and go from there
abhay turned around and ask : " hey r u both twin sisters or what "
piya : " no we r just friend best friends more than sisters "
abhay with confuse expressions "really" and then just go
metz: " h..he surely is a nice observer"
piya:" h..h..he is hypnotic"
metz:" what ? r u ok piya "
piya nodded
X...X...X...X...X...X...X...X...X...X...X...X...X...X
"SCENE 2" :
piya yawned : " metz i am tired so much now i am going to sleep , i had mostly complete this project and still we have 3 days i will do it tomorrow good night "
metz: "ok piya but i want to finish it "
piya : " and we will discuss about abhay raichand tomorrow as well " and she winked metz rolled her eyes and said
metz :" oh we will surely and i want to also give him a good lesson what about..." and she smirk evil smirkand piya understood
piya: " tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi " and she laughed

"maithili's pov "
(metz writing diary)
"at night : 12 :30 am monday (actually early tuesday 😉)
i think that what happened tomorrow and that abhay raichand r connected in some ways there is something strange about him i know it and when tomorrow some one attacked on piya i think that she/he didn't meant to kill piya she meant to kill...m...me yes "
flashback :
"blood , destiny , and murder " mysterious man said
"no plzz spare her life plzzz " mom said
present :
a drop of tear drop from metz eyes
flashback :
"mama..m ...mama no nahi plzzz plzzz" i said
" mama i can't live without u mama " i screamed
present :
i can't imagine that it will ever happened to me and why why me i was just 8 years ols girl then why whyyy ? and why i can't get over with it why i can't forget the past the reason for my cold behaviour and my laugh "the laugh of pain to hide ur pain" mama u said this to me and i...i followed it u was my life u was my love my ..m...my mom how can any one be so cruel so heartless so cold so so (maithili burst in tears she was all shaken from pain she was heart broken she was silently crying) no no metz u promise u will never cry (another tear drop ) yes rite the blood the streets the hunger ( she again cry but a lil bit loudly and then breathed she looked up and wash her face )
flashback:
"love is the long journey of care ,trust and understanding" mom said
" to whom "
" the one u luv from ur soul who is the most important person in ur life" mom said
" for example" i said so innocently
" for example u for me " and she smile but the smlie which didn't touch her eyes
present:
"love is the pain in heart " mom's quotes (and she touch the page) ""first love is pain and last is happiness " what did she meant by it, i always wonder

p.s : sorry for not showing much of abhay and piya but this part is important 😳 hit like button if u like

Edited by --faroo-- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Awesome update!
Abhay will always be a typical attitude ki dukaan."it s rude 2 stare"lol.
Metz has a painful n mysterious past.Piya s already smitten by Abhay!
n yes don't end this ss on a sad note varna we will not leave u. 😡