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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

thanks 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
Lovely update!
So finally abhay is here!
He first saved piya nd was about 2 kiss maithli?! I just hope he s not taking both d girls as same!
Waiting 4 his full fledged entry in full on attitude!
Continue soon!

oh yep he safe piya and go to metz as he thought she is piya and next update mein abhay ki full entry hai 😃

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#153

Originally posted by: vampire123
well i read chapter 2 and 3 they are awesome farro and u r so naughty maithili kiss abhya ugghhh i dont like that can't wait for ur next update

lol salman that was not the kiss at all bechara abhay tum logo ki trha confuse tha 😆 and thanks will update soon 😃

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#154

Originally posted by: bellaaa
nice update faroo
abhay entery guddd
lets see what happened next
both look to abhay and hyptonize with whom abhay attract let see
cont soon

well both the girls will attract abhay thats why its a deadly love triangle ;) and thanks 😃

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#155

Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight
Nice update dear 😊

thanks 😳

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#156

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
good work, but he is taking one ticket may do do mazay😉

lol yep he is and thanks 😆

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#157

Originally posted by: pkyekrox
Woah!!! Supervampy Abhay saves both Metz and Pia!!! Nyc!!!...-Gauri

hhmmm yep and thanks 😃

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#158

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Superb update faroo.
woaaa finally abhay ne entry maari.
That hall decoration was amazingly described.
Abhay saved piya, wow par abt to kiss metz, I don't want that to happen.
update asap dear

hmmm yep and i think so u all should understand the lilltle signs like hall and clthes decription i am explaining it becuz it had meanings btw thanks 😃

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#159

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
Lovely update faroo.ye tharkey ladka jo pia n metz pe line mar raha hai wo abhay hai na?
lol
cntinue soon

lol yep that tharkey is abhay 😆

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chapter : 4 " A stranger"

his hands on her waist and her hands on his chest there lips just inch apart . suddenly maithili push him away and again look at him still his hands were on her waist maithili push her hands away as well and she feels awkward
metz: who r u ? and what r u doing here?
boy :h-how did u get there so fast ?
metz: "what " maithili was confused what dd he just said " r u sure u saw me there r my other friends as well and hey where did u saw them "
and the boy vanished and maithili realize that she is talking with air
oh god what was that ? is there really someone or just my imagination ? no how can be it my imagination, maihtili thought
piya was now walking straight hoping that some of her friend will meet her or she will die and then she saw small thin figure in the dark
oh is he back ? no it didn't looks like a boy figure or is there someone from her ghost family ,piya thought and a cold shiver went up to her spine .
piya : " w-who's there "
" oh thank god , piya its me maithili" piya with a joy shout " metz oh god this place is really haunted " and she runs towards her
maithili was walking towards piya
" metz piya where r u " they here a voice
piya " we r here kabeer "
kabeer flash a torche towards them " kabeer thank god u girls really scared us btw i had found the way out come on come there "
piya and metz were walking towards each other and maithili saw some in dark black clthes face hided and there was a broken sharp piece of glass in his/her hand and she/he was coming towards piya
maithili saw that . oh no is this thing coming to kill piya ? yes yes it is . maithili thought and then she jump on piya push her away in the left side towards some old candles and now she is infront of her/him she closed her eyes and then something push her and she felt on piya
piya saw someone push maithili away and then he look at them his eyes blue in the torche light and piya realize with a shiver that its the same boy who met her in the balcony
metz stands up and look at piya and then at kabeer
"kabeer : " w-what just really happened now " kabeer was confused
metz : " ummm i will tell u later first we have to get out of this place . this place is dangerous for us lets go guys "
and everyone go down and then they saw that everyone is already going
maya : " het guys where were u u all missed the party princi's son came from london and damn he is sssooo sexy hot oh god u should just look at him his attitude uff "
piya: " par maya itni jaldi party over kyun hogai "
maya : " we r also thinking the same thing piya u know his name is abhay and he is bit strange he vanished in the middle of he party and then came and say something to princi and then they all got alert and princi leave we thought we will party more but peon said that there is princi's order to close cllf as soon as possible "
misha : " what the hell is this bloody princi"
T : " oh god just becuz of u guys i didn't see him charming sexy abhay on god agar koi or ladki usko line mar kai laigai toh
misha :" shut up u little dumbo "
piya : " guys i think so we should also leave " and everyone agree with her
piya told metz about the boy and then she saw that boy pushing metz away from that thing metz and piya told everything to mish,kabeer,t and ruhi
ruhi gasped misha" what nonsense" kabeer " maybe thats why princi ordered to close the cllg as soon as possible "
after that no one reply or try to say anything all r in very deep thoughts
kabeer: " metz piya ur hostel "
piya" thanks kabeer" and they went inside

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piya is trying to sleep but she can't sleep shhe turned on her otherside and saw maithili sitting on study table writting something in a very deep thought and her lips moving slowly like mouthing her words i had seen many times metz like that but never ask what did she do in late night ? did she write diary? and she totally changed whenever she writes in night like that like she is not the same person metz adventurous and joyfull girl . piya thought
piya get u and walk towards maithili and stand behind her she tries to read " thats awful, still in my dreams . why why me ? and i ... can i forget it ever ? still that question ... that question roamed in my mind ? tha..." and suddenly maithili feels someone behind her she looked around and saw piya she snapped her diary
piya saw something in metz eyes hate sadness revenge something like that but just for few seconds then it's all gone she was the same maithili who give piya a smirk and said
metz: " uh still scared of that blue eye man " she tried to change topic
piya: " no " and she again go to her bed and sleep

next morning in mount college:
piya, misha, kabeer ,metz ,T and ruhi all together in a group chatting happily then suddenly a car stop with a loud screeched and a boy came out of it who was wearing a black pant with black shirt and black cap jacket above it and the jackets zip was open from his chest showing the shirt below his cap of jacket on his head hiding his eyes
maya : its princi's son
T : "omg he is the new princi's son oh god he is soo hot "
ruhi open mouthed misha trying to see his complete face
piys pull her eyebrows together and stand on her tips to see his eyes . maithili step towards him and said " never mind " and rolled her eyes
precap : the boy takes out his cap and piys remember his eyes and said to maithili then they both stare him in class in corridor and in canteen the boy notice it and came from behind and said " its rude to stare... . i am sexy and i know that " boy said to them 😉😆

p.s hit like button and comment if u like and sorry if the update is short or long 😆

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