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--faroo--

@--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
awesum update farroo
but chotu update bhi tha😆
so pia apne prince charming ke khayalo me khoyi rehti hai n maithili arrange marriage hi chahti hai👍🏼
w8ing 4 next update
sorry 4 late reply😔

thanka and i always give small updates ;) and its ok 😳😃

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--faroo--

@--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Woaaa superb starting faroo!!
Piya and metz bond is so cute!!!
I loved the whole update.
update asap and sorry my like button not working, I use cell na
thanks for the pm.

thanks romi yep piya and metz r cute lol and its ok dear 😃

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--faroo--

@--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

chapter : 2 " haunted "
" sometimes something should be leaved alone "
maithili : " and i will do whatever i have to do so u and u prince charming can be together ever forever "
while they were talking to each other suddenly misha shout from the bench in the corner of the garden of cllg the garden was beautiful with tulips ,roses and sunflowers green grass in side there was big banner of "welcome freshers" the students were arranging the fresher party .
misha came running towards them
misha " hey metz and piya .wow u two looking awesome same face different style and different habits " misha said
piya" thanks mish and u looking like my naughty mish as usual " and piya giggled
misha" hahahaha btw i should add that metz is looking so sexy and as well as cute and u cute and wah u two always dress so differently "
metz :" thanks mish now forget our dressing style and tell me one thing why did they open this old cllg what happened to previous one though it is more beautiful then the previous one"
misha : " actually someone buy that cllg and with a massive amount of money so they open this ona again "
piya : " but why did they close it . it's more beautiful and big "
" becuz it is said that this cllg is haunted" someone sopke from behind
misha,metz and piya turned around and saw kabeer
metz: " kabeer where were u don't say that u forget that we r shifting in this cllg"
kabeer: " yah actually" and everyone laugh
piya : " u r pagal " and she giggled
misha: " oye bholakad now tell me whats the plan of today's fresher party"
kabeer: " ummm i don't know "
suddenly metz speak " but i know "
misha ,piya and kabeer : " ur plan what"
misha: " then i am with u "
kabeer: " oh i have to first listen"
piya: " no not at all i am not going to follow this plan"
metz:" uh lets see piya " and she winked " ok the plan is as kabeer say this cllg is haunted so why not see whats there and whats not ? or whether it is true or just rumors ?" and she give a smirk
piya : " no no no metz i am not with u at all and nor u r going to do it . it's dangerous "
misha: " fool piya it's so cool "
kabeer:" i think so piya is rite "
metz:" what big darbok ur kabeer and piya i am going and if u don't go with me then i swear i will scare u whole night in this new hostel " 😈 she give evil smirk " and piya nothing will happened believe in god"
they were talking but bell rang
metz : " so done today in fresher party " they all go in their class their first class was of bio in which piya ,metz and ruhi were there piya waved towards ruhi who were sitting two benches away from her and metz mouthed the words " we have a plan for fresher party"
miss protima : " maithili"
and metz sit straight ... after the cllg was finish whole gang in parking lot they explain their plan to ruhi angad and T
T: but plzz don't go in any dusty place my skin will get infected "
misha: " shut up u dumbo" angad and ruhi easily agreed in their plan

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scene :2
piya and maithili in their room at night 8:00 pm they r ready to go in fresher's party and kabeer is coming to pick them
piya had wear a long white simple maxy just a beautiful diamond in the fron of her waist and metz is wearing a black long frog backless strips frog as simple as piya's one but there is a bale of white beats on her waist they were lookng breath taking one is looking like a princess of darkness and the other one like a fairy so same and so different . maithili is standing near the window looking up at sky piya came and stand bye her metz look at her then again at sky piya also look up at the dark sky
piya and metz together : " new moon "
" means new beginning" ' a voice spoke behind them

p.s hit like button and comment if u like the update and abhay will be introduced in next chapter 😃

Edited by --faroo-- - 13 years ago

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

yippeee me 1st 😊..lovely update...I snd u requst plzzz accept & nxt update pm me plzzz😊

Edited by koli97 - 13 years ago

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maria

@Maria-capri

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

.lovely update faroo 😳

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Tanvi Pareek

@tanvipareek

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

nice update and thanks for pm

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

woowie superb update. I wonder how Piya and Maithli would look in that dress. So beautiful and gorgeous. 😍 T was asusual dumb. Kabeer kind-of good. Haunted huh? Interesting horror. So is Abhay stuck in this haunted place? 😛