Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

superb update.i hav a feeling dat pia might hav lived in dat house as kid & mst have witnessed sumthng which she is nw seeing. Poor gurl mst hav been scared lyk hell.when will abhay cum to mumbai.

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Nyc update dishu 😊,

jeh ko piya ka bhai banadiya🤣

liked all da ppl in dis story 😃 even da T 😆.

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chandni

@TeDylove

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

wow dish great part...👏👏 and story...😛

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Wow wow wow.Mindblowing update.What the hell is gng on?Does pia have a forgotten past...or the house is haunted.Such a mystery.Waitng 4 abhay 2 return.Continue soon

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

thats great dishu...but why pia fainted seeing the wallper😲😆

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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sadia

@Sukirticious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

jUST AWE-Some up date dear ...thanks for pm

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

wow dishu full mysterious update
whts the house with yar
piya seems connected or may be this house wanted to tell somethg to her
when wil abhay came yar
cont soon

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rockstarashu

@rockstarashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

nice update dishu.u described each scene beautifully with lot of mystery.at end of ud piya faint it means abhay is gonna come soon right.

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Resh

@SheDevil

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

LOL I m read this update of urs at night & I had goosebumps.Uff I lke it.The way u r bringing out whole thriller.Pehle I wnted 2 read the original story by searching in google but thn I decided it'll b fun if I dont spoil the thrill of the story by reading.Pia needs Abhay soon else she will go crazy:P

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Fab update dishu..m in luv vd kantaben..lol..shaadi wala part was too cool..
Dis house-pia ki ye ek kahaani z soo mysterious!i wonder wen vl my abhay cum..?!does dis ff contain any horror elements?jus asking...
Why did pia faint?!sure ders sumtin fishy in dis house..
Update soon:)

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