Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

nice part dishu
liked it jeh piya T and sid conv too
missing abhay yar
definately house had some mystery and may be that maid too
hoping to see abhay in next part with piya too
but love the story and ur wrieting skill
cont soon

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

hey dishu its awsm dear! thax fr pn! yr tum to jaldi jaldi update krti ho. ok so pia is feeling little khatra in d house!!! hmmm wht bout tht lady!!! khi vhi to...! hmmm interesting!!!!

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Wowww What a BEAUTIFUL update dear:-):-) Loved it:-):-) Hmmm I think that house is not good na?;-) plz cont...

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

nice update Dishu but is it a normal story or supernatural elements are there ?

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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

I felt tht there ws smthng fishy with the house in the firts update itself Dish but now m feeling tht there's a thing with tht house keeper Mrs. Deskmukh mentioned too 😈