A Weird Game of Love (ON HOLD)

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Interesting concept.Plz continue.But ages 30 and 27 kuch jaida ho gaya i think.And some of our other frnds agree with me.So,plz consider this point if possible.

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hiii renu
sounds interesting
is he vampire..???
wht is d dark seceret of abhay..curious 2 knw dat
awesome yaar
srry 4 d late reply badly caught up wid my xams..dats d reason i didnt comment on ur othr ff til nw:(
i vil do it later..pakka promise..
do continue yaaar plzzz

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

interesting concept but age dono ki kuch jyaada nahi ho gayi ...anyways lukin fwd to read it

thanks for pm

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Renu interesting concept, I am hell curious now, I wonder what are the plans for abhay and piya decided by their fate? Plz update soon...

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

hey renu nice concept... plz continue wid dis... i think their is essense of supernatural also... hope i was rite... plz continue wid ur game

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Hey Its Interesting:-) Abhay is 30 years old:O kuch jyada hi ho gaya yaar;-) Vivian is jus 24:-) but Nice concept:-) Here again Arrogant Abhay who never smiles:-( :O but ok... Thanks 4 pm dear:-) You are a very good writer dear:-) jus love ur ffr:-):-) cont soon...

ha ha ha thanks rashi. 😳 Don't worry about age. See the NOTE in Character Sketch post. 😛