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--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys new peom on ametz i know u now fed up of reading my poems but we have to make topics so that our forum will be active :
ametz poem abhay remembering metz 😃:

har ek dhadkan terai naame kardalo...apni har sans mein tujhai basaloon
apnai dil kai konai konai mein teri tasveer sajaloon ...tujhai is dil ki zuban banalo
jis din tujh sai juda hoon us din apni maut ko apnaloo... is duniya ko bhool jao or tujhai apna rehnoma banalo
tujh sai juda hoon par teri yadoon mein apni janaat sajaloon ... ab yeah zindagi terai sang kardalo
sadiyan ... sadiyaan teri yaad mein bitaaloon

p.s u can throw whatever u want to throw i take evrthing😉(bohat kangli hoona)😆

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

Faroo I would like to throw flowers, chocolates and all sweet things for such a wonderful poem. I just felt it from my heart, really.All the lines described abhay's feeling, anxiousness, wait everything very well.
It's amazing, brilliant, fab.
Loved it.
I love ur poems very much.
Write more.
Thanks for the pm.

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--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Faroo I would like to throw flowers, chocolates and all sweet things for such a wonderful poem. I just felt it from my heart, really.All the lines described abhay's feeling, anxiousness, wait everything very well.
It's amazing, brilliant, fab.
Loved it.
I love ur poems very much.
Write more.
Thanks for the pm.

oh thank u very much for liking the poem thanks ... i am glad to hear that u will throw sweet on me 😳(btw woh bhi zor sai lagti hai🤣)

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--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

@prima thanks for liking my poem

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --faroo--

<font color="#CC66FF">oh thank u very much for liking the poem thanks ... i am glad to hear that u will throw sweet on me 😳(btw woh bhi zor sai lagti hai🤣)</font>

U are always welcomr dear.
Yea I know but I will throw them slowly from very close, don't worry it won't hurt u.

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Preet

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Posted: 13 years ago

Faroo Ji...I seriously loved it!!!

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--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -.Preet.-
Faroo Ji...I seriously loved it!!!

thank u so much i am glad u like it preet jii 😳

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-SexyAngel-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Yo janu😉 kya likha hai tune🤗

Hum toh teri poems se zyada tujhpar marthe hai...
Teri dil ki har baath tu poems mein likhthi hai
Itni khubsurati se samjaya tune abhay ka pyaar...
Tu aur poems iss forum mein likh yaar🤣

🤣🤣

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--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TrueKash
Yo janu😉 kya likha hai tune🤗

Hum toh teri poems se zyada tujhpar marthe hai...
Teri dil ki har baath tu poems mein likhthi hai
Itni khubsurati se samjaya tune abhay ka pyaar...
Tu aur poems iss forum mein likh yaar🤣

🤣🤣

thank u so much janu for liking it and teri yeah poem 🤣😲😆