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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Hey,flora!!from now pm me all of your ss or ff!!i read them and they are excellent !alright!egerly waiting for the first chappy update soon!will love to read it !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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is kahani k sabhi patr se ye suchna mili hai ki abhay ne pia ko hurt kia ye sb log jante hain...in short uski ache se band bjega😆btw nyc cs😊
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lovely cs...plzzz continue...😊thanx 4 pm me😊
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Nice cs
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awsome cs...👏

love it...❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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NICE START dear.Is this something lke hey baby?Oh chalo cont..
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i read so many comment and most of all think its like hey baby story...but NOOO its BIGGG NOOO😆...
this story is so much differrent from HEY BABY...so wait for our first blast of past..😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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seems intersting yar
wow nafi and chanu
u both rock this ff together
do cont soon
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Awesome...😳...
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******guys first chapter updated..we r sorry if its boring as it is too long******

CHAPTER- 1

(written by me and chandni)

It is a very memorable and happiest day fr every girl's life. Every girl wait fr this day to come in her life'same thing is happening with Dobrail's one and only daughter piya'.

Today is piya wedding day'and everyone is busy in decorating the house!!

They want it to be the most beautiful wedding of Mumbai'after all the wedding is with the most eligible and handsome man of Mumbai!! Yes it is the richest, hottest super model Abhay Raichand'the precious and pampered son of Raichands i.e Chand and Haseena Raichand'

They r the most richest and respectfull family and one of closest friends of Dobrails'

Abhay Raichand is marrying his childhood best friend Pia Dobrail.

The whole Raichands r happy except abhay who is showing fake smile and happiness but inside is heart, he has different motive'

Abhay sister Misha Raichand is dancing all around her room as her best friend is becoming her bhabi now..

Misha entering abhay room- oye bhai u got ready??

Abhay who is standing infront of mirror wearing a golden sharwani look as handsome as ever..

Abhay gloomly- hmm'I am!!

Misha teasing- oh bhai why u r so nurdy now?? Be happy na it ur wedding..aur tum ho ki mu kala karke bethi ho!! Mard ke baccha baan'don't be like women who is always nervous in this day!!

Abhay smiles scrastily- I am happy my sweetheart!! Afterall its my wedding'

Misha giving a fake shocking expression- hey what did u tell?? I am ur sweetheart!! Oye me tujhe kya piya dikh raha hu jo mujhe sweetheart keh rahi he??

Abhay giggles and embraces misha- why not?? After all u r my sweet sister..so u r also my sweetheart!!

Someone called breaking the cute bro- sis moment- mishaaa'come down!! Jaldi !!

Misha pulling back from embrace- oh mom is calling'seee u at ur place!! (winks at abhay)

Abhay smirks and saw misha going out of the room.

Abhay to himself- ofcourse dear sis!! Just wait some more time'then u will see what I do???

Abhay smiles evily.

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On the other hand, Madhu Dobrail is soo much busy in giving instructions to servents to decorate beautifully'as she always dreamt about her daughter wedding to be like fairytale..

Madhu shouting- Raam Singh..niche aoo!!! Ye dekho kitne kacchre pare he kone me!!! Saaf karo inhe!

Ram sing- jee madam!! Ayii'

Madhu to herself- uff kitne sare kaam baki he karne ke liya!!

At that moment, Arjun entered the house quietly not making a single sound'as he came late from office but as per as madhu order he had to come early..

Arjun was about to climb stairs when madhu spot him..

Madhu angrily- arjuun..come here!

Arjun closed his eyes tightly and cursed himself and looked at madhu nervously.

Arjun giving a wide smile- yess mom..

Madhu gritting teeth- come here!

Arjun came near to madhu and ran his fingers in his hair foolishly.

Madhu sternly- arjun, tumhe kuch yed rehta bi ye nahi? Aj tumhari behen ki shadi he aur tum ghar der se wapas arhi ho!

Arjun innocently- mom aj bohot kam tha and..

Madhu interrupted- chup raho tum mene tumhari dad ko kehdiya tha ki tumhe jaldi ghar anne ke liya kehde!

Arjun caught red handed- mom wo'

Madhu angrily- bolne ki jarurat nahi he..i know tum apne dodto ke saat bahar pherne gaya the!

Madhu turned to leave when arjun hugged her from behind.

Arjun smiling- momma I am sorry! Accha mujhe app bataya mujhe kya karma he?

Madhu shrugged his hand- abhi bara yaad aya he tumhe! Kitna sara kam baki he'upper se piya tayar bu nahi hui!!

Arjun shocked- mom piya tayar nahi hui! Arre barat anne me sirf adha ghanta rehta he!

Madhu scrastily- arre ladki sunti kab he..usse to sirf ek hi baat kehna he ' moma me ye saab nahi penti..its so ewww!' ab tum batao kya karu me'

Arjun laughed- mom uske shadi ho jane do bas khud ba khud thik hojayagi! Aur rahi aj ke din..to wo to usse ye saab saari waari pehna pera ga!

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Pia in her room is still in her all time fav jeans and t-shirt and roaming around room fumming with anger and confusion'.

Pia was looking at her various gold jewelry which Raichands hv sent fr her..

Pia to herself- uff ye raichands kya pagal hogya he'itni sari jewlerys!! Inhe pata he na how am i?? arrgghhh'or kitne heavey he ye???

Pia then looked at the saaris kept on the bed, all r beautiful having stone embroydary!


Pia -oh god agar ladke shirt pahenke shadi kar sakte he to me jeans and t-shirt pahenke shadi kyu nahi kar sakti? and why in the world I have to wear this stupid ghaghra and choli...arrrghhh what did mom call it...amm..amm..ssaa..saa..(thinking)

In between this someone standing at the door and smiling said...

The man-its sarri chimpak..(he said shaking his head)

Pia(rolling her eyes)- whatever bro..but i dont want to wear this freak...abhay is my besty and he will understand i dont want to wear this..he know me from childhood and if he dont have any problem then why I have to wear this(pouting)

Arjun- pia in few hours u will get married now leave this tomboy act...and select your dress..

Pia- bro me kese select karu jab ki is kya kehte he isse ha..sarri k bare me muje kuch pata hi nahi muje to sab ek jesa hi lagta he..and and yeh jewellry..isko to dekh hi muje chhakar aa rahe he...bhichara abhay muje dekh hi faint ho jayega and bina shadi kiye bhag jayega,...(pia started laughing)

Arjun come near pia and caught her face in his hand - bas tum hamesha esi hi rehna i will select your sarri and jewelry...agar mera bas chale to tuje me apne hatho se sajau..me ajj bahot khush hu ki tumhe abhay jesa jivansathi mil raha he..dekhna vo tumhe bahot khush rakhega..(arjun's eyes become teary and pia also have tears in her eyes)

They both hug each other tightly and pia thinks " Hope bhaiya app jo soch rahe ho vo thik hi par pata nahi kyu muje bahot darr lag raha he..then she scold herself PIA DOBARIAL U AND FEAR...ABHI TO TUMHARI SHADI BHI NAHI HUVI OR TUMARI ESI HALAT HE.."

Pia to arjun-bro now stop this emotional atyachar and help me fast nahi to mom akke muje kaccha chava jayegi...(arjun laugh and both brother and sister stared select things and pia made face again again see her brother trying to choosing heavy things..)

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The decoration of the whole house is almost done'it was really looking gorgeous!!

Madhu was sitting on couch and cheaking some papers. Arnab entered the home at that moment exhausted from work'but as soon as he looked around, he was amazed to see whole house decorated perfectly!

Arnab excitedly- madhu, u hv done all these?

Madhu looked up from couch and said annoyed- ofcourse I did all myself! None of u helped me..not u and ur son!

Arnab came and stood infront of madhu'and said foolishly " oh darling sorry! U know aj office me important meeting tha fr which I got late!"

Madhu getting up- ye ye tumhari har important kam ajhi thi..huh!

Madhu began to go from there when arnab hold her wrist..

Arnab smiling- madhu relax'I am sorry na!! at least aj ke din to rehne do 'don't waste this memorable event by fighting!

Madhu sighs- ok ok! Now get refreashed'aur apne suit choose karo aj raat ke liya!

Arnab nodds- yess..wase raat to hogya!

Madhu gritts her teeth- ha mujhe pata he..go now! Do hurry! Raichand bohot jaldi ajayange..

Arnab giggles- yess mamm going!

Arnab goes from there and madhu sighs..

Madhu to herself- ye arnab kabi nahi surega!

At that moment arjun came jumping down stairs..

Madhu saw arjun happy and asked- kya baat he arju? Bara jhum rahi ho!

Arjun sheepishly- ofcourse I am happy! Kiu ki bohot koshiso ki baad mene piya ko ready kardi!

Madhu excitedly- piya ready hogya! Thanks god aj ke din to mujhe tang nahi ki..wase lag kese rahi he?

Arjun smirks- mom wo abhi bi ghar pe he! U can go and see her!

Madhu smiling ' hai me bi kitni bewakuf hu'

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Pia has already dressen up like bride. She was really looking like princess'arjun had already hire a well known makeup artist from glamour world fr pia! He make her entered from backside door so that madhu don't see her.

Pia was very much happy as her brother was doing soo much fr her'

But most funny part was pia was getting irritated when she was having make up..and the make up artist was laughing like hell!

But at last it was done she was lokking like a fairy..

Arjun was hell shocked seeing his sister grown up so soon.

Arjun with misty eyes- ah my sis has grown soo big..really yaar u r looking great today!

Pia feeling embrassed hugged arjun- thanks bhai!

Pia was now lookin at mirror all alone in the room.

She thought- wow what an irony! I never wanted to be married but fate doesn't listen to me! And now I am getting married to my best buddy abhay!

The name of abhay hit her the reality.

Pia looked herself in mirror..

(flashback)

Abhay and his family came to pia house fr the marriage proposal. On that day pia was extremely shocked to hear that abhay came with marriage proposal as she knows well abhay was in deeply love with some one else then why?? This thing was distruving pia fr many days!

But on that day when she came downstairs, Raichands were more then especially hasseena while abhay was giving forced smile..and this was evident on his face!

When raichands leave pia and abhay alone fr sometime'pia decided to ask abhay about his sudden dicision! So she took her to balcony..

Pia holding abhay shoulder- hey dude! Whats wrong? Ye kesa dicision he?

Abhay looked at her fr sometime with blank expression then said- what???

Pia sternly ' pls abhay'don't act u don't know anything! Abhay why u want to marry me?

Abhay forceful smile- amm'I just want to be with my best friend fr my life time as she understand me a lot!

Pia not agreeing- abhay don't hide anything! I know u love panchi then'

Abhay smirks- pia r u not happy to marry me??

Pia nervously- abhay'u know me well! I am not like any other normal girl'I even don't behave like a girl!! So why u want to ruin ur life by marrying me? And why r u not with panchi?

Abhay smiles- pia I like u in whatever way u r! so its ok with me..

Pia strictly- no abhay its not ok! U hv to give me a exact reason ? why r u not marrying panchi? And why u want to marry me!

Abhay giggling- then who will marry tom boy like u?

Pia angrily- abhay shut up! I am serious'did anything happen btw u and panchi?

Abhay scrastily- oh pllsss stop it ok! We r getting married that's it'ok lets go inside! Its cold here..

Abhay went inside leaving a lost pia'

( flashback over )

Pia still looking in mirror- that day abhay was not ok! Something was wrong'he was hiding something..but what?? He didn't want this marriage! Someone must be forcing him'uff pia what the hell? Abhay ne tumhe kuch kaha nahi na then'damn it! Kitni pagal ho tum! Just stop it ok..agar wo koi problem me he then he will tell u'he is ur best friend yaar!

Pia left her thoughts and smiled to herself.

In meanwhile,Pia hear the sound of atishbaji and loud music'.

Arjun from down stairs- mom kaha ho tum barat agyi!

Madhu shouting- coming'arnab jaldi aoo!!

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Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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