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Ekta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

nice start dear👏

an emotional one

pia leaving abhay n poor angel😔

continue soon

do pm me

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
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nyc prolouge
oh thats sad...😭
i hope sab jaldi thik ho jaye...

thanks buddy...ye i know its sad...😒sab thik ho jayge but not so soon...😉kiu ki kahani abi thak shuru nahi hua..ye to bas trailer tha😆

Originally posted by: shria
superb prolouge 😉 its sad😭 but waiting for the story to start😛
continu soon & pm me😳

thanks shria..will update the cs soon😃

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
my name is Alicia pm me when u update the story

sure dear😉

Originally posted by: renu4u
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Flora and chandni hatsoff to you both. 👏 You know I'm not a emotional person, but your prologue made me cry for Abhay 😭 and that poor little baby angle. 😭 She is so small and how did Pia just take her away from her biological father. Abhay needs second chance and really Pia should have thought before taking such a harsh decision. Aww feeling so bad for little baby. When she grew up, I've no idea how Pia is gonna face her daughter and tell the truth of her father. 😭

I'm eagerly waiting for your story to start. 👍🏼

Prologue is too much emotional and seeing heartbroken Abhay, makes me cry now. 😭

thanks buddy fr giving such a long comment..aww..me too i cried while writing this prolouge!!😭why pia did this u will know??😃 and dont forget it was only the trailer..film to abhi baki he mere dost!!😉

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: mahi4ever
nyc prologue although an emotional 1 , do continue it 😊 looking forward 4 it

thanks dear

Originally posted by: --faroo--
nice story but similiar to hey baby nice strt update soon

nope sis its not similar to hey baby...pehle kahani start hone do...phir pata chalega😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

Nice prologue
Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

thanks..

Originally posted by: ashu1909

prologue is sad.but it sounds amazing do continue soon and please add me in u r pm list

thanks dear

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Nice concept:-)

thanks😉

Originally posted by: luckdiya
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1st of all congo nafi & chanu 4 d nw stry...i m xcited 2 knw wht went wrng between abhiya...sad starting...lukin 4wrd 4 d nxt prt of d stry

thanks diya...🤗well this was not starting..kahani to abi baki hai!! ye to sirf trailer tha...😆

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
thanks for one more ff nice prologue

thanks..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
awsum prologue.too emotional.do pm me veneva u update.

thanks...will surly pm u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: abc123chiti
nice and sad prologue...
it's senti...😭😭
wonder what did abhay do dat pia is leaving him...?😭
but he is olso ABHAY RAICHAND...he gets what he wants...🤣
continue sooon...😊
n what do pia mean by 'ur blood will always pull her towards u'...??
is dere any supernatural element in da story...?😃

thanks buddy..u will know why pia wants to leave when the story starts...ye he is abhay riachand but this time its different!! why u will know soon...no there is no supernatural stuffs...its complete human!! and ur blood pulling means...as we all know a real father cant stay away from his child..so i mean that cause after all he is father

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Jarin04
Quite interesting prolouge. Really excited to read it

thanks dear😉

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Awesome prologue.
Continue it.
Do it as soon as u botb get time ok.
Thanks for the pm.

thanks romu...we will post CS soon...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
kya mast prolouge hai... its interesting and plz continue and also new ff ke karan dont left d old once... pm me plz

thanks buddy..no no not at all..😆i am not going to leave my old wrks in middle..sure will pm u😊