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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update... finally abhiya are married...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update girls
So finally Abhiya are married.
Loved the way the whole marriage part was written. I loved it.
I don't know what is wrong with abhay and why he is behaving so weird whatever may be the reason i hope u girls will reveal it soon.
Yaar ye tomboy piya toh bahut maazedar hai lol.
Every scene was depicted really well.
Now precap toh interesting hai but i am not keeping my hopes high 😉
Now plz update next part soon. I am waiting to read what really happens further.
continue soon and thanks for this lovely valentines gift.
Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
plzzz update na!!! 😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow beautiful update
Now update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guys...i know we r late again.😆...but what to do so busy both of us!!!😛 anyways here i come with next chapter...before that read the NOTE first!!!


NOTE- U GUYS MAY HATE ABHAY IN FUTURE...BUT PLZ KEEP PATIENCE AND ENJOY THE STORY!!DONT MAKE CONCLUSIONS WITHOUT READING CAREFULLY...THANK YOU!
(CREDIT TO TANZIE...THANKS A LOT DEAR)

(written by chandni and me)


CHAPTER- 3

Two cars enters in Raichand mission all raichands are happy that they found their daughter-in law, raichand mission surrounded by beautiful lights they all enter in house with teasing new couple and doing all rasam !! Finally misha and haseena take pia to abhays room.. here abhay is so restless and irritated!!He wants to go away from all this but he cant he has task in his hand which he has to complete abhay thought and smile evilly.

Here haseena and misha teasing pia and pia is feeling nervous and confused she is thinking how abhay will be behaved with her? Will he make love to her.. and pia got shocked what is she thinking? Love and with abhay!!! This marriage has surely effect on her senses even if abhay think to touch her she will sure beat him black and blue and she giggles..she is so lost in her thought that she never notice that misha and haseena left the room and abhay just entered. Abhay watched pia lost in her thought and moon light fallining on her and suddenly she giggles!! Unknowingly Abhay smiles but its just for some second bez in next second someone face come in his mind and his clinch his fist in anger and brag in room.

Pia's thought broken bez of sudden sound and she looked at door their he is looking different from ever and coming near to bed with so much anger..

Pia to herself-wait what anger? Why is he so angry oh look like he is playing prank..humm lets see abhay raichand ,who will win bez pia dobarial never step back!!!

Abhay come near her and looked at her with so much anger and then something clicked in his mind and he smile mocking at pia" so at last you got success "and he clapped pia got confused and think what is he talking about this is not looking like prank ! abhay continues " congratulation miss dobarial ..ohh ohh or I said soon to be ex-mrs raichand" pia just stood there in shocked she fill so much numb in her life she never saw abhay so much cold she surrender with fear …..

" you thought that with marrying me u will be successful to apart me from my love? Behaving good front of all my family and in private telling all bad thing about my love to them u think I will not able to all this? How could u turn so much evil pia? I trust in you so much and you in return do all this with me? " he painfully caught pia shoulder and shacked her hard and shout" tell me pia how could u do this? What you think that marring me you will get my love? " pia is so numb to react on anything and abhay left her with jerk "NNOO U WILL NEVER GET LOVE FROM ME FROM TODAY YOU R NOTHING FOR ME…NOTHING..AND IF U THINK I WILL LEAVE YOU EAILSY THAT I WILL NOT BEZ I WILL SURE MAKE YOUR LIFE HELL LIKE MINE YOU MADE.. You will pay for your did pia I will make sure you will pay" and with that much anger he leave the room and house. Pia stood there in room like statue she is so numb that she is not able to understand what just happen….she felt pain in her arms due to ths tight hol of abhay on it!

Abhay somehow feel pain in his heart but he just strung it his mind know he is doing right she deserved this after what she did and then he call" love I teach her lesson after today she will sure going to regret what she did with us I will never forgive her." Other end lady smile evilly " ohh baby I love you so much still I feel bad for you how can she do this with you?" " Don't worry baby I am always with you one day we will sure together then we will live happily" abhay cut the call after talking with her sometimes " pia dobarial you don't know what hell you invite for yourself" and his eyes glitter with evil ..

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Abhay was roaming in the garden outside….he was feeling whatever he is going to do is not right!!!! But this is not his fault…..pia did this….she made his life hell!!!! His best friend made his life hell…..it has been almost half hr he didn't go back to his room…..he don't want to face pia!!! He loathes her face…..

Abhay thought to go back after sometime to take pillows and his blanket !!! he will sleep in guest room…..

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Abhay entered the room slowly…..and found pia sleeping on bed without removing her bridal attire !! she seemed to be tired!! Abhay walked near to her and saw pia sleeping like an angel….fr the first time abhay looked at her carefully!!! She was indeed looking beautiful in the bridal attire….not like real pia dobrail!! Abhay chuckled thinking it….

Abhay eyes fell on her lips….it looks so good to kiss it!!! His mind was not working properly…..he felt kind of attraction towards her….

Abhay comes close to pia and rubs her cheek slightly…pia moves in her sleep….he leans towards her lips…so close…and more close and was just about to touch it when suddenly he backed out….

Abhay to himself- what the hell is wrong with me!!! What I am doing!!! Damn …pia I hate u!!!

He even doesn't know if he really hates pia or will able to hate pia….after all they were best friends but now everything gonna change on ward…..everything!

He rushes out of the room….


P.S SORRY FR SHORT UPDATE...NEXT WILL BE LONG!! IGNORE MISTAKES!DO COMENT AND DONT FORGET TO LIKE!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh sad update but nice...
hmm so much question marks..
lovely though!
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lots of questions..do update soon. Nicely written :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
god what happen to abhay.he doesnt trust his best friend but his loser gf 😡 ...its all that panchi's plan..poor piya 😭
update soon 😛
Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
interesting story 😛
the caller is panchi 😡 😡 r8 ?
wil b waiting egarly 4r the nxt part 😛
plz pm me whenever u update nxt 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
A. Very sad update poor piya
Abhay's girlfriend 😡
Update soon
Thanks 4 the pm

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