Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 43

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

amazing update tanzie👏

god😲just to gain power mohini killed 7 innocent children😲and was willing to kill her own child too😲what is she a phsyco...well definately she is...

aryan is totally devasted with peehu's death😭

Originally posted by: Divya6696

Ok.. Just read the replies you gave..
Why writer's block Tanz..???
You write so beautifully.. and every update is amazingly well.. I know.. there are many many readers who are silent but love your FFs.. Like I was till once upon a time..
You write brilliantly.. Keep doing that just like you've been doing it till now..

and..

^^ So beautiful..!!!

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

SUPPEEERRRBLYYY BEAUTIFUL UPDATE BT SAD AT D SAME TIME!!!

Mohini is just pure evil.Man how can one be so so selfish,power hungry esp a woman 2 be able 2 kill her own child! Even animals dont do dat! She got gr8est defeat of her life from a mere human n now i m damn sure she will be now more interested in Piya.
Waiting 4 her confrontation wid Kol;dat s gonna be one hell of an encounter!

Oh my my Peehu's death came as a greatest heartbreak 4 me.I was literally in tears after reading her letter n Aryan's condition.This was sooo beautifully written;i mean dat s why U R D QUEEN OF D EMOTIONS!
Piya's condition after learning abt SC(sounds like Supreme court lol) can be well understood.When love has crossed all possible limits of sanity,barriers of mortal world,when u have walked over fire 4 ur love(I dont have words 2 describe Abhiya love) then any condition,any hurdle dat separates u from ur beloved makes u feel n react like this only!
OMG what piya is gonna do now 4 her n Abhay's baby? Hope she doesnt take some drastic step!

This was action,emotion n creation packed one hell of an update n Hats off 2 u 4 penning down this!

Originally posted by: luckdiya

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omg!!!!! tanzie

breathtaking updt 👍🏼yaar... mohini wht typ of woman is she? she wntd her own bby jst 2 gain power 😲 here i sw a different woman seriously yaar i luvd d twist ...so its possible to bcm a mother through black magic 4 piya...is sumthng cookin in her mind?😕

peehu prt ws EMOTIONAL .. awww... aryan destiny hs played a cruel gm on him ...i knw alina is always dere 4 him ...d name of d kids r really cute ...

thx 4 pm ...

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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wonderful tanzie..!! remarkable...splendid!! 👏 👏 I have been your reader almost since frm the beginning ..and you knw that..! and from that day till nw I have never found any of your updates average or regular in any way! coz they have been always high in standard no matter whether It contains highly emotional ,suspenceful or action plots, it's always huge in terms of storytelling..!! the presentation of the plot and characters have always been grand!! Oh god, you and Manasa are hell bent on embarrassing me and i can just say Im flattered and thanks so much 🤗
ok..now about the update--
wow! mohini came to know that pia saved abhay! but how..the way she knew...the magic of sands,glass and blood...was wonderful..i loved this part! very innovative tanzie! awesum!! 👏 do you remember in ur other ff 'the beautiful stranger' you gave us some awesum magics and wen I requestd you for more you said we might get it here and am so happy that we are getting plenty here..😊 hm..so nw mohini is mre interestd to knw abt pia! on the other hand pia having weird thoughts..! so is that an indication of the coming storm..? I have a feeling that they will meet soon and the day they do,it wnt be a very gud sight !! [:|)]
abhay cursed himself that always pia gets her way and pia instantly heard that... this part I loved...😳 I love writing supernatural stuff because there is a chance of using the creativity and making anything new... and offcourse Mohini will meet Abhay soon... with Pia lets see.. its undecided till now.. first Kol will meet Abhay n Pia.
gud that nw pia knws the real story! but it shows what kind of a creature mohini is!! she is a truly disgusting entity...even among witches! 🤢 no wonder kol hates her!! nw I really want to see wat kol does next and wats his reaction is wen he comes face to face wth mohini!
oh..peehu... 😭 😭 she died! Is there no way that she would come back? Atleast some miracle or magic? 😔 am really feeling sad more becoz of aryan! Poor aryan is totally shattered...its heart breaking to see him like this..😔 ...the letter was beautiful bt painful..and the way u presented peehu's pov is truly remarkable! Her thoughs...nature..attitude ..feelings were in exact sync wth the peehu we knew...the matter that she is going to give birth to aryan's children or she will die...didnot change the way she is...! And many would hold her guilty for that but for me...peehu will always b a strong and incredible lady!! Nobody is perfect. Its the same wth peehu! I loved the character portrayal of peehu...and she will b remembrd for a long time...😊 I wish peehu n aryan got a chance to talk for one last tym! 😔
and this line 'dont remember me as sundawn,remember me as the crack of dawn.' is so so beautiful...everytime it kept popping up in my head. Wonderful!! ⭐️ The line is a bit inspired from a song remember me as a time of the day.Peehu was never bad, she did mstakes like many does n she repented it big time.. she lost everything but her personality was always strong n even more than Aryan. as mother she scarified all for her kids making her above all her mistakes she did alive. but sorry dear... she cant come back.. it was their fate and thats why i wrote some love stories are never meant to have a happy ending.

I love the bond btw abhay n aryan. their little moment was wonderful! the babies,amber's care for them and abhay's hesitatn n holding them..each n every single detail was well expressd! 👏 aryan didnot even luk at the babies and the moment he entered the house to the time peehu was burnd... the descriptn of agonizing heart just blowed me..!! aryan's pain and everyother emotion was heart wreching...i could literally feel his pain..and thats the beauty of ur writing..it always depicts emotions so well that I doubt hardly anyone else can...!
hm..bt what is this? pia is thinking abt having a child? that too nt a normal way?!! this is so nt gud! I hope pia does nthng stupid in future... and ya anther part I would like to mention,that is - pia feeling terrified and abhay consolling her was so so beautifully written...⭐️
p.s. the scene where aryan cums into the room and sits beside peehu is truly heartbreaking...bt beautiful...👏 Pia wont do it ever but she will find for other ways, alternatives and yes I love Abhay and Aryan here too.. i love to write about them... the yearning for a child would be Pia's greatest weakness.

plz update soon..! I knw I unres late infact many times I fail to unres..bt I never fail to read...believe me..i always read whenever I can..so plz forgive me for nt being able to comment regularly..am truly very sorry! bt first studies then classes plus work plus my updats..kept my hand tied..bt mre than that I think am becoming lazy 😆 bt frm next tym onwards I will try nt to...😊 plz carry on and thanks a lot for this wonderful update..and thnx for the pm...🤗 I even update so late so i don mind you people comment late... your analysis always makes me happy and i feel glad thinking how much attention you paid. thanks a million dear 🤗

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome post tanzie. I loved it. I knew Peehu will die sooner or later so it not come as a shock 2 me. Abhiya were gud. Love the bond,the understanding they share. Raichand family rox.Felt bad 4 aryan but glad Abhay & Amber got babies who will b light in their dark life. Thanks Shrish. Hmm, many people guessed she is going to die and i left enough hint for it too. raichand family's unity is their biggest strength.

Mohini was such a shit. How can woman kill her own child in order 2 gain power.Killing 7 innocent children😲. Oh glad kol left her but mohiniwont leave Abhay now & now Pia is also in her list You havent seen anything of Mohini yet now.. she passionately loves n also hates people..

Pia is thinking abt tht dark magic 2 reproduce baby wid Vampire. I hope Pia dont take any irrational step coz greed 2 b a mother sometime make woman blind so I hope Pia yeh drak magic use karne ka na soche & later on Mohini Pia ko baby reproduce karne k name par puppet na bana de😳 Pia wont take such step ever but yes her frustration will bite her n Mohini will know it.. i donno im having evil ideas of making pia grey...

Plz cont..

Love u🤗 Love u too🤗

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

😭 My Aryan oh god Tanzi that latter those last lines 💔 i cant bear it Poor Aryan wanna hug and comfort him.

That Mohini is a physhotic b***** she wanted to be a mum to be [powerful sicko very sick. ewww And wth Pia is thinking the same 😲 Please dont do that please dont

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wonderful update tanzie.

even though i disliked peehu but i really felt sorry for her...her letter was too emotional...poor aryan...i feel now may be alina and aryan's story would start.

mohini is so evil...can't believe she can even think of killing innocent baby for her own selfish reasons...i so wanted kol to kill her at that time only.

why is pia thinking about that black magic...it sounds trouble to me.i lvd when abhay was thinking and pia reminded him that she can hear him too.

fab chapter and i hope abhay would get away from SC the way mohini did except that threatening part.

pia sure left mohini flabbergested and i can't wait for their meeting...m sure it would be exciting.

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -BlackBeauty-

OMG! OMG! OMG! You mad woman! You better have a good reason for you-know-what. What the, what the, WHAT THE!😳

OMG, poor Aryan, man, my poor baby😭.😭

OMG, Tanzie, I had really not foreseen this. To say that Peehu's death came a total shocker would be an understatement. And that line! OMG, OMG, I can't tell you how sad I feel right now. Argh😭 I'm still not over Peehu's death. I don't even know what to say about the rest of the update. I doubt I even remember what happened other than that even though I've read it some 5 time

Mohini's a...🤬

P.S. Piya ki shamat aa jayegi if she even tries suggesting to Abhay that she wants to conceive his child😆.😆

Apologies for this sorry excuse for a comment but gosh, that is what happens when you send your readers into shock😳

Originally posted by: urmita

OMG tanzie.😲.😃..maine bas do update kya miss kiya , bapas ayi to tum itna bada ek atom bomb fod chuki ho😲...bt i must tell u...u r awsome..👏..the way u describe everyone's emotions...i m speechless...

aww.😭...poor aryan.😭😭...peehu ko leke itna sab hone ke baad i thought vo somehow bachegi...it was a total shoker😲...was it really that necessary.😡...i wanted aryan to finally find happiness,not more pain😭... u better hv some gud thngs in store 4 us soon...like barbaadi of that b**** mohini.😡...she is just...argh..😡😡.i cant find a word hateful enough..😡..

now is pia thinking of asking abhay for baby, by using black magic😲😆...good luck with that pia.😉😆...nyway update soon.😊...i m officially in love with ur writting...😊