Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Vv v well and magically written update.wonderful.u r really ph.d holder in describing da emotions.hats off to u.dis was ann emotional update written in heart touching words nd style.thanx a lot for pm.keep it up.btw whn r u updating ur other ffs.cant wait.

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Wowww sooo emotional update...my eyes full of 😭...Peeehu dead,Aryana feeling & twin babies everything really heart touching...Abhiya feeling sooo emotion...Woww Pia wish Abhay's child mother in her deep mind😳lovely every way😊

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sofia2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

very nice. i was unable to rply privious time coz of my exams. sorry for this.

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megha sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

wonderful update tanzie.

even though i disliked peehu but i really felt sorry for her...her letter was too emotional...poor aryan...i feel now may be alina and aryan's story would start.

mohini is so evil...can't believe she can even think of killing innocent baby for her own selfish reasons...i so wanted kol to kill her at that time only.

why is pia thinking about that black magic...it sounds trouble to me.i lvd when abhay was thinking and pia reminded him that she can hear him too.

fab chapter and i hope abhay would get away from SC the way mohini did except that threatening part.

pia sure left mohini flabbergested and i can't wait for their meeting...m sure it would be exciting.

thanks for pm

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Wow this part was an emotional one. And the reason for Mohinis hatered in her surge for power she lost everything due to abhay. So Abhay is the one and only person who stood in her path of becomiing the most powerful one.

The part with Aryan loosing Peehu was some what expected but Alina will she come into Aryans life. The kids are starting to bond with the father. Armaan is slowly warming up to the supernaturals. So now waiting to see Misha also trying to patch things for real now.

Somehow the last part were in Pia wants to be amother doesn't seem to be so good. As Mohini is now coming to meet her. she is trouble. Peehu gone the supernatural court will surely side with Abhsy her husband back to destroy her Jai also not on her side. The only one who could be of use to her is now Pia.

Pia was always potrayed as a strong women in this fanfic of your but she has a big weakness abhay. and Mohini sure is to know that now. so just can't wait to see what cooks up in that crocked mind of hers.

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

ok it was beautiful as usual and Mohini is a pure evil bus 2day no long comment I m feeling lazy 🤣

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hema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

briliant update ...👏👏

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Gals

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

dat was amazing..
beautifully written..
loved it..
thanxx for d pm..

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Anj01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

superb update!!!!!!
aryan's pain, peehu's emotions...everything was mentioned brilliantly!!!
the end scene where aryan cried after reading that letter was so...i dont have words to describe. it was very real...i cried reading it.

n the last para...pia's hope to become mother...gives me hope to get abhiya's hybrid but also scares me a little...i mean it involves black magic...n killing of innocent human children...will pia go to that extent???? what i like about her is her innocence n pure heart...thats what makes her powerful in the crowd of supernatural characters...though it will be interesting to see what u have in stores for us n how will u make it possible but i dont want grey shades in pia's character...but its your story...u r boss...i will read it no matter whatever turn it will take...cause its one of my fav story n u r one of fav. writer.😃