Vampires True Love: Real Or Not (ON HOLD) - Page 17

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

renu thanks thanks thanks and thanks 4 dis beautifull update still formal introducting of dis saviour boy wid icey blue eyes left waiting 4 next chaapy and u knw wat song is pepping i luv song..,..

ha ha ha you are welcome trishna. 😳
Yep it's a formal introducing. But still they shared a lot of conversation in the chapter and Piya still don't know his name, so next chapter you will see more and more talks between them. Me too love that song and it was perfect for his entry. Though, I had another song too in my mind, but that would have taken long time for his face to come in front. So I choose Tera Intezaar song.

When will you update the next part dear???

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

When will you update the next part dear???

I haven't started writing fouth chapter yet. But hopefully I'll update tonight. 😕

Originally posted by: renu4u

Thank you so much Romi. 😳 Your positive response definitely paid off my hard work for this long update. Me too can't write so many pages in one day. I've a problem of writers block. Eventually, I'm trying to recover myself from this problem, so nowdays I keep on writing more so that writers block should not affect me anymore. 😭


Prepare yourself mentally now, Piya will keep on running for getting her love. So this should not surprise anymore. I'm glad you liked the tiger part. Abhiya meeting is not less than miracle as they met co-incidentally. 😳

Thank you for the compliment, but I'm not that good writer as your writing, that contains lot of emotions. But I'll keep on trying to improve more. 😃

Awww, renu u just keep writing u will get positive responses always. I am in just love with this story. writer's block? Dear I don't know abt this problem. Lolzzz, okay I am prepared. U are welcome dear, and u are a far more good writer than me, I am not so much good at describing, but ur way of describing is just superb dear. Plz update soon.

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awww, renu u just keep writing u will get positive responses always. I am in just love with this story. writer's block? Dear I don't know abt this problem. Lolzzz, okay I am prepared. U are welcome dear, and u are a far more good writer than me, I am not so much good at describing, but ur way of describing is just superb dear. Plz update soon.

Yep Romi I'll keep writing. Yeah I hope I would get positive response. 😳

ha ha I never mentioned that before, so you didn't knew about this problem. 😛

Yep I can describe everything, but I can't put emotions in my story, that I've seen in your story. Your joint ff with Roshni is perfect example of writing emotional part of the story. 😛

That's why I keep on saying you are better writer as emotion wise I'm still lacking behind. 😭

dhamakedar updt...it contains comedy,fear,suspence,rudeness,cuteness,everythng
"i hv no idea hw mny of demculd smell stinky breath 4m my mouth" 🤣 🤣
"aatankwadi" or piya 🤣 dat ws 2much
"2 police constable were shwin dere stained yellow teeth" 🤣 🤣

flashbck ws nice & i cn understnd d tough decision of her parents..dey r crrt at dere place..
she ran again 😆 poor kabir ..
"eve teasin is a crime" 😡 i wnt 2 kick dose boys as hard as i cn 😆
"tumhe unhe 1 saath maar dalna chahiye thaa" 😲 😆
Is he abhay 😍 ...might b bcoz no 1 culd hv icy blue eyes lik abhay 😳 ...SNG ws really nice
thx 4 d lng chappy
srry i m late again 😆

Originally posted by: luckdiya

dhamakedar updt...it contains comedy,fear,suspence,rudeness,cuteness,everythng
"i hv no idea hw mny of demculd smell stinky breath 4m my mouth" 🤣 🤣
"aatankwadi" or piya 🤣 dat ws 2much
"2 police constable were shwin dere stained yellow teeth" 🤣 🤣

flashbck ws nice & i cn understnd d tough decision of her parents..dey r crrt at dere place..
she ran again 😆 poor kabir ..
"eve teasin is a crime" 😡 i wnt 2 kick dose boys as hard as i cn 😆
"tumhe unhe 1 saath maar dalna chahiye thaa" 😲 😆
Is he abhay 😍 ...might b bcoz no 1 culd hv icy blue eyes lik abhay 😳 ...SNG ws really nice
thx 4 d lng chappy
srry i m late again 😆

OMG you felt so many emotions in one chapter? 😆 ha ha I never realised that much emotion was carried away by Piya... was there comedy too? 😳 I'm bad in writing comedy dialogues. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Better late than never. Atleast you commented. 😉

@renu dear u put emotions too, in this update too, I felt many emotions, fear, anxiety, comedy, care, love, rudeness everything. U are not lacking behind ok, and glad u liked our joint ff.

god kya ladki hai

Originally posted by: Rmuk

@renu dear u put emotions too, in this update too, I felt many emotions, fear, anxiety, comedy, care, love, rudeness everything. U are not lacking behind ok, and glad u liked our joint ff.

I'm happy Romi finally I think I'm improving. Thank you so much of your encouraging words. It really means a lot to me. 😳

Yep your joint ff is very good. 😳