New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Will wait. I understand the studying stuff...All the best you two, try to continue soon. The prologue was nice!

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Tanvi Pareek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

please update this to get more information

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Suvarna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Great start...continue soon...please do pm...thanks...

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sharara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wow its beautiful <3❤️

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

nice prologue..will wait for updates...boards are of course very important..great job girls..

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Character sketch :

Abhay raichand : ( vivian dsena )

A handsome 25 year old guy , has a loving nature . He is big business tycoon Got this business from his fathers heir but still handles everything as if he has Experience of years ,loves his brothet a lot his , his parents died 4 years ago , is madly in love with piya and even proposed her. 😳

Varun raichand ( mohit sehgal )

A kind and friendly 22 years guy , is abhay's brother and loves him a lot , is in college and also learns business from abhay , has loving and naughty nature , but sensible too at times 😃

Piya dobrial ( sukiriti khandpal)

A 24 years sweet , simple and bubbly girl , loves her family a lot , she is also works with abhay in his company's and loves abhay a lot , she is on cloud nine after abhay proposed her .

Tara dobrial : ( sanaya irani )

A 22 year girl with calm yet fun nature , she is sister of piya and youngest dobrial daughter , studys in college with Varun , she is a very positive natured girl

Madhu and arnab dobrial : ( Anupam bhatacharya , papiya dey )

Mother and father of piya and Tara , loves their daughter a lot , are very fond of abhay , and happy for their daughter piya .

Hey all sorry for late CS and yes there are more characters which will introduced as story moves forward 😃

Edited by Mohit-deewani - 13 years ago

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Superb cs roshni.
Who said u can't write well.
U did a superb job.
Loved it.
I am happy as u are my partner.
U rock!!!!

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Sheena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Nice character sketch!
So here Abhiya are already in love😍
Looking forward to the first chappy Girls😳

Continue soon😎

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Awesome CS.Lked it.Plz cont..😳

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Ayesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

loved c.s..
It surely rocking!!!!
Guys u both r best n your ff too...
Plzzz update soon...ab aut intzaar nhi hota..plzz update soon..
N abhiya r also in love n sajan is also here...
Loved it concept n everything..keep it up...n don,tforget topm me...
(fatima)

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