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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Beautiful upd tora ! 😃 Oh love love love it so much ! Burst of emotions we're in the upd which I loved ! Poor piya , madhu isn't even allowing her to see Arjun and I lved the way abhay came between madhu and piya 😳 and abhiya convo was great yaar ! Definately not easy for piya to fog ice abhay so soon ! Hope misunderstanding would be cleared out soon !

and gave blood to Arjun , surely a shocker 😆

Upd. Soon !

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

First of all i am really sorry for not commenting on last few updates, i was just busy with my exams, read last three chapters now and i would just say hats off to you for writing them so beautifully. You are best with emotions, i can feel each and every emotions that the characters go through, so is the magic of ur writings!!!
Haseena piya part was so written beautifully in one of the previous chapter i read. I loved it. In this chapter, emotions were really high. As a mother of Arjun madhu's reaction was may be ri8 to some extent but as piya's mother though not her own and as a women she was wrong and i can never think of forgiving her in this ff. I felt so bad for piya, glad that abhay stepped in, abhiya part was so emotional. So abhay chose his love over hatred really it was not easy for him, but still he did, his love for piya made him do that, i just love this part.
wow Abhiya in next part, i am excited. I hope Arjun recovers soon and u get ur laptop soon. Just love this FF and yes u are a brillant writer!!!
Thanks for the pm's and do updt soon.

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

lovely update tora...the madhu and piya dailogues scene fab yar there were so much feel real...poor piya suffering a lot yar...well glad that abhay stand by near piya this time and support her...so know abhay choose love and now donating his blood to arjun just wow...abhay piya scene was awsome ...cont soon

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

tora yaar jaldi update kar . i want abhiya scenes.lol.

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

Tora...update soon.Wanna see how pia reacts to Abhay saving her bros life.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

superb update tora! Very beautiful!! 👏
arnab's thoughts were very well described. 👏 bt he is a v.weak man indeed! Even when he is realising hs mistakes he is nt there to protect hs daughter. 😳 i hope he behaves like a man in future.
About madhu again the way u portrayed an angry woman's wrath was simply brilliant..👍🏼 bt 4m a reader's point of view i felt dreadful when she rebuked pia for nothing! 😡 and pia.. wish she protestd bck..bt she like always acceptd whatever rubbish madhu told her..😔 bt one thing disturbs me..well a question actually, that is..madhu bought up pia..and she is a woman plus a mother..so havent for 1single moment did she feel anythng for pia ..like pity..or anythng..any emotion..at all? She has lived with her all these years..and she isnt a negative character either..so it just wonders me.. I knw she has her own reasons to hate pia, i do undrstand its nt easy 4 her bt still you knw what i mean to say..
And the last part..
It was brilliant..the way u depicted pia's sadness,her pain,worry, love 4 hs brother...it was all so beautifully written!! 👏

And abhay..
Oh..such beautifully you have portrayed hm..it shows how much care hav u poured in building hs character! Awesuum job princess! You stole my heart wth ur wonderful writing! ❤️ 👏
Abhay's every move..his thoughts..fear..sense of guilt...hs changing behaviour..love taking place of hathred..was all so amazingly painted!! Splendid job!! 👏
I loved the part most where abhay said 'you really think..i..?' his intagible pain was so visible! Heartbreaking but extremely magnificient! ⭐️
His hurt..hs agony..ohh..i can feel it! 🥺
I lovd the way he answered madhu!
And last..abhay will donate blood n that too 4 arjun! Bt I knew he wud becoz that is what the real abhay is, inside that hard exterior whch he shows...earlier he was blind wth hathred bt nt anymre..love has shown hs the way..that wud eventually lead hm to light!
Waiting for the light to enter bth his , pia's and arjun's life..😳
And lastly , Thank you for keeping arjun safe! a big hug for that..🤗 😉 and thanks for such a mervellous update my princess..🤗
Update soon plz!!!

P.s. Extremly sorry for the late comment. Bt my studies n then u knw persnal prblms kept me busy..sorry again.

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago