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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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that was a very brilliant way of depicting human emotions..dextorously magnificient!!! 👏
each time a character encountered their shadow..the explaining..way Of describing..was really wonderful..⭐️thank u fairy😳

hmm..after reading ths update i have many questions...bt i will wait for the next updat to get my answers.yup there are a lot of things that need to be answered...and the mysteries will slowly start opening very soon...maybe nt the next updt bt soon enough😃 For nw just want to say that there is sumthng much bigger in chand's past that forced to part haseena n him which is also smehow relatd to arjun..though i dnt knw whats exactly that, bt sumthng that abhay is nt aware of. 😔only chand knows about it and so does haseena...but u r right..abhay is nt aware..he was very young then remember? just three
i dnt knw whether chand wil ever change becz right nw it looks pretty impossiblelets see..humans are complex..u never know what will affect them in which way😊 bt yes am quite sure abhay will soon make hmslf worthy of forgiveness and pia whz heart stil beat 4 abhay no matter hw much it tries to decline wil surely forgive hm nce the time cmes. 😊abhay has realized his mistakes and is trying to repent..lets see how things go now..
in ths updat the only person for whm i felt bad and is utterly lonely is Arjun. 😔 abhay atleast hav sumthng who did care 4 hm bt arjun has no 1 who wud undrstnd hm,yes he has hs parents..hs mom is there..bt still donno why i feel he is one soul who has no 1 to share hs pain or vent out hs frastratn..he is terribly lonely. I really wish pia had calld hm to share the news nt nly 4 her bt also 4 hm. I guess i am startd feeling 4 hm mre than abhay..mayb..cnt see arjun like ths..please toru please get hm out frm that devastating path that he is leading towards..it will destroy hm..please..saying nothing about arjun..yup, he has been fighting his demons since a long time though.all i'll say is that there is a twist coming soon...lets see if it brings him out of his darkness

special mentions- loved this dialogue 'he did locked hs heart...' and the first part..the descriptn was outstanding princess !!!👏thank u😊
and the part where abhay saw pia n thought sunlight was making hm hallucinate was just fantastic! All i cn say is slowly you are emerging as a very powerful creator of story telling..superb.👏.aw..i dunno if i deserve so many praises fairy..but thank u😳

updat soon..am waiting..😉
and here's a hug for this extremly wonderful update..🤗here's a hug for u too🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What is this??!! Why did u do ths wth arjun??!! I guessd tht when he went engrosd in hs thots while driving..bt still i thot i mygt b wrong...bt u .. 😭 nw i won't cment..😒 infct aftr readng til there am so heartbrokn tht i cudnt read the rest of the updat..😔
Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a very emotional update Tora. You are such a pro in describing emotions. all of characters at different prospects. weakness, love, care, guilt and desperation everything. I felt so bad for Haseena and at the same time my curiosity is growing to know about their family secrets. wat happened that everything shattered. 😕
Poor her is sick, lonely, suffering and longing. Im glad Pia is with her and their bonding is so beautiful. love them. Pia found a mother figure and haseena her daughter or daughter in law as she wished 😳
I can understand Arnab is guilty but he has no courage meaning he wont find his daughter? she felt home wrecked and devastated and Arnab is responsible. this is plain cowardish and Im thankful to Arjun atleast he is trying hard it get Pia back. but shoot.. he has an accident 😲 I hope he is alright.
and Pia's reaction seeing Abhay's photo is kind of realization or fate symbols that wherever she will go Abhay's shadow will follow... destiny.. they cant change it...

waiting for next update🤗
Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update tora👏
haww arjun met with an accident😲...hope he is fine...
i hope abhay reads the diary soon...
Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

First n foremost Happy New Year dear 🤗 I hope u have a gr8 year ahead 😳 n also hope we readers get to read more of ur fabulous works in future as well 😃

My heart literally wept for Haseena in this update 😭 esp the starting sequence where she remembered the times she had spent with her daughter 😭 I donno for wat reason she kidnapped Arjun but I can see she has suffered far worse. How must it feel for a mother if her children are told she is dead? 😭 She stayed away from her own kids trying to seek solace in the orphans She may love them like her own children but that can never compensate the love she would have got from her own family She hopes that Pia could be her daughter in law? 😲 She doesn know that fate has already entwnied both Abhay n Pia's destines together 😳 Pia also got to know Haseena is suffering from an ailment n she also got a clue that Haseena maybe related to Abhay. I hope she can bridge the gap b/w mother n son soon 😊 n in the process get to know the real Abhay 😳
I donno y u feel the part with Madhu n Arnab didn turn out good 😕 It may not be the highlight of this update but yet it was in sync with the story 😊 Arnab is defo a coward 😡 I cant blame Madhu entirely coz the mother in her feels bad for what she did to Pia but the wife in her will never be able to accept her whole heartedly, for Pia is the living reminder of her husband's betrayal
Arjun is feeling so guilty for not being there for Pia when he was the only person who didn fail her as a brother. He was not there when she was thrown out, so how could he be responsible for wat happened? But what did u do Tora? 😲 I really hope nothing happens to Arjun 😭 There r questions that needs answering n probably Arjun needs his answers as well for he has been suffering as well.
I love the way u have portrayed Pia n Haseena's bond 👏 Its very beautiful 😳
That was a fab update Tora 👏 Please do update soon 😳
Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg . Will Piya go back or what?
poor haseena...she would be a good mother-in-law indeed...!
madhus dilemma is understandable of crs...but still don like her...
and...will piya ask haseena abt abhay?

superb update tora
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Posted: 12 years ago
So piya and haseena.. Very nice bonding...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omigosh,...I hope he gets well soon...poor piya...she is suffering so much..
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy new year tora. the update was truly good. who knows maybe haseena's wish might come true. please update soon and please let not anything happen to arjun.
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
lvd haseena and pia scene the most
hope abhay would read the diary soon
arjun met with the accident , so pia is gonna go there now so may be abhay might see haseena there.
thanks for pm

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