Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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wonderful update tora!! 👏 beautifully written! 👏thank u..glad u liked it😊 arjun raised his voice n questioned madhu..i liked it! glad to see arjun fighting for his sister. it further proves the strong sense of affection he had for pia! he had reacted just the way a brother should! I can undrstand madhu had reasons bt still I cnt support her for the way she behaved wth pia. it was so wrong! and about arnab...he is truly a man without a backbone! nothing else do I want to say about him! 🥱 just hope one day he gathers up courage to stand for his own daughterlets see about that. arjun is pretty intelligent! thts gud! unlike our shows he didnt take much time to realise who in the picture was..also he seems to know that pia had something for abhay! yup he catches up things quickly...and i don't want to drag the story like the shows do at times😆hm...n then he got the whole picture n burged into abhay's office! there encounter was terrific!⭐️ the collision of two titans! their persona,vulnerability,anger,desparation,passion were enthralling!!! marvellous job dear! you nt only created these two awesum characters but you also handled these two heavyweights with ease..that just makes this emotionally highly charged ff spectacular!! ⭐️ 👏thank u...writing it was not easy at all😆 but I have few questions- first one:arjun said that abhay's mom kidnapped him! which abhay denied! and this whole thing makes this story far more complicated and interesting as well! because it means we are yet to know d main reason behind this revenge game...am sure there's a bigger picture that's still hidden to us.yup there is..u'll have to wait and watch😉..hm...i am eager to know the story behind the story now!
my second question: abhay said his mother didnot do anything like this. the thing here that disturbs me is he didnt counter attack arjun as to why he said so..?!! rather he seemed aware of it and said its nt true! now my question is how is he so sure?no...he doesn't know it...its rather more like..u know..like someone says something bad about somebody who is near and dear to u...and u deny it...because u think they can't do that wrong thing at all or has he been fed with lie? 🤔 abhay has not exactly been lied to..but he doesn't know the whole truth either...neither does arjunwaiting to get these answers now...
And the entire arjun abhay scene was just fabulous!! their convo..abhay pushing arjun..arjun's expression...abhay's mockery that he was nt there for his sister...arjun's anguish...every single emotion was magnificiently described!! 👏 was a very rich in content n style!!⭐️ Marvellous job my princess...[=D<] just keep it up dear...n thank you for such a wonderfully wonderful update...🤗 glad u liked it..thank u once more fairy...and thank u for this biggg and wonderful comment🤗
p.s n forgot to mention one thing, misha will take pia along wth her that means pia will nt be in the picture for sometime now?nope piya will be there in upcoming update😊 Or will abhay follow her there? 😉 we'll see how they come face to face next time..not saying anything now..😊and that waiter boy...i guess when abhay gets hold of him,He will inevitably find out about chand as well..n yes the letter..am waiting for the letter to arrive n I hope abhay is the one n only person who opens it!!he will..but u'll have to wait... Awaiting the next part eagerly...plz..continue soon...i love this ff...cant wait to knw the next part...😊
P.p.s and ya sorry for late reply but you already know..its kinda my habit to unres late...so plz dont mind..dear...😛its ok...no probs😉
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