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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: luckdiya
" Stalking"😲 aur abhay hw cute...😆😆😆 confuse soul😛yup this abhay is thoda hatke😉 awww... he liks her bt everytym he denied it bcoz he hs so much affected by d death of her sis.yes he is..she was the only one he was close to..till now.. j party... i m so xcited... wht is gonna happen ? just wait and watch😛updt soon 😃
awesome updt tora🤗thank u😃

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

thank u

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
amazing update tora👏thanx juhi..
abhay is following pia😲🤣 seriously abhay can never succed in his plan with pia always in frnt of him😆😉yup..that's true😃
yaar wat is wrong with chand...?
continue soon thanx for pm😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: mandy1024
I am so glad u updated this FF Tora 😃 I was eagerly waiting for that.really??😃aw..that makes me happy to hear😊 So Abhay struck a deal with Dobriyals only to ruin them. Its fine if he exacts his revenge from Arjun as he is his culprit after all Arjun may not have done it intentionally but still he took out his fury n pain on poor Alisha 😭 Chand may make Abhay do the dirty deeds on his behalf but Abhay's heart does not wish any harm to befall on Pia 😳 I hope Abhay does listen to his heart for once n live his life like any guy his age 😊 let's see where things go mansa...😕Abhay saved Pia n loved their nok jhok 😉 post tat. So u have given Pia's job to Abhay huh? 🤣 So now in addition to manage his work he has now turned detective? 😆yes my abhay here is an all-rounder,😆 I hope Abhay doesn defame Pia listening to tat crazy dad of his 😡 lets...seeLoved it Tora 👏glad u liked it😊 Please continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: .rumki.
gr8 update...wow abhay already fallen 4 Pia...what will happen in the party...I am very worried

thank u dear...hmm..lots will happen in the party..

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
beautiful tora. love the confused feelings of abhay. but i wonder what exactly made arjun kill his sister. it has t do something with her mom, but what, idk

glad u like it dishu..yup..there's a mystery surrounding abhay's mom..u'll see that soon

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Wonderful update Tora... i soo loved it. 👏glad u liked it tanzie😊
I think i havent commented on this for awhile but just to let you know I have read all the chapters.yup i'm seeing ur comment here after a longgg time😕..so glad u commented😊what a perfect clash of hatred and love. the complex helpless fatal attraction - you cant accept but you cant deny also.
If Chand wasnt there, Abhay would be ready to give in already... eagerly waiting for next part...superbly written 🤗thanx once again😊

Originally posted by: sukugeny
amazing...loved mall scene of abhiya..egrly waiting fr nxt part...wht abhay vl do to pia in party...nice amazing update tora...nxtwala jaldi se...plz...love u.

thanx dear..will pakka update by tomorrow😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
fab update.thank u😊jus don't lyk chand ,he is inciting hatred in abhay's mind.yes he is..Abhay's defenses crumbles down in front f pia.she rendered him speechless ven she told him he was stalking her. M sure abhay would get more jealous in jeh's party. hm..there's lots more than just jealousy that will happenThanx 4 pm

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Oops...scandals and party...what us abhay plan now...this Chand seems so lost in his own thts and is the bad guy...abhay has starting following piya...aahaan

yup scandals and party indeed...

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Awsm update.I'm curious to know what is gonna happen in the party

thank u...will update soon😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: koli97
lovely update😊wahooo Abhiya feel same both eachother😊...waiting 4 party😊

glad u liked it..will update soon😊

Originally posted by: DashingCuteJazz
Dear Your FF iS VERY FAVORITE ,i like the story very much ,waiting eagerly for jay party ,thanks for pm

It Is for you from me ,please accept it

awww...thank u sooo much dear..it means a lot..🤗

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Oh that was scary. Tora, I love the way you wrote the exchange between abhiya, you wrote it beautifully.
The end gives me creeps. Seriously.

oops..did i scare u?...hehe...and glad u liked it shreya😊

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
nice update Tora so next day is Jeh's party as well as Alisha's death anniversary n also Abhay was the witness of her murder glad he saved Pia but again he wants to destroy her what's her fault in all this mess ?

thanx dear..ya piya has no fault in all this and somewhere abhay knows it too...it's just that he's driven by hatred and chand adds fuel to the fire

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Awesome update

thank u..😊

Originally posted by: .tanu.
Awesome update Tora ⭐️ Abhay was following Piya? 😆 They say they hate each other but still care for each other. I loved Abhiya's conversation. So Abhay saw Alisha's murder and Chand blames him that he couldn't save her 😔 I wonder what will happen at the party. Cont asap 😊

thanx tanu..😊..yup abhiya share a love-hate relation...watch out for the party...lots coming up..😉

Originally posted by: bellaaa
nice update
wow abhay really cared for piya but show attittude huh
love dthe scene of abhiya cut
now what will happened in party?
cont soon

thanx beenish, glad u liked it😊..lots will happen in the party😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

KAB UPDATE KAR RAHI HO?

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: pkyekrox
WOW!! Lovely upd8!! So Abhay follo0wed Pia...and y is he behaving like Edward Cullen?! U know dward saved Bella and then drives her home but Pia didn't let him!!

Fab upd8!! Cont sooN!!
-Gauri

thanx gauri..glad u liked it!!😊lolz...i did not intend for the scene to be like twilight at alll..don't like them much..

Originally posted by: SheDevil
awesome update tora.I lke it.Abhiya do feel 4 each other but Abhay's hatred & Pia's anger jst push their feelings back & chand acts lke oil in Abhay the fire.He always initiate him 2 harm Pia.Plz contt I wanna c how Abhay will react 2 c jeh & Pia😳

thanx shrish...yup they are in attraction repulsion phase😆..hmm,jeh won't be the main focus in the party..but lots of things will happen..

Originally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia
Waiting for jay party dear

will update soon..

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Awesome updt tora yaar!!! Lol loved abhiya cpnvo most. They hate each other still cares for each other, just loving this story and ur awesome writing skills. Tora my exams are from 5th oct so I may not comment till 20th oct and I use cell so like button never works, so plz continue pming me ok. Update soon dear, gr8 job!!!

thanx romi...glad u like it.😊..aww don't worry dear..as i told u...comment whenever u get time😊..will send u pms don't worry..and all the best for ur exams😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: tara.singhania
Awww...i imagine what abhay n chand are planning?? I hope abhay realises the truth that haseena is alive before he commits some grave unforgivable mistake which takes him away from Piya...thnx 4d pm btw..

lets see how things proceed...

Originally posted by: mahi4ever
Awesome update tora, thanx dear
so abhay was following piya 😆
both can't control dem selves wen around each other,
chand's plan 😡
y do i feel its more dan jst Alisha's death for chand to hate dobrial family 😕 no it's just alisha's death dat angers chand..

tora y u din't pm me?? pls pm me wen ever u update oops i'm sooo sorry dear..must have missed u by mistake😕..will pakka pm from next time..promise😊