FF: Fate updated Chapter 11 Page 92 - Page 29

Amazingly written!
Pia..give my poor abhay a chance..hez so desperate..
Btful update...perfectly displayed every emotion..wish da clouds of betrayal to clear soon..

hope dir sesrion help pia to get back to abhay as he is guilty 4 past and desperate to bring her back in his life... hope they r together... may be this session make us to wat happens in abhiya past which rslt in dis situation... waiting 4 next update

Poor Abhiya.They r in so much pain.I hope everything becomes alright soon

It's a really sad depressing update

Nice Chapter..
Double treat ke liye thank you.. :)

what should i say...i have no words...you two are just amazing writers👏
the update was sad...it made me cry again n again😭😭 but i couldn't stop myself from praising you two again n again...simply fantastic work by both of you.
i feel now i am emotionally attached with this story...i can't wait to read more...abhiya's pain, love, yearning was so beautifully mentioned that i felt they are not any characters of story but they r real and i know them...kudos to both of you for such wonderful work.👏⭐️

i know whatever abhay done has really hurt pia but i want her to trust him one last time. you have beautifully n brilliantly described abhay's feeling here.
i would like to dedicate some lines from the song "still loving you" from abhay to pia:- (i know this is too much but i am really in love with your FF😆)

Time, it needs time
To win back your love again
I will be there, I will be there
Love, only love
Can bring back your love someday
I will be there, I will be there

I'll fight, babe, I'll fight
To win back your love again
I will be there, I will be there
Love, only love
Can break down the wall someday
I will be there, I will be there

If we'd go again
All the way from the start
I would try to change
The things that killed our love
Your pride has built a wall, so strong
That I can't get through
Is there really no chance
To start once again
I'm loving you

Try, baby try
To trust in my love again
I will be there, I will be there
Love, our love
Just shouldn't be thrown away
I will be there, I will be there

If we'd go again
All the way from the start
I would try to change
The things that killed our love
Yes, I've hurt your pride, and I know
What you've been through
You should give me a chance
This can't be the end
I'm still loving you
I'm still loving you, I need your love
I'm still loving you

link to the song if anybody wants to listen😆- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_UHeuY5iAuc

i think now i have really bored you now with my long comment😆😳

continue soon😊