Star-crossed Soulmates :) Ch 1 Updt pg 13

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Eyes wide and hands shaking, her knees were giving her away in confusion and fear. Still holding the report in her hands, she can't believe her eyes. Its not possible. No never. How could it be? She has never, ever even had kissed anyone, yet here it is. Something must have went wrong they probably made mistake while making the report. Misplaced report or confusion. yes that must be it. She will just go and inform them and everything will be fine.

Pia Dobriyal ran through the OPD and went to the reception. A kind faced sweet woman in her mid thirties gave the super model a smile of recognition and pleasure. She had met her before when Pia visited earlier and had found her to be a more amicable and pleasant person that usually does no go well with her super model image.

Receptionist- Yes Mam How can I help you?

Pia (trying to be calm)- I think there is something wrong in your report..I mean you must have given me wrong reports they can't be mine.

The receptionist frowned and looked at her file. It had her name all right. She looked at Pia again and said- But Mam it is your file.

Pia- Yeah I know but see the report inside cant be mine can you please check it and rectify for me.

She looked inside and understanding dawned on her. They are all the same. She thought. First have fun than give us the extra headache.

mam there is no mistakes look the report have your name on it too.

Pia- But this cnt happen please there must be some mistake I want to talk to my doctor now.

Receptionist- Mam please calm down. I can arrange an appoitment for you right now.

Pia- Yeah please do that.

One hour later she emerged from the doctors chamber the doctor's words still echoing in her head.

There are no mistakes Pia You are 3 Weeks pregnant.

She is still in denial because this is not possible.

What will she do? Will anyone believe her. Her family friends an what about her career?

Ok I know I never ever update my stories properly and neither do i have any idea what this is going to be an SS or FF all I know is I woke up with this idea and am just writing it down. If you wanna me to I'll do it if u don't which I will completely understand seeing how soon I update never mind😆 But do leave ur comments for this one.😊

Ch- 1 pg 13
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! Another story!! Congo.. 🥳
very interesting prologue snigs!!! 👍🏼 Ok i knw u update once in a blue moon,but i still want you to carry on!! 😉 😊 I think i hav said number of times bt wud like to repeate again tht i love ur writing! So plz dear..ofcourse u continue and try to update bit soon han.. 😳
Ok..nw am eagerly awaitng the first chappy..so plz continue n pm me wenever u update! 😊
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Superb concept yaar, I am loving it. Pls continue it. Take ur time but pls continue this one. Pls pls pls add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhamakedar 😆
entertainment shuru kia jaye
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one Snigs 😊 Could this be abt artificial insemination? 😕 Tats all I can think of unless Pia was drugged and somebody used that situation to their advantage.
Anyways story is different n I would love to read more on this. Please come up with CS n 1st chap soon na? 😃
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Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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wow!! Another story!! Congo.. 🥳
very interesting prologue snigs!!! 👍🏼 Ok i knw u update once in a blue moon,but i still want you to carry on!! 😉 😊 I think i hav said number of times bt wud like to repeate again tht i love ur writing! So plz dear..ofcourse u continue and try to update bit soon han.. 😳
Ok..nw am eagerly awaitng the first chappy..so plz continue n pm me wenever u update! 😊


😲 Indu eto taratari unres korli😆 Thanks re will continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept Snigs...😳

would love to read more..
but thoda jaldi update karna...😆
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Originally posted by: Rmuk

Superb concept yaar, I am loving it. Pls continue it. Take ur time but pls continue this one. Pls pls pls add me in ur pm list.
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Thanks Romita. i'll update soon the CS and do send me a buddy request it helps in sending pms too😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaargh I hate you Sngie!
Uff I hate waiting for your updates you better update alll of them soon especially this one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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5th story snigi 😲 brave girl 😉
nyc concept plz continue soon...plzzz

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