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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

nice starting...so u have started it where pia lost her memories in the show n was trying to find out the truth...good...because thats the point from where CVs started ruining the show...thanks for writing ff ...now we can have better story.

continue soon...n thanks for pm

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
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Me first me first

I think I know what happened😛 so how will Madam over active Brain come back???😉 This is cool & awesome. That hissing chanting and flame effects were brillinat. Continue. soonisssh😊

yeah I bet you know what happened😆Let's see how madam over active comes back😆

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

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awesum update sreya!! Brilliant!! 👏
bt i hav few qustns..! Like is pia d reincrnatn of metz?? Nd is the thngs dat happnd b4 she lst her memry, same as d show??

And i guess pia ws once again saved by abhay !! 😉
ths scene ws wondrfuly writtn!! ⭐️
once again fav start..😳

cntinue soon..thnx fr pm..

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice starting...so u have started it where pia lost her memories in the show n was trying to find out the truth...good...because thats the point from where CVs started ruining the show...thanks for writing ff ...now we can have better story.

continue soon...n thanks for pm

Thanks Anjali. I hope you like the next updates too😳

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Wowww AMAZING ff dear:-):-) SUPERB concept and MINDBLOWING update:-):-) loved it:-)

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

omg!!!! u hv updted d 1st chp.😃 i lik ur determination 2wards writing😆😃
so stry hs started frm piya's lost memory...i mean season 2...nice thought...
liked ur idea... kaash lib. mein abhay bhi hota😳😆😆😆

shubhaarambh...kuch meetha ho jaye😆😆
entertainment continue kiya jaye...🤣
in 1 wrd...❤️SUPERB❤️!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Congo for the new FF Shreya 🤗

The prolouge is very interesting... and i like the moment you have started the FF... the flame part was very good. loved it. continue soon 😊

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Shreya, wow awsome! I am totaly confused with prolouge...i am not getting anything!
But now coming to chappy...just awsome and lovely as u! GREAT WRK...I LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART...I THINK DEDECTIVE PIA IS GOING TO BE BACK!!
And sorry fr late reply!update soon.

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

shreya..i loved it...

it seems different from prologue..but ur first update did have

similarities 😆

waiting to read more...

continue soon..

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

nice start sreya yar...
while reading this all piyascene of reading newspaper reminding in my head...
so gud point from where u start...
where is my abhay yar...
may be next part he saved as usual piya hehehhehhehhe
brilliant update
looking forward to it...
cont soon

thksss 4 pm me yar

Edited by bellaaa - 13 years ago