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Chapter 5

Pandher, 1858:

"A minor glitch, but overall successful," was all Reina would tell Pia in the morning, no matter how Pia worded her questions regarding Reina's detour into the present. "Besides," said Reina, giving her a trunk of clothes and other things Pia would need, "You have enough on your plate with the past. I wouldn't want you to break your head worrying about the present as well. Besides, your family will hear the news in a short while anyway, so there's no worry there."

Pia and Reina carried the heavy trunk between them as they walked along to the palace grounds. All the while, Reina kept up a steady stream of encouragement and advice.

"Okay-and this is just a friendly advice- try not to get too...attached to anyone from the past. I mean,try not to..fall in love with anyone from here. Because-" and here, for the first time, Pia heard Reina's voice shake, " That sometimes is the worst thing that could happen, given that you would never be able to be united with your love. You realize that, don't you?"

Pia looked at Reina curiously. Why did she seem suddenly nervous and no longer sure of herself? Deciding not to ask, she merely nodded. Reina relaxed at once, her bright smile reappeared.

" Here we are," said Reina, as they reached the gates. "I'm leaving you once we reach the king. We'll meet next week, all right?" she said, noting the disappointed look on Pia's face.

After the king officially designated Pia as Maithali's attendant, Maithali tugged at her sleeve. Pia looked at her in surprise. She jerked her head towards the exit.

Maithali set off briskly, while Pia followed after a pause. She led Pia to the gardens of the palace, and then slowed down so she and Pia were on the same level.

Pia stared. Artistically cut hedges circled the lush lawns, and flowers of every hue adorned the sides. She had never seen something that was so beautiful yet forbidding in a strange way. They walked on in silence. Maithali broke the silence first. "So, is it your nature to remain silent or are you too shy to speak?" she asked Pia. "Pia looked at her her in shock. "No, actually- I thought you were angry at you," she said, fumbling over the words. Pia wondered if Maithali was aware of how awe-inspiring she was.

"My anger was not directed at you," said Maithali. "It was not your fault; it was my father's whim."

Pia wondered if Maithali and her father were not on the best terms. "Is it true you are'widely travelled?" said Maithali. "Yes, actually, I spent a while in France and England," replied Pia. Stick to the truth as much as possible, she thought. "I see," said Maithali. "And you like to read?"

Pia replied in the affirmative, and Maithali smiled at her, a dazzling smile that lightened up her entire face. "Why- if I may ask, do you cover your face?" she asked. " I-er- my face got disfigured in an accident," replied Pia, using the subterfuge suggested by Reina. Maithali looked sympathetic. "What about your family?"

"My aunt is the only bit of the family I have left," said Pia, suppressing a pang thinking of Misha.

"I see..well, we'll talk of other things now. For example, you need to take a tour of the entire palace," said Maithali, with one of her bright smiles.

It was evening by the time Maithali had finished giving Pia an entire tour of the palace, and they were now sitting in the Princess' room.

"Tell me, Piyali," said Maithali, as Pia combed out her hair, " Do you have many friends?" Pia paused. "Not- not many," replied Pia in a small voice. "A loner?" teased Maithali lightly. "No, I just- " Pia began, and then stopped abruptly.

"I don't have many friends either," said Maithali. "A few, you know, the ones from my childhood...I'll introduce them to you tomorrow." Maithali stopped speaking, as wind howled around the windows, and the curtains came undone. A storm was breaking out. Pia moved swiftly towards them, tying them back in place.

Maithali's next question caught her by surprise.

"What about a lover?"

Pia whirled around, thankful for the veil that kept her mouth covered.

"I - no- I don't have any," she managed to choke out. Don't think of Abhay, don't think of him, she chanted in her head.

"Oh come on, tell me the truth," said Maithali.

"Oh that is- I mean to say- " Pia fumbled for words. "You do!" exclaimed Maithali, standing up. "Come now, tell me the truth, I won't tell everyone!" It was a command, not a request.

Stick to the truth as much as you can, thought Pia. "I- not really," she said in a small voice. Maithali looked curious. "I mean," continued Pia, "I loved him- but he won't have me." There was a silence in the room, broken only by the thunder rumbling across the room.

"Was he high born?" said Maithali at last. Pia suppressed a wry smile thinking of the Raichands. "Yes," she said. "He is."

"That would explain a few things, I suppose," said Maithali. "High-borns usually have access to a large number of people. It is possible that-" she broke off mid-way and asked, "Why did you fall for him anyway?"

"I don't know," Pia whispered back, feeling close to tears. "I just- get the feeling of a connection between us. I lost my memories of the past year, so all I have are some hazy memories...He says we were never-meant to be," she said at last, blinking back a tear.

Pia turned away from Maithali, feeling that this was altogether too much for her.

"I'm sorry," said Maithali at last. "I was...curious, that is all...You had best forget him, Piyali. Perhaps you will find the man of your dreams in someone else...No one can fight their destiny , you know," she said, her voice quiet in the room.

They stood in silence for a few seconds, before Maithali dismissed Pia, saying she needed rest.

Pia stood in the room she had. It wasn't even half as opulent as Maithali's but it had a comfortable bed, and the fabrics were rather nice, in Pia's view.

But Pia wasn't sleepy.

She stood at at the window, watching the forest around her, watching the rain fall in huge drops that pelted the ground. This was the same place, the very same place where she'd gone. She didn't know if she regretted it or not. On the upside, Abhay wasn't here to torture her. On the flipside, Abhay wasn't there...Nor was anyone she knew. She still felt that Reina reminded her of someone...As if she'd seen those features somewhere.

A flash of lightning. Pia froze, certain she had been mistaken. No, it could not have been him, it was her mind playing tricks on her...

She had to be sure.

Moments later, she was hurrying down the staircases as quietly as possible, thankful for the torches that provided a glow around the place. She moved out of the palace into the gardens, and saw a dark figure standing quite still.

The figure seemed to realise she was there, for it suddenly turned. And as the lightning flashed again, Pia's shocked eyes looked into the steel-grey eyes of Abhay.

It wan't an illusion. He'd really come here-followed her into the past, like the nighmare he was.


^ do leave comments... Was it long enough?😕

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow shreya. that's awesome writing dear. and pia coming face to face with abhay is icing on the cake.
Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maithli and Pia talk was awesome

Pia coming face to face to Abhay! waiting for her reaction
😊
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
😊
Edited by Abhiya_Gunner - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update ⭐️ liked maithali n pia's convo n she said she'll introduce her childhood friends so will siddharth n abhayendra enter in next part? now abhay knew pia's gone france n he couldn't track her so im confused if it was abhay or abhayendra.
Edited by .tanu. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Tat was brilliant piece of writing Shreya 👏 Loved it a lot. Esp Metz n Pia's convo. So the Piyali in the beginning was indeed Pia then? 😲 Did she see Abhay or Abhayendra? 😕 Yaar u stopped it at a cliffhanger. Please continue soon.

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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That was a really bad place to stop hun...did he really come back in past...????? How could he come back in past????? And if hez back den what abt real abhayendra...???
PLzzz update soon...plzzz...ekdam bada wala plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
I really hope it is Abhay
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was amazing shreya👏 Poor abhay har taraf se bura haal hoga🤣 aur pia ka river banana bi start hoga🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update!!👏👏
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long??!! Shreya it was a small one!!! 😛

well again a totally remarkable update!!! 👏
pia-metz convo was interesting and showed many facets of metz's charactr!!! Loved reading it!!!⭐️ 👍🏼 😳
hm..reina is becming mre mysterious wth each update!!! Who is she actually? 😕 And watevr she said to pia ws full of mystery n ironical as well!!! Is she pia's past?? 😕 i knw anthr random guess!! 😆
WOW!!! Pia saw..bt whm?? I suppose its abhayendra.,nt abhay!! Ryt?
.and ya m very much enjoying dis suspence!! 😉
cntinue asap..take cre..Dear..and thnx for pm..😳
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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