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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SheDevil

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Nice update.So Abhay is in romantic mood & all he can c is his Pia.Oh Alina is all J & Pia is confused.Lets c wht happen nxt.Plz cont😳</font>


thanx for liking it Shrish 😊 will be posting the nxt update in few mins 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyFanSuku

Very nice up date thanks for pm


thanx 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

sayu really nice update
loved the way abhay behave in morning thinking of piya
nice song yar
alina really pissed off abhay
so vamp vs wolfy fight starting soon
so sweet abhay steal piya photo and cell num too
well done abhay
cont soon


lol ! Abhay became a professional theif in Piya's chakkar 😆 say congo shongo to him 😉 thanx for liking it dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh

very nice update..abhay is falling in .love thanks 4 pm.continue soon.

yup... Abhay is falling in love 😳 thanx for liking 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk


Wow awesome update sayu yaar, seriously from beggining till end everything was perfectly written. Just loved it dear. Amazing descriptions of nature, abhay playing guiter and dreaming of piya. Stupid alina hamesha pareshan karti hai ufff. So sid ki entry hogayi, I am waiting to know why piya hates him. Next part mein ho sake toh thora abhiya dena. This ff is going gr8 and becoming more and more interesting now. I am waiting to know what will hapoen next. Plz continue when u can dear, studies comes first ok no hurry. Gr8 work!!!!!


lol Romi 😆 nowadays m seeing everytime u r increasing ur buttering 😆 Irada kya hai vai ?? 😉 lol ! Jokes apart ! Thanx for liking it 😊 m glad that u liked it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanx 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Wow

I loved it
Awesome update
Loved the dreaming scene to
Is Alina n her family werewolves in here
Thanks for pm


thanx for liking it 😊 umm...u will get to know soon 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

<font color="#006600" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Superb update😃jst loved it ,</font>

<font color="#006600" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">abhay's coffee scene was awesome😆 n</font>
<font color="#006600" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">i think alina is werewolf</font>
<font color="#006600" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">n da 3rd piece is with abhay's family😳</font>


thanx 😳 m glad that u liked it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Rose--

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lol lol 😆 ROFL 🤣
m updating in 10 mins dear 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update 18


Piya was thinking deep while roaming around in her room . Her heart & brain seem to get involved in a battle , her heart is saying something and her brain is saying something else . She is so much puzzled whom to listen , whom to reject . And between all these that Siddharth ! Damn ! Why did he come here ? His every thought sets Piya's tip to toe on fire of anger ! Piya remembers he was seating there making such an innocent face as if no one knows his true colour ! And that werewolves theory ? Piya did not get surprised at all hearing it . She knew it , she knew it very well that Siddharth can never bring a good news , as if he has taken the duty to convey the bad newses only ! Though Piya hardly believes on that . She knew very well believing him will be just making fun of herself ! Goddd ! When will he go from here ? Piya was becoming restless suddenly then her phone rings up which added another colour to her annoyance .
"Who the hell it is !" she murmers in low tone and picks up the phone . An unknown number is being displayed on screen . Who it can be ? Piya accepts the call and says "hello" a little hesitantly . The other side remains silent for a while making Piya feeling a little bit curious . Piya asks again " Hello ! Who is it ?"
Now a familier voice answers from other side "He-he-he-hello !"
The voice is so similer to her ! Is it Abhay ? But why is he talking in such weird manner ? A little laughter gets painted on her face , she asks back in a little playful tone " Hello Abhay ! Do you stammer everytime while you talk in phone ?"
This was enough to make Abhay feeling embarassed ! Gosh ! Really ! Why did he stammer ? In excitement or in nervousness ? And the most embarassing thing is she noticed it too ! Abhay tries to be a little bit normal " No , not like that !"
Piya smiles again " Ok ! So tell why did you call ?"
Abhay feels a bit nervous again , what will he tell now ? He hesitantly asks " yest night you reached home safely ?" he tries his best that it does not sound odd .
Piya felt the care , the concern mixed up with this simple question . She gently replies " Ofcourse I did . If weren't how could I talk to you now ?" Piya felt amazed realizing the fact that her annoyance , her anger...all what she was feeling a little before just disappeared ! Infact to be honest she is feeling good to talk to Abhay .
Abhay asks back " Then why didn't you come to college today ? I searched for you so long , but just couldn't find you ?"
" What ? You were searching me ? You had any work with me ?" Piya feels a little bit surprized to learn Abhay was searching for her !
Abhay feels embarassed again . What did he say ? It seems like today he does not have any control on what he is saying ! He tries to manage " No , not any work ...actually wanted to ...leave it . Why didn't you come ? You are ok ?"
"Yup ! I am fine . Actually I was feeling hell sleepy ! Remember you slept so deep & didn't let me sleep with your snoaring !" Piya answers in fake anger .
" What ? I do snoar ?" Abhay was hell shocked !
" Ha ha ha ! Not at all ! You are such an idiot ! Why are you taking so seriously ?? I am just joking !" Piya answers while laughing loud .
"Ohh..." Abhay just keeps hearing to her laughter silently . How beautiful its sounding to his ears , as if a bird is chirping with great joy ! Abhay is really missing the glance of her smiling face . He wish he would have talking to her face to face right now instead of phone , atleast he could manage to get her glimpses ! Abhay sighes .
"What happened ? Now why are you so silent ?" Piya enquires from other side stopping her laughter .
but before Abhay could answer , someone from behind called " Maithili !"
Piya turns back to find out who it was and finding Siddharth in her room her mood got spoilt again ! The smile , the enjoyment she was having in chatting with Abhay all just took a second to wash away ! "I am busy right now . Will call you back later" Piya says to Abhay in a cold voice and cuts the call without letting Abhay to speak anymore .
Piya looks up to Siddharth who was standing near the door with a clear plead to talk to her . Piya stands up and moves towards the window . Siddharth calls her again " Maithili !please li..."
Piya cuts in between " Don't call me by that name ! Maithili ? Who is she ? She died long 25 years ago ! Or to be presice you killed her for your evil motives ! Maithili doesn't exist anymore Siddharth ! If you really want to talk , you have to talk to Piya ! Piya Dobriyal !"
Siddharth was hell shocked by such welcome . The shock , the pain was clearly written on his face . He gasps in surprise " What did you say Maithili ? I ? I killed you ? "
Now Piya really feels hell irritated . " Again ! How dare you to call me by that name when I am forbidding you to do so ? Or actually you just don't care what I want or I don't want . You will do only what you want ! You never cared for me & will never care for me in future and I know that very well . Why are you irritating me so much Sid ! Can't you leave me alone ?" Piya stops .
" I did Maithili " Siddharth replies " I left you alone for long 25 years . And how much I care for you ? You know it very well Maithili , but still you are denying . If I had to irritate you I could have done so earlier , but you see I came now . Because...because I want to say something...every person get a second chance to compensate their mistakes . Why I will not Maithili ? Why can't you give me a second chance just by listening to me ?"
"So I was right . I knew it very well that you are not coming to help Dad in his mission . All these are just your excuses ! Actually you just wanted to reach to me ! How cheap you are !" the anger , the hatred can be clearly felt from her voice .
" No Maithili ! You are wrong ! You are still wrong just like you were 25 years ago . Its true that I wanted to talk to you . I desperately want to talk to you ! But that doesn't mean I am cheating Mr. Dobriyal . All the information I supplied him are true to my knowledge . But ya , those are not my original aim behind coming here . My original motive always has been to talk to you , or to be exact to tell you something which you really need to know !" Siddharth stops .
" Oh really ?? Which I really need to know ? Now I have to learn from you what I need to know and what I don't need to ? Sorry... I am not interested . You may leave now ." Piya almost shouts .
" No Maithili , I will not . Untill you listen to me , I will not go anywhere ." Siddharth seems to be hard on his words .
Piya's annoyance , anger was increasing with his each coming speech . She takes her car's key and answers " Fine ! Then I am leaving !" and she was just about to leave suddenly Siddharth's one sentence stopped her . He said " Its regarding Abhendra Maithili !"
" Abhendra ?" Piya turns to him in surprise .
" The only thing I wanted to tell you , the only motive behind my coming here is to just tell you that Abhendra is back !" Siddharth utters every word clearly and boldly making Piya freeze in surprise !


In Raichand House

Abhay keeps staring at the phone for sometime . It was so nice to talk her ! His heart filled up with joy , he himself does not know why is he feeling so much happy after talking to her . He was hell nervous while calling her thinking what will he talk about ,but everything went on so nicely . Her voice sounds so beautiful in phone too ! And her smile ? Abhay still can hear that deep in his heart . Everything was going on so nicely , he wish if the chatting could go much longer ! Abhay sighes , no , that didn't happen ... Piya cut the call so soon ! Sudenly he remembers something and he really becomes so confused ! Piya was talking with him so nicely , it seemed like she was enjoying the chat session , then why did she cut the call so sudden ? Perhaps someone called her . But...the man did not call Piya , he called...he called... Yes ! He called Maithili !!! Maithili !! The name thats haunting him from so long he never imagined he will get to hear this name in a phone talk with Piya ! Does Piya has connection with that ? Yes , thats why yest night Piya was shocked when she heard this name from him . But why did not she told him that she is familier with this name ? Or...may be this is her name ? Did the man called her by this name ? Ofcourse he called her , thats why she became "busy" all of a sudden . Abhay starts to roam around throughout his room . Why ? Why its so much hard to understand her ? Whenever Abhay starts to think that he is getting to know her , everytime this girl proves him wrong ! Everytime Abhay feels how unknown she is to him ! He is just feeling to go to her and ask her about this right now ! But that will look odd . But he will ofcourse talk to her tomorrow . He seats on the sofa and starts to think deep if he himself can solve this puzzle .

Alina comes in with a cup of tea in hand and serves that to him . Abhay looks up to her confusingly but before Abhay could ask her something she herself answered " Mom sent it for you . "
Abhay takes the cup silently . Alina seats there beside him on sofa and asks " You had to make an important call , you did ? Finished your important work ?"
Abhay just answers " Ya..."
Alina asks " So are you coming to hall now ?"
Abhay finishes the tea , keeps the glass on table and answers in a low , lost tone " No , I am not in mood . You go " and saying this he comes out to balcony .
Alina keeps gazing at him for sometime , a drop of tears rolled down by her cheek . Now Abhay has started to lie to her ! She herself heard the whole phone conversation standing beside the door & she knows Abhay did not do any important call . He was talking to Piya ! " how are you " or "why didn't you come college today" are obviously not "Important" talks . Alina heaves a deep sigh and leaves from there .
Seeing Alina coming down to hall Misha chirps again " Hey Vabhiji ! See you are looking sooo pretty here !" she says holding a picture . Alina remains silent in answer , infact she is not even keen to look up to the picture . Misha notices her sudden mood change and asks " hey ! What happened ?"
Alina looks up to her , keeps staring at her for sometime , perhaps she is thinking she should tell Misha about it or not ?
Finally she speaks up in low tone " Abhay was talking to Piya !"
"Piya ?" Misha looks up " what did she say ? Was bro asking her to come here ? That would be so great ! Isn't it ? We all will watch the pics together ! What Piya answered ? Is she coming ?" Misha suddenly seems to get very much happy !
Alina sighes " I don't know & I am leaving , I am not feeling well " saying this she leaves from there before Misha makes out whats she saying .


Somewhere deep inside the jungle

The house is situated almost at the middle of the deep jungle . An old , broken , abandoned house . The jungle is there really deep , even sun rays also fails to enter there at day time . As its already night , its just impossible for the feeble moon light to lighten up the house . Standing amidst this darkness , the house became almost invisible as if its wishing to hide itself in cover of mysteries . The interior of the house too very much dark , only some feeble rays of light coming from the ignited candles scattered here and there have made the darkness a little lighter . 5-6 people were standing in that dark room while a hooded man was seating in a throne type chair in the most dark spot of the room . Another man enters the room and lowering his head reports the hooded man " No , my Lord ! He was so fast ! We lost him !"
The hooded man on the thrown stands up in excitement and shouts " Shame on you ! You all are just shameless ! You were so many and he was alone ! Still you couldn't catch him ! " He kicks one of the candle stand in anger . The stand falls making a sound just too much to bear inbetween the strange silence & all the candles of the stand gets extinguished .
One of the standing men says in low tone " Yes my Lord , we are ashamed of ourself . But trust us , we tried hard to catch him but he escaped . He was faster than even storm !"
"Youuu..." suddenly the hooded man stops , perhaps he is trying to controll his anger . After a little pause he started in a normal tone " Ok , leave it . How long will he run ? One day we surely will be able to catch him . But remember ! That day must come before those bloody deads find out the potion !"
The standing men do not say anything , they just keeps listening silently to their leader . The hooded man says to himself in a low tone " Siddharth Mehra ! You think yourself very much smart ! But you don't know its only your stupidity that will help us to identify you whole clan "
now the man turns to the standing men and asks in a bold voice " what about the other vampires ? Who are accompanying Siddharth ? You found them ?"
The men remains silent as before . The hooded man becomes restless . He asks again" what happened ? Can't you hear what am I asking ?"
One of the men now replied " sorry my Lord , but we couldn't find those vampires too . This time they came with full preparation and hid themselves so well that its being really tough to find them out . But don't worry my Lord , we will find them soon ."
"When ?? After those Vampires spot us ?? You know everytime when we shape shift to wolves , everytime when we change form to our true face the vampires can spot us ? It will not be difficult for them to spot us , but its being difficult to you all to spot them ! Really pathetic !"
The standing men could not gather the currage to say something as it was really their fault . They silently keeps waiting for their leader's order .
Their leader too was silent surprisingly , most probably he was planning something in his mind . He speaks up " Listen , find out Siddharth . He is the only clue we have . Find out him right now , but don't try to catch him . Let him go wherever he wants & you all just follow him . I am damn sure he will try to contact his companions . This is the only way currently we have to find them out . "
The standing men replies " Ok my Lord " and then left the room silently .


Dinner time in Khurana House

Alina & Jeh were having their dinner as usual , but today the atmosphere is different somewhere . Everyday Alina used to talk non stop and Jeh used to cherish his sister's chirping silently , but today ? Today Alina is surprisingly silent . Jeh notices she is not even eating properly . Jeh asks her " Hey Sis ! You seem to be a little off mood today ? What happened ?"
Alina looks up to her brother , wanted to say something but ...she replies " Nothing bro ."
Her tone made it very clear that she is upset . Jeh asks again " No , you don't want to tell me its ok , but don't say nothing happened . I know my sister very well . Something somewhere is wrong today . See you didn't have your dinner propely ! Whah happened ?"
Alina looks up to her brother who is staring at her with great concern . She lost her mother early in childhood . Its her brother who has been everything for her . Its really tough for her to hide anything from her brother . She simply gives up and decides to tell the truth .
She hesitates " Actually bro...today I heard Abhay was talking to Piya..."
"So ?" Jeh feels a little bit surprised , he never imagined this can be the reason of his sister's sadness .
Alina answers " But when I asked , he denied Bro ! He said he was making some important call !" Alina's voice gets choaked in tears .
Jeh tries to console her "Relax Sis ! May be Abhay was talking about something important to Piya ?"
Alina tried to answer but suddenly she stops . No ! No result in saying all these ! No one will understand her fear , her pain . No one will understand her . She stands up & leaves from there even without completing her dinner . Jeh keeps staring at her way for sometime , then he too leaves for his room leaving his plate incomplete . Though he tried to console Alina , but his face was clearly saying this news was not any cause of pleasure for him too .



In Dobriyal Mansion

Its now almost midnight . Piya was seating at the terrace alone and was crying just like a baby cries when he/she breaks his/her toys unknowingly . Yes , Piya was crying ! She was not crying on her fate , she was crying on her stupidity ! How stupid , how foolish she was ! Without knowing the truth she assumed everything in her own way & when truth knocked the door , her every assumpsions failed so miserably that she has no other way than just crying ! " He was just in front of me ! So close to me !" she murmers " still I didn't recognise him ?" Drops of blood were flowing from her two eyes stating her pain " How dare I ! How dare I to claim I love him ! If I had loved him truely couldn't I recognise him ! Why I needed someone else to tell me who is he ? Why ????" Piya looks at her phone , starts to search a particular number in the call log . She smiles a little when she found the number , but her finger refused to press the green button . Someone inside her saying her " Its too late Piya ! Everything is finished ! What do you have to tell him ?" Piya's smile fades off . True . Its true . Everything is finished even before starting ! What will Piya tell him now ? Infact why only now ? If she had known the truth before could she tell him that time too ? What to tell ? How to tell ? Would he ever believed her ? No ! He would have thought she has gone crazy ! He would have laughed on her ! Impossible ! Its just impossible to set everything in place now . Perhaps she should not try even ! Present is all ruined , no chance to get a perfect future . Better to get lost in past . The past which gives her smile , the past she spent with her most beloved person , the past which was perfect ! Piya wipes of her tears gently , closes her eyes and gets lost in the memory of the most beautiful 5 years of her life .


Hey friends a biiig sorry for delaying the update so much . I know I kept you all waiting for so many days and then gave a short update , thats also not good in quality . I am extremely sorry for this . Actually nowadays am too much busy due to studies . My day starts with tution , then colg , then evening ko my own study & labfile likhna . I get totally exhausted and feel so much tired just don't feel to write after that . Still tried to write everynight a little bit and I myself can feel it didn't turn good . I am really sorry for that & promise in next update I will try to improve it 😊 leave your precious comments after reading friends & if u liked it plz don forget to hit like button 😊.

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