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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: ajwa.ali
update was awesum...
continue soon...

thanx for liking it dear 😊
will update tomorrow 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
Just mind-bowling story ,thanks for pm ,i like its concept so much ,it is very unique

thanx for liking it so much 😳

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

I m dancing:-) you r backkk:-D yaiii;-) plz we want a very long update ok,.. Waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#774

up date dear we are waiting for it

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: Saayaniz

wao Romi !!!! thanx a lot for this long lovely comment 😊
m so happy that u liked it so much 😳
yup...Abhiya has become friends now...soon this friendship will turn to romance too 😳 lolz...ya...to Piya Abhay is more handsome than Ranbir Kapoor to main kya karu 🤣 ????
M an amazing writter 😲 ???? Aur kitna buttering karegi yaar ??? 😆 waise itna buttering kar kyu rahi hai 😕 ????

Piya toh piya mujhe bhi abhay zyada handsome lagta hai Ranbir kapoor se. Teri fyada utana hai, intelligence.ki so buttering u 😉 Lol okk jokes apart truly speaking what I feel like, I love ur writings and really u are a amazing writer, chalo aab no buttering update now asap.

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670134

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Posted: 13 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: --Rose--
I m dancing:-) you r backkk:-D yaiii;-) plz we want a very long update ok,.. Waiting...

OMG !!! u r dancing ??? thats gr8 ! keep waiting for a lil time more . I will update just after returning from clg 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
up date dear we are waiting for it

wait for just a lil more . m in clg now . I will update just after returning from clg 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Piya toh piya mujhe bhi abhay zyada handsome lagta hai Ranbir kapoor se. Teri fyada utana hai, intelligence.ki so buttering u 😉 Lol okk jokes apart truly speaking what I feel like, I love ur writings and really u are a amazing writer, chalo aab no buttering update now asap.

lolz me bechari bacchi ka aur kya faida uthayegi 🤣 wait for a lil more . Will update hopefully after returning from clg 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#779

UPDATE 16 part A

In RAICHAND HOUSE

All the lights are switched off , everyone is in deep sleep , except an worried mother , Haseena Raichand . Haseena is walking throughout the hall with a worried expression written on her face . Various kind of dreadful thoughts are coming in her mind which are threating this mother's heart more . She is just amazed how could Chand & Misha went to sleep when they clearly watched that till 2am of night Abhay did not comeback ? Chand was angry thinking that Abhay must be busy in his bike racing . He commented some "hopeless" , "irresponsible" type words and then went to bed quiet angrily . Haseena too at first thought that Abhay must be lost in his bike racing . But just a little before she remembered that Abhay did not go out today with his bike . He took the car , because he went to college with Misha . & This Misha ! She came back with the car even without thinking how her brother will comeback ! Just too much ! Haseena is just fade up with this girl ! Haseena shakes her head in annoyance , this is not time to think on Misha . The big question is where is Abhay ? She tries to call her son again , but again that non reachable messege dissapoints her . She seats on a sofa worriedly . Still ! Still not reachable ! Where he can be ? Haseena is now sure Abhay got trapped in some situation , otherwise it never happened that Abhay knew he will be late and still did not inform his mother . No , Abhay is not that much irresponsible . & a little before Alina's call increased her worry much more . Alina told her that she was trying his number from evening , but from then it was coming not reachable . Haseena stands up again in excitation . From evening Abhay got disappeared ! Where he may go ? Everyday after college or office he visits home once and then he leaves for his evening plans . But today he did not come back after college too ! She just hopes her son is fine wherever he is ! Suddenly a horrible idea strikes her mind . Is it possible that Abhay could not come out of college ??? Is it possible that he got trapped in college & at the time of college closing he got locked inside & everyone forgot him ??? Haseena starts to roam around again...yes , this is quiet possible . She rushes to upstairs . When she reached her room , she finds Chand is in deep sleep , she checked in Misha's room too . Misha is sleeping deep holding her teddies tight . Haseena heaves a deep sigh . No chance to get help from them . Only one person will be eager to help her . Haseena comes back to her room , grabs the car's key and leaves for Khurana House .

IN THE OLD LIBRARY

Piya is totally at a pause . Her brain has stopped working , her sixth sense is saying her ears are betraying her . She is totally stunned by the word " Mathili !" !
"Maithili !" her own name ! Still sounded so strange a little before ! She used to be known by this name long ago...in long past when she used to be a human , when she used to live a beautiful life . It was indeed a time long before...long 25 years...since 25 years no one called her by this name . This name left her when she entered this dark life . It was obvious . Maithili had to die , if Piya had to born . Piya & Maithili can never exist together . She had to chose being Piya , Maithili got lost in the darkness of Piya's life long 25 years ago . & just now Abhay called her by this name ??? She is really surprised . How did Abhay get to know about her past name ? Or he knows about her past life too ?? But hows it possible ? Every thought is puzzling her more & more . Piya stammers in excitement "Wha-wha-what did you call me ?"
Abhay looks back to Piya . Seeing her questioning eyes he gets confused , he replies " You ? I didn't call you !"
Then ? Piya's confusion increases a step more . " then whom did you call ? Do you know anyone named Maithili ?" she asks in a confusing tone .
Abhay heaves a deap sigh " No , I don't know any Maithili . Till now in my life I never came to this name . But she is haunting me in my dreams from early in my childhood . The same dream I keep seeing again and again and everytime the dream ends with her name ." Abhay stops . Perhaps he started to think something . What ? He is seeing her dreams from childhood ? What is he saying ? Piya's surprize was increasing more and more . How is this possible ? She feels an intense curiosity developing within her to know the truth . She softly asks "Can I know exactly what you see in your dream ?"
Abhay turns back to her , gives her a pale smile . Ofcourse she can know . What type of secret he would have in a dream that he will not like to tell it ? Specially a dream which is still an unsolved puzzle for him ? Abhay looks up to Piya , she is eagerly staring at him . Abhay starts "I myself don't know when I first saw this dream . Mom says I was just of the age of 5 years when first time I screamed this name in sleep . Maithili ! An unknown name , but still so familiar to me ." Abhay stops .

Edited by Saayaniz - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part B

Piya does not say anything , she is totally absorped in his speech . Abhay resumes " this dream is really very much odd compared to any natural dream . I see a deep dark jungle . A boy and a girl talking in between there . Everything appears so hazy in my dream . I can't see their faces . But perhaps that girl was Maithili . I don't know who the boy is ...but everytime... I see the dream from the boy's point of vision , as if...as if I myself is that boy standing there . But how is it possible ? I don't know . But mentally... I am very much attached to that boy . At the end the girl leaves him forever . Trust me at that point...at that point I can feel his pain , I can feel how much heartbroken he is , as if I myself having those feelings in my heart . I know you must be thinking I have gone crazy , but seriously this is exactly how I feel everytime . You wanted to know so I told you ." finally Abhay stops . He is breathing heavy , at the end his voice sounded choaked , as if he justnow felt all those feelings once again . Piya maintains silence ,what to say ? She herself has become speechless . The same question running in her mind too . The same question "How is it possible ?" The scene Abhay narrated is so much similar to her last meeting with Abhendra . But the question is why Abhay is having glimpse of that in his dream ? Her heart answering her a very easy answer , but that answer is just so much absurd that her brain is rejecting its possibility every time . Seeing her totally silent Abhay feels a little bit surprised . Just now she wanted to know all these with such a great curiosity and now ...when he has told everything she is so silent ? Why ? Did she get tensed hearing all these ? How much Abhay has known her she is very soft hearted and sensitive person . May be hearing about his strange dream she got disturbed ? Abhay keeps his one hand on her hand and says in a gentle voice " Hey ! What happened ? Are you tensed ? Leave it yaar ! Nowadays I myself don't get tensed because of it...then why should you ? Don't get tensed , I am not having any serious problem due to this dream . "
Piya looks up to him with a puzzled look . She has become so puzzled that she doesn't have the voice to just assure him that she is fine . Piya notices Abhay's hand on her hand , she holds it for sometime and then was to say something suddenly then a hard sound of opening the door brings both of them back to earth . The college peon has opened the door and Haseena & Alina are standing behind him . The peon is looking so sleepy , no doubt Haseena & Alina had pulled him from bed to open the door . Seeing Abhay fine , Haseena heaves a sigh of releif . She comes to Abhay running "Are you ok ?" was her first question . But surprisingly Alina was not looking so much excited like Haseena . She was silently noticing Piya . She too was here with Abhay ! Don't know why but Alina is having a feeling that their arrival did not make Piya happy . Is it just her imagination or...? God knows ! Now Haseena too notices Piya .
"Oh God ! You too were here ? Just see how much irresponsible they are ! They locked two persons ! How can they lock any room without checking it well ?" she sounded really excited .
Piya tries to make her cool down "Actually Aunty I think he didn't notice us well . And to be exact its our fault too that after closing time we were here , so..."
Haseena now asks in a gentle tone " Ya ...leave it . Come , we will drop you home . "
Alina was standing silent till now , now she speaks out " I think Piya has brought her own car and she can go alone . Isn't it ?"
Piya feels a little bit embarased , but she supposrts her " Ya , sure . I have my own car . You don't worry Aunty " she replies to Haseena .
But Abhay was not satisfied at all , its so late at night , how can she take the risk to go alone ? He asks her again " Are you sure you can go alone ?"
Now Alina really seems to get irritated . She interrupts in between " Abhay ! She told she can go alone , then why are you asking her again and again ? Let her go how she wants . Its so late now , lets call it a night . Bye Piya . Good night ." she grabs Abhay's one hand and drags him from there . Haseena follows them silently .

Its now almost 4 am in morning . Abhay is lying on his bed totally awake , lost in deep thoughts perhaps . Hmm...no sign of sleepyness . Abhay once looks at the clock and then comes to the balcony slowly . Night is on its way to end , dawn will set in just a little later , everything seems to be so beautiful now . Abhay takes a deep breath , perhaps today everything is appearing beautiful to him because he indeed is very much happy . Abhay smiles in his mind . Yesterday at this time he was busy in thoughts how to escape from her and today ? Today he is eagerly waiting when will he meet her again . In just 24 hours everything has changed & the reason is Piya . "Piya !" Abhay utters slowly . Suddenly this name seems to sound so beautiful to him , Abhay gives a little pause to his thoughts , only name ? Her every attire is so beautiful ! The way she walks , the way she smiles , the way she talks...everything is as unique as her . Abhay's smile gets broaden up a little remembering how Piya sorted out everything so easily . & moreover when she got to know about her dream , she also got tensed .

Edited by Saayaniz - 13 years ago