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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MyAngelAbhay


Chanu I didn post it only yaar ๐Ÿ˜†It was on my desktop, still is ๐Ÿ˜‰In fact that was the only story I was satisfied abt coz for once in my life I had come up with a good story. But I didn continue it. I had written its prologue n plot outline, tats it. Will share the prologue if u want ๐Ÿ˜†


can u write da same story wid Abhiya like just edit da char names! ๐Ÿ˜›
My hands are already full with FF n SS. But I'll share the prologue below:

All this while, I was forced to live the life of a monster. A monster who knew nothing about love, compassion, or humanity. I was born a killer. One who killed her own mother on birth. I was taught to perceive myself to be far more superior to the mortals who inhabited the most part of this world. A better part, I might add now that I realised my whole life was nothing short of a lie. A treacherous deception. I was sired but not out of love. I was just another experiment for my father.

Each passing moment feels like an eternity, an endless abyss and I cannot see anything beyond the darkness that engulfs my soul. The only way out is to break free. Will I be able to do that? Will I be able to step out and face the unknown? But I am done with the lies. I have to make up my mind. Each choice comes with a price. The question is, will I be able to abandon my father for my freedom? Despite knowing all that he has done and been responsible for, it tears me apart to turn my back on him. If I choose to stay back, then I'll go back to being the despicable hunter I was, and if I step out, the hunter may be hunted by an army headed by the man she loves the most.

I do have a choice before me. I can either let the monster in me consume my whole being or brace my humanity and atone for the past sins that were the result of my existence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024


@Rukhsi: I didn like Twilight either but I loved Volturi. The characters were interesting n I fancied writing a story on them ๐Ÿ˜†LOL I hate Bella too ๐ŸคขShe was so one dimensional ๐Ÿ˜ก


i loathe Bella,btw,i dnt like Edward either! der's nthng xtraordinary abt him either! he was dheela types! ๐Ÿคข Da only char worth in da movie is Jacob! โค๏ธ i heart Taylor Lautner! ๐Ÿ˜ณ bt i so so so luv Stefan! though less dan Abhay ofcourse,bt i do! ๐Ÿ˜
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

@Rukhsi: I didn like Twilight either but I loved Volturi. The characters were interesting n I fancied writing a story on them ๐Ÿ˜† LOL I hate Bella too ๐Ÿคข She was so one dimensional ๐Ÿ˜ก



@mandy even they not show us fight between them..๐Ÿ˜ก
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TeDylove


then why i fill like i read one of chapter..1๐Ÿ˜•

Chanu it was on Twilight ๐Ÿ˜› not PKYEK n I obviously wouldn post it here. But I have posted the prologue in this thread. Read it if u want to ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MyAngelAbhay


i loathe Bella,btw,i dnt like Edward either! der's nthng xtraordinary abt him either! he was dheela types! ๐Ÿคข Da only char worth in da movie is Jacob! โค๏ธ i heart Taylor Lautner! ๐Ÿ˜ณ bt i so so so luv Stefan! though less dan Abhay ofcourse,bt i do! ๐Ÿ˜

BINGO Rukhsi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Even I liked Twilight only for Jacob n Jacob alone ๐Ÿ˜ Tat was the main reason y I wanted to come up with that FF. It was on Aro's daughter n Jacob's son ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

My hands are already full with FF n SS. But I'll share the prologue below:

All this while, I was forced to live the life of a monster. A monster who knew nothing about love, compassion, or humanity. I was born a killer. One who killed her own mother on birth. I was taught to perceive myself to be far more superior to the mortals who inhabited the most part of this world. A better part, I might add now that I realised my whole life was nothing short of a lie. A treacherous deception. I was sired but not out of love. I was just another experiment for my father.

Each passing moment feels like an eternity, an endless abyss and I cannot see anything beyond the darkness that engulfs my soul. The only way out is to break free. Will I be able to do that? Will I be able to step out and face the unknown? But I am done with the lies. I have to make up my mind. Each choice comes with a price. The question is, will I be able to abandon my father for my freedom? Despite knowing all that he has done and been responsible for, it tears me apart to turn my back on him. If I choose to stay back, then I'll go back to being the despicable hunter I was, and if I step out, the hunter may be hunted by an army headed by the man she loves the most.

I do have a choice before me. I can either let the monster in me consume my whole being or brace my humanity and atone for the past sins that were the result of my existence.




mandy pls after your ss finish continue this story na..with abhiya pls..pls..pls.๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TeDylove



@mandy even they not show us fight between them..๐Ÿ˜ก

True Angry Tats y I hate Twilight ๐Ÿคข but I love Jacob ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hey do read the prologue n let me know abt it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Waiting for ur reply
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024


can u write da same story wid Abhiya like just edit da char names! ๐Ÿ˜›


My hands are already full with FF n SS. But I'll share the prologue below:

<font size="4"><font color="#990033">All this while, I was forced to
live the life of a monster. A monster who knew nothing about love, compassion,
or humanity. I was born a killer. One who killed her own mother on birth. I was
taught to perceive myself to be far more superior to the mortals who inhabited
the most part of this world. A better part, I might add now that I realised my
whole life was nothing short of a lie. A treacherous deception. I was sired but
not out of love. I was just another experiment for my father.
</font></font>

<font color="#990033" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">
</font>

<font size="4"><font color="#990033">Each passing moment feels like an
eternity, an endless abyss and I cannot see anything beyond the darkness that
engulfs my soul. The only way out is to break free. Will I be able to do that?
Will I be able to step out and face the unknown? But I am done with the lies. I
have to make up my mind. Each choice comes with a price. The question is, will
I be able to abandon my father for my freedom? Despite knowing all that he has
done and been responsible for, it tears me apart to turn my back on him. If I
choose to stay back, then I'll go back to being the despicable hunter I was, and
if I step out, the hunter may be hunted by an army headed by the man she loves
the most.
</font></font>

<font color="#990033" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">
</font>

<font size="4"><font color="#990033">I do have a choice before me. I can
either let the monster in me consume my whole being or brace my humanity and
atone for the past sins that were the result of my existence.
</font></font>


๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
u've expressed da inner turmoil,da pain n everythng so well ๐Ÿ‘ i luvd da way u wrote! โค๏ธ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TeDylove


My hands are already full with FF n SS. But I'll share the prologue below:

All this while, I was forced to live the life of a monster. A monster who knew nothing about love, compassion, or humanity. I was born a killer. One who killed her own mother on birth. I was taught to perceive myself to be far more superior to the mortals who inhabited the most part of this world. A better part, I might add now that I realised my whole life was nothing short of a lie. A treacherous deception. I was sired but not out of love. I was just another experiment for my father.

Each passing moment feels like an eternity, an endless abyss and I cannot see anything beyond the darkness that engulfs my soul. The only way out is to break free. Will I be able to do that? Will I be able to step out and face the unknown? But I am done with the lies. I have to make up my mind. Each choice comes with a price. The question is, will I be able to abandon my father for my freedom? Despite knowing all that he has done and been responsible for, it tears me apart to turn my back on him. If I choose to stay back, then I'll go back to being the despicable hunter I was, and if I step out, the hunter may be hunted by an army headed by the man she loves the most.

I do have a choice before me. I can either let the monster in me consume my whole being or brace my humanity and atone for the past sins that were the result of my existence.




mandy pls after your ss finish continue this story na..with abhiya pls..pls..pls.๐Ÿ˜›
Sorry dear It wont suit Abhiya ๐Ÿ˜ญ Plus this was the first ever story I had come up with n its close to my heart even though I didn pursue it later on So I cant mess it up. Tell me na, how it is?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024


BINGO Rukhsi ๐Ÿ˜ƒEven I liked Twilight only for Jacob n Jacob alone ๐Ÿ˜Tat was the main reason y I wanted to come up with that FF. It was on Aro's daughter n Jacob's son ๐Ÿ˜‰


who's Aro? ๐Ÿ˜•
I dnt knw much abt da Volturi's in twilight as i've hardly seen abt dem! i saw da 1st two movies n only luvd Jacob! Rest was a waste of time! ๐Ÿฅฑ

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