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I know this is super faltu update.I just wrote it in a hurry and I myself don't know what I have written but pleaseee give your precious comments😳

Chapter 6

Kabir has for the first time taken a girl seriously and he had really loved her. At that time he so wanted to yell at her and demand his answers for choosing Abhay over him, but then again he very well knew that it was him who was coming in between them. Piya had always chosen Abhay over everyone else, so he has no right to ask anything. Misha felt very sad that her best friend never told her about her (Piya) relationship with Abhay. Piya who was till now carefully observing Misha and Kabir's expressions, decided to break the silence. "Misha Kabir…I am sorry…I know should have told you but…"she was cut in between by Kabir, "No Piya. Its alright . Its my fault actually. I think I realized pretty late that how much you and Abhay love each other." Piya looked at Abhay and smiled who returned a sweet smile to her.

Raichand Mansion:

Chand and Haseena were sitting in the study looking very worried over something. Just then the door bell rang breaking the silence of the house. Chand and Haseena rushed to open the door and froze and there places looking at the view in front of them. Chand immediately connected himself to Abhay through telepathy and asked him to come back immediately and to bring Piya along with him.

Dobriyal Mansion:

Arnab Dobriyal had called his lawyer to settle the legal issuses in order to make Piya a member of his family legally so that she won't be able to back out. Madhu was always fond of Piya and she too wanted that Piya should get all her rights. But after all she was a mother too. She hesitantly said to Arnab, "I have always supported you and will always do, But do you think it is right to do this. What if she didn't agree?" "Madhu I know you are tensed but don't worry everything will be alright. And moreover, I don't want my daughter to get to close to that Raichand and his family. I will not let him take away my daughter." Arnab said clenching his fists.

In the forest:

"Piya why didn't you tell me about you and Abhay. I am your best friend…"Misha said with a sad face. "Well that is because I told her not to tell anyone."Abhay replied before Piya could have said anything. "What the hell Abhay who are you to decide what Piya should do and what she shouldn't. And why did you do that?"Misha asked him. "Well I don't have the answer to your every why."Abhay replied calmly." And I don't think it is a right place to discuss these things."He continued. "No wait I want to know something" Misha said. "Alright then you be hear and wait for your friends to come and play with you, I am taking Piya with me."Abhay said making Piya and Kabir brust out in laughter. Just then Abhay got the message from Chand to come back. "Piya we need to leave"Abhay said to Piya. She clearly heard the urgency in his voice and nodded. "But listen atleast…"Misha began. Abhay said cutting her in between, "Misha you can talk afterwards right now we need to go." "And where are you both going?"Kabir asked. "Well that is none of your business" Piya replied and Abhiya went from there. "hey yar what is she hiding? I will surely find out." Misha thought. Kabir and Misha too left the place. Kabir dropped her to Dobriyal house and went away.

Sidhharth :

Sidhharth was thinking about the Maithili's behavior. "She is behaving so strangely now a days. What is she hiding? And it feels like some new aura around her. God that day why did she attacked me? She was so powerful. Maithli will surely put us in danger. I have to stop her. And Danish, he had killed Panchi. Mr. Dobriyal is already such a pain interfering in a vampire's life and now he will not leave any stone unturned to find the murder. But first I need to stop Maithili from killing the humans." thought Sid. Sid had gotten a slight idea that Maithili was no longer the same person he had fallen in love with but this was a totally different Maithili and maybe more dangerous.

Maithili:

Maithili blasted at Danish for attacking Panchi almost ruining her plan, "You fool what were you thinking before doing that. Didn't I tell you to wait for some more time. If Sidhharth even got the slightest hint that I m using him, he will ruin everything." "I just went to talk to her and to say that she is only mine."Danish spat angrily remembering the scene he saw. "Shut up! You will not do this kind of mistake again. Let the work get finish and then do whatever you want." Maithili warned him throwing him against a tree.

"Abhay what happened is everything alright?" Pia asked. "Piya I myself don't know. Mom dad had asked to come and to bring you along too."Abhay answered her worriedly. "Abhay don't worry we are going na we'll see what is the matter." Piya said seeing Abhay so worried. As they neared the Raichand Mansion, Abhay stopped dead in his tracks and crused under his breath. Piya looked at him confused and asked "Abhay what's wrong? Let's go inside." Abhay calmed himself and turned towards her. "Piya listen! After we go inside you will not ask anything, don't say anything ok? Just be quiet. You will reply only those and that much what is asked. You will not leave my side. Ok?" Abhay told her. "But Abhay what happened? Please tell me." Piya said. "Piya I will reply to all your questions but please right now you will do as I am saying. Please Piya." Abhay pleaded her knowing what a great question bank she is. Piya just nodded.

Raichand Mansion:

Abhay and Piya entered the house. Piya immediately clutched Abhay's arm seeing the house engulfed in darkness. Abhay squeezed her hand tightly assuring her that everything will be fine. Abhay and Piya moved entered a room which was totally dark except some candles lit by the side. "Ah! Abhay and his human love" a deep manly voice came making Piya jump. Abhay bowed down in front of the person. "Finally I have the chance to meet you young woman." the person said. Piya couldn't see very clearly due to darkness the the voice was enough to scare her and Abhay was holding her hand to make her feel comfortable. The man stood up from his throne chair and extended his hand towards Piya while taking steps towards her. A very scary Piya first looked at Abhay and then hesitatingly moved forward and kept her hand. "Ah! You really smell delicious. It is so difficult to control..." That was enough to infuriate Abhay. With a jerk he pulled Piya behind him and shouted, "just stay away from her and speak why are you here?" "Abhay!" Chand warned him of his behaviour but Abhay but he didn'y pay any heed to Chand's warning. "Abhay please relax. Its alright."Piya whispered to him as she saw Abhay would just start a fight. Abhay though calmed down a bit but had his hands firmly around Piya. "Tell us what was so important that you even wanted Piya too to be present in our meeting." Abhay again asked. "Hmm...possessive for a human, interesting." The man said as he went and sat on the throne. "We are sorry Master, he won't do it again." Chand said. He continued after a pause, "She is a nice girl and she has always helped us in protecting our secret from the world. She is no harm to us." "That I have seen but we can't accept her in our world." Master said. Abhay and Piya's face shot up at this. Abhay began to say something when Master continued, "But if she is ready to be one of us then only we can can accept us." "No never. Piya will never be a vampire."Abhay growled. All the while, Piya was holding his hand tightly to control him. "And you have one week or else she has to die as she knows about us." He said in shrill voice. Before the discussion gets more heated, Haseena tried to change the topic, "Master you told us about some unpleasant happenings in Dehradun. But everything is fine here. Even Sidhhartha hasn't created any problem." "Hmm...but something has surely changed in here. We have found a new vampire's aura and also a witch has been discovered dead. Be prepared for everything in the future." The master explained them. After that Abhay took Piya out to drop her at the hostel.

Dobriyal Mansion:

Misha and Kabir had been talking about the Piya and Abhay and Misha was very worried the way Piya was behaving and crying. Kabir assured tried to her that they would talk to her and find out the truth but Misha was far way from listening. She had noticed Piya from past couple of days the way she talked and tried to be away from her and she had also stopped coming to their house. They were just passing by the room where Arnab and Madhu were discussing how to bring Piya back to their life and Arnab was thoroughly cursing Abhay, when Misha and Kabir had heard their conversation about Piya being Arnab's daughter. That had shook the hell out of her. "So thats what she was referring to about being hated by someone and that is why she was so distant these days. Oh my god! That means Abhay already knew about it." Misha thought sadly before going inside to confront her parents unaware of the another shock they will be getting.

Maithili:

There were some five-six people standing there surrounding Maithili with their heads bowed down in front of their Mistress. "There shouldn't be any mistake. Now go and prepare the next body." She ordered. "Soon I will become the most powerful most person and everyone will have to bow down before me. I will get that ring soon." She says to herself and laughs.


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Posted: 13 years ago
It is not super faltu... Its fully faltu...
Ok ok just kidding, calm down...it was super without being faltu... :P
i hope sid realises his mistake. Abhid should reunite and what is pia's reaction to being turned into a vampire? Waiting for the next chapter to find out ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update😊worrid for pia wht clan leader decision for her?Misha know the truth...love every way...continue asap nxt😊
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

It is not super faltu... Its fully faltu...
Ok ok just kidding, calm down...it was super without being faltu... :P
i hope sid realises his mistake. Abhid should reunite and what is pia's reaction to being turned into a vampire? Waiting for the next chapter to find out ;)


geee😃thank u 😃 are don't worry sid will...😉 are ye kya yar u did not write about fatty😭 maine itni mehnet se use mara hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: koli97

Lovely update😊worrid for pia wht clan leader decision for her?Misha know the truth...love every way...continue asap nxt😊


thank u😊
yep misha knows the truth now...
lets see what decision is taken for pia...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update!
So master wants Piya 2 be turned! Dunno wat wud be d rxn of Piya 2 this?
Pancheee😆😆Maithili is planning something big.
Bt sid has sensed something wrong abt her.
Waiting 4 Dobriyal family drama!
Continue asap.
Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww that was awesome...loved it yaar...jus wow i wud say...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing updt Shreya👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update juhi 👏 enjoyed reading it dear...😊 hm...misha is impatient to knw the whole story while abhay is busy tackling the entire situation!! I loved pia here..she is helping abhay in every possible way..😊 but nw I guess misha will try to
find out the truth. And the way you explained kabir's thoughts was really nice! and I liked this master. he has personality! loved the way you portrayed the master.👍🏼 the way abhay shielded pia from him was wonderful to read! but oh..my..he wants pia to turn..i hope abhay finds some other way to save pia other than turning her,atleast not so soon! and this maithli I guess will be exposed to sidh soon...just am waiting for that day! want to see sidh's reaction! n its ok juhi...studies come first..so no worries...will be waiting for the next update...thanks for the pm dear...tk..cre... 🤗

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