My First FF- YEH VAADA RAHA(chp 19 pg147) - Page 17

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

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awesome update👏
abhay already fell for her😍
also felt bad for abhay😔
continue soon thanx for pm😊

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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beautiful update anjali..it was lovely!! 👏 😳
i just loved the way you wrote!! 😊 oh thank u dear for such a big compliment n liking my ff🤗
i loved abhay's character here!! Its diffrent bt nice..full of positivity!! 😳..he is soft hearted and love hs parents.! And the way u usd the positive thng here,i really liked it!! 😊yeah, i created his character all optismistic purposely...generally children frm disturbed families also turned pessimistic...so i wanted to show him different frm other...but u will see diff. shades in his character as story will progress
so abhay's parents hav parted! Bt he stil hopes thy wil b tgthr 1day!! Hm..Bt it seems there's sum reason coz of whch haseena is stayng wth chand.whch is unknwn to abhay!! And chand i guess is mre intrstd in doing buisnes rather than hs son's success!! chandeena r still legally married n also stay in same house but there is no love between them...there relation was full of ups n down but chand did one mistake n after that there was no hope in their relation...abhay still hope for them to be together
kabir is a true friend!! He really cares for abhay!! Lovd hm! Lovd abhay n kabir's bonding too!! 😊
the dance part was lovly dear!! Lovd abhay's naughtyness!! 😳 hm..so he's already fallng for pia! And pia too seems to b liking hm!! 😳yeah its true abhay fallinf for pia n she is liking him too...but she wil take time
bt donno y i hv a feeling tht there future is nt going to b as smooth and rosy as it seems nw!! yeah u r kinda right...but dont worry i m not gonna give it sad ending😉
both the songs were gud..specialy the 2nd one!! I like it a lot!! And the entire abhiya moment was just fav and very well writtn!! 😳glad u liked it...first one was not song ..they r jus lines like narration stating their self thoughts
continue asap and thanx for the pm..tk.cre..

definitely will continue soon.😊

--Indu

Originally posted by: abhiya0006

loved the Abhiya dance!!

Chand ko jab Abhay ke fail hone ke bareh main pata chalega toh uski baand bajegi!

thanx fo the pm!! continue soon😛

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

awesum updt..finally abhiya met😍..abhiya dance was beautiful😍abhay has already fallen in luv wid pa😳continue soon n pm me

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

nice update