My First FF- YEH VAADA RAHA(chp 19 pg147)

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Such a lovely upd it was yaar m I really loved abhiya they were sooo cute , loved them ,mabhay and kabir convo was awesome , let's see what will be chand's reaction when he finds truth and wow abhiya are already feeling something for each other ,waiting for next upd , conti soon dear

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

awesome update

loved it

Abhiya dance was romantic

cont soon

thanks for the pm

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Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Superb update
loved it
Abhiya finally met and loved abhiya's dance it was cute loved it
abhiya falling in love with each other yippie.
i feel really bad for Abhay.
thanks for the pm
sorry for late reply.

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Anji its awesome!!!read ur pm just now and ff too😆oh!its awesome but ur prologue is sacring meBut don't worry i don't have questions ki dukaan like you that is your job!😉i have praises ki dukaan for you!!kudos!!

You described pia very well and i guess so beautifully that i have never read in any ff😳pink top white capree!perfect choice of colors!

Abhay's so sweet and strong headed!pia's family is just perfect!but still what's the thing that will bring them to saddy part as u mentioned in prolouge!!

And atlast!! Wonderful update!Update soon Uff waise hi its too hot and abhiya make it super hot😆

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
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awesome update👏
abhay already fell for her😍
also felt bad for abhay😔
continue soon thanx for pm😊

thanks dear😊
yes abhay loves her😉
dont be sad for abhay...he is a happy n optimistic character.

will update tonight or tomorrow😊

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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beautiful update anjali..it was lovely!! 👏 😳
i just loved the way you wrote!! 😊 oh thank u dear for such a big compliment n liking my ff🤗
i loved abhay's character here!! Its diffrent bt nice..full of positivity!! 😳..he is soft hearted and love hs parents.! And the way u usd the positive thng here,i really liked it!! 😊yeah, i created his character all optismistic purposely...generally children frm disturbed families also turned pessimistic...so i wanted to show him different frm other...but u will see diff. shades in his character as story will progress
so abhay's parents hav parted! Bt he stil hopes thy wil b tgthr 1day!! Hm..Bt it seems there's sum reason coz of whch haseena is stayng wth chand.whch is unknwn to abhay!! And chand i guess is mre intrstd in doing buisnes rather than hs son's success!! chandeena r still legally married n also stay in same house but there is no love between them...there relation was full of ups n down but chand did one mistake n after that there was no hope in their relation...abhay still hope for them to be together
kabir is a true friend!! He really cares for abhay!! Lovd hm! Lovd abhay n kabir's bonding too!! 😊
the dance part was lovly dear!! Lovd abhay's naughtyness!! 😳 hm..so he's already fallng for pia! And pia too seems to b liking hm!! 😳yeah its true abhay fallinf for pia n she is liking him too...but she wil take time
bt donno y i hv a feeling tht there future is nt going to b as smooth and rosy as it seems nw!! yeah u r kinda right...but dont worry i m not gonna give it sad ending😉
both the songs were gud..specialy the 2nd one!! I like it a lot!! And the entire abhiya moment was just fav and very well writtn!! 😳glad u liked it...first one was not song ..they r jus lines like narration stating their self thoughts
continue asap and thanx for the pm..tk.cre..

definitely will continue soon.😊

--Indu

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: abhiya0006
loved the Abhiya dance!!

Chand ko jab Abhay ke fail hone ke bareh main pata chalega toh uski baand bajegi!

thanx fo the pm!! continue soon😛

thanks for liking it dear😊
yes band toh bajegi😆...par kiski...well lets see.😉

will update soon😊.

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
awesum updt..finally abhiya met😍..abhiya dance was beautiful😍abhay has already fallen in luv wid pa😳continue soon n pm me

glad u like it😳
oh thanks for liking their dance😳
yes abhay has fallen for pia...pia is also interested in him😉
will update soon.😊