ABHIYA ff-MY DESTINY COMPLETED

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: cccppp
<font size="4">lovely start...nice story..
continue soon..😃
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glad u liked it..
Will update asap
u r welcme:D

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

<font color="#ff0000" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I loved it.Feel sad 4 Pia but I m sure all will b f9 whn she'll meet Abhay.Plz cont..😳</font>

thnxxx 4 liking it..
Will try update soon

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

nice update!!!!!

liked raichands intro
loved the dobriyal sis convo

continue soon

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navnit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

awesome update. abhay is the one who would bring light of happiness in pias life.waiting for ur updates to know how. do update soon add me in ur pm list plzzz. 😊

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update!!!!!

liked raichands intro
loved the dobriyal sis convo

continue soon

thnxx so much for lovely comments..i will update in few hours.

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sukusnavnit
awesome update. abhay is the one who would bring light of happiness in pias life.waiting for ur updates to know how. do update soon add me in ur pm list plzzz. 😊

thnxxx for ur valuable comment..
Sure pm u...
I m updating by evening...

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 2
At R VillaThe Raichands r gearing up to make arrangement of the party ordering best crusines,decorations n especially best wines only thing in name of human food they could enjoy. While Raichands r involved in planning,Handsome Young Man with Beautiful hyptocising icy blue eyes and perfect well toned muscluar body silently standing at the corner of hall hiding himself at safe distance to avoid being detected trying to break free the silent charm in order to sneak 2 wht his peers and parents were upto.he knew his family pretty well that every person loved and cared 4 him to core of the heart.It is impossible to believe that his family forget his birthday.They were upto throwing a biggest birthday bash.He was still in thoughts,whn he felt a hand on back turned around to find his father chand smiling at him.they proceeded 2 join others members.Chand broke d silence-boy trying 2 sneak in ."My Little bro u forget we r vampire,we already sensed u around"-sid .'God when i will get used to be vampire'-Abhay. 'look who is talking,u r one who enjys d most n troubling each n every animals of forests'- kabir.'yup u r right bro,i pity those poor animals.thnk god dad goes with u,otherwise u would made them away this place'-Alisha.'i m having little fun,cant i do tht'making faces saying it.Seeing abhay making faces everybody burst out in laughter.Chandeena in unision'stop pulling his leg'How will u guys understand d meaning of fun,my bad luck tht my elder siblings r 2 century old buddhas'-Abhay.they r fuming in anger on hearing his remark n kabir n sid raced around d hall like teenagers and soon all of them sitted and sounds of laughter all around.Chandeena were smiling and enjying looking at them.The moment,abhay becme part of this family.Their lifeless life became taken a. a turn.Abhay innoscene n naughtiness had touch life.He brought happiness on their lives.He is certainly angel send for him.They made sure his angel is given back happiness.He brought to them.he might be vampire, no one can go untouched by innoscene and purity of heart.This family considered themself to be blessed to have him in their lifes.
At Dorbrial Mansion
Everyone is eating their breakfast.Panchi told Arnab that Pia will spend the day with them.Arnab n Madhu r happy that the pia will step out of shell enjy the world outside for day.They also knew tht panchi n misha put the best efforts to make pia enjy life,like she used to be some years.panchi n misha planned best outing for pia.while pia and arnab left for office.

At office,Pia is preparing for meeting to impress the person coming from the raichand industries.The staff informed pia that the person from raichand industries for arrived at their office.it was jeh.jeh came down to mumbai in place of siddarth who was supposed to came for meeting.As jeh entering her office,he couldn't believe his eyes.Jeh froze for a whille,he is numb to see this girl is exactly like maithali with curly hairs only differance between them.Being wiccan,he could make out that she is human.Pia is still confused his behivour .she broke the silence ans extended his hand towards jeh-hi,i am pia dobrial.Jeh also came out of the stance and introduced -i am jeh khurana.i know you were expecting siddarth raichand.you can count on me i am also member.Can we discuss the details of the deal.

'lets began' said pia

The meeting went for some hours.they have fianlised the deal.

Suddenly.jeh cell started buzzing.He excused himself to attend the call.When the proceeded inside,he saw Mr dobrial.Pia has already filled in her father about finalising of the deal.

Jeh-sorry siddarth could not came for meeting.he is busy in arranging abhay youngest raichand birthday bash due in 2 days.siddarth didnt wanted to off this meeting.so i came to help him.i am alisha raichand's finace.

'Nice to meet to jeh'-Arnab.

' they wanted to sigh in deal as soon as possible but siddarth has some future commitments.he won't to able to came down to mumbai not before 10 days.If possible can pia came over to U.S to sign it'-jeh

'Why not i think pia won't have any problem'-Arnab.

Arnab throught it will be would be good change for pia.It is better that her daughter stays away from mumbai on that unforunate day which changed her life forever.

'Mr Dobrial i am returning back to U.s.a today by hired plane.Pia doesn't see any problem ,she can came along'-jeh

'no problem Mr khurana'-pia

'you can call me jeh.i liked being called as jeh'-jeh

this deal is important for our company,your company is ready to sign than we should delay'-pia

Great,than meet you in evening at the airport,it is pleasure meeting you pia-jeh.

Pia is contended that her her hard work paid off,she is going to work with biggest name of corporation world.

'i am coming mish'-said pia.As she promised to her sister,her sister waiting outside her office to take her out.Misha is suprised to see pia in jovial mood.whatever the reason may be,she is delighted to see smile on her face.

'Aren't you getting late for movie'-pia

'miss lost head is in good mood,lets go before she changes her mind'-misha

Today,pia didn't mind misha teasings. 'Girls.i m going to U.s.a in evening to sign the deal with raichands.i could believe ears that it has been finalised.

Pia spent the rest with having fun with her sisters.first they went to watch a comedy movie,they laughed her heart while watching.later they decided to go for shopping as pia is due for going to U.s.a. it is worthy for them to shop for pia and themselves too.They almost entire day shopping.untill the sisters felt hungry,they went to their favourite eating point.Pia throught that it is not really a bad idea to go out and having fun with her sisters.

Panchi and Misha are delighted to see pia enjoy life once again forgetting her past for a day. But sad on the throught that she is going away for a week. she believes that it is best days of her life since that incidence.she is thankful for her sister for forcing to going out with them.it is memorable day for so many reasons.

Pia is all set to leave for aipport.she was numerous bussines trip.she couldn't understand why is so happy and something in inside made her belive that this journey would a pleasant change in her life.

here is my second update.hope i m come upto ur expections.plzz forgive for the mistake..

plzz hit like and comment

Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

yay me first!! grt update dear so finaly abhiya wil meet...continue soon dear😊

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Ok me second.
awesome update dear.
so, in next part abhiya will meet or so.
loved the siblings convo and haseena and chand are so good here. They love abhay so much.
I loved abhay's character too.
pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago