'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 65

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

ME first😎

Lovely update!thanx dear😊

Good to see the caring Abhay!Abhay got to know Kate mixed something in Pia's drink!!

Hope he teaches her a good lesson🤔😊lets see what abhay does😊

Btw wer is Aniket😉..anik is there don't worry.😆

Thanks for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

Hey tora , awesome awesome awesome dear , can't say how much I loved it , just love abhay , he is such a caring , and the way u described piya's beauty to abhay and abhay's emotion was just amazing , I just knew tat Kate would be the one who mixed drug in piya's drink , well can't wait to see lesson does abhay teaches Kate for this , tora and Indu u both just rock together 😃 , can't wait for next chapter plsss upd soon and again amazing tora

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

Wow..!! Fab update Tora...😳

Abhay is so caring...

Glad to see that bro-sis are now talking to each other...😃

And finally abhay saw what Kate exactly is...

Abhay will make sure she pays for what she has done to Pia..

Continue soon dear..

and thanks for the pm...😳

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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superb update tora! It was lovely princess! 👏 👏 thank u fairy😊😳
abhay's protectiveness towards pia was beautifuly shown! 😊
I loved d way u potrayd hs feelings..the car as wel as d scene abhay sittng beside pia was awesuum!! Specialy d lattr 1 was lovely!! 😳glad i could bring out their feelings😳
The scene was so so romantic !❤️ i lovd reading it..😳
great nw abhay knws abt kate! Hope he will leave no stone unturnd to teach hr lessn!! 😈
.that is in ur hands😆
abhay- risa bonding ws writn in an amazng way! ⭐️ Specialy d speed thng nd abhay pullng her cheeks tht u added ws so cute yet natural!!😳
.ya i want a strong bond between the siblings!!
nw lets see wat abhay does to kate nd hw he handles hs feelings for pia!! 😉 hmm lets see😉

Originally posted by: maria_mahar

amazing update👏

loved abhay's care for pia..😳 good going i liked it

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

beautiful abhay ...

love abhay caring side...

oh dat kate ... she mix drugs in pia's drink 😡...

par tabi th abhay ki caring side dkhi ...

update soon