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Romita

@Rmuk

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Wow I am first...
beautiful start dear.
I loved each and every part of it.
arrgh...dippanita, jay and t are really mean.
I think abhay slept with piya in guest room. I am really eager to know their reaction in morning.
Thanks for the pm.
pls update soon.
u are a awesome writer dear.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

nice update!!!!!!!!!👏⭐️

liked the raichand family.👍🏼...the way u portrayed each n every character was nice.

all the elders r nice except Dipanita😡 ...she is so evil.😈

n jeh😒...i pity on him..i feel he is not evil like his mom ...poor guy caught betwen his mom's plans for gaining power n money...the way he stare pia...i guess that he likes her...but not mixing up wid her due to his mom.🤔

sid is adorable...truly a responsible big bro.

misha is cool😎, T is bimbo🤪 n pia is of reserved nature n sweet as always.😊

abhay is quite different...a pampered young bro, fun person n irresponsible son...hmmm...interesting.😉

so i guess abhay has accidently landed in pia's room😳...what a first meeting 😆waiting for their reaction.😆😉

continue soon.😊

Edited by anjali0111 - 13 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

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Lovely start tez...👏the whole family ws beautifuly described...👍🏼 T is as usual brainless 😆 jay a dumb 🥱...dancng to hs mothr's tunes n dippanita...urrgh...less said the bettr..!!!
Lovd pia...she's sweet n calm...abhay's nice yet naughty fun lovng boy...though he's diffrnt still lykd hm already...😉 😳 haw...abhay landed straight at pia's room n tht too n hr bed!!! 😲Haha...it will b really fun to watch bth of their reactns n d mrng...!!😆 Wat an entry...🤣 1st meetng is realy gonna b rockng...😉
lukng forward to abhiya meeting...cntinue asap..
Thanx 4 the pm...tk.cre.. 😊

-Indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wow thats an awesome update. and abhay ne entry maari to seedhe pia ke saath bed pe 😉 🤣

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Okay lovely first chapter... Liked how Misha teased the bimboshree 😆 Dipannita appears to be a first class villain... Abhay on the bed first thing 😛continue soon!

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

loved the first update!! 👏👏

Dipanita looks to be evil and T is a real Bimbo!!😡

Looks like Abhiya wil meet soon😆

thanx for the pm and do continue soon😊

Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

wow!!awesum update taz!!rofl!!t is such a bimbo..luving the charctr of abhay already..haha he goes straight 2 da room where piya is ..cntnu asap:-)

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

totally loved it omg Abhay went into piya's room n slept there. wanna see there reactions🤣 in the morning. loving Abhay already seedhe piya ke room main . kya entry mari .🤣
thanks for the pm

Edited by shivanipandit29 - 13 years ago

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

awsum start.evryne in d family is gud except dipanita.i lvd dat line-t was busy checking dipanita's lipstick...dis cracked me up. Abhay has arrived & landed straight in pia's room...can't wait 2 read d nxt part.

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fatima

@Yumna786

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

wow just nice,amazing n cute.t interest abhay n madhu interst in sid piya no way, i hope abhay piya ek shaat kay neechay ek kamray mai band lol.thanks 4 pm n ofcource do pm me.different story,loved it,