New ff-: The fateful night note on pg147 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update ..
sorry 4 nt cmntng on previous update ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

nice update ..

sorry 4 nt cmntng on previous update ..


Thank u and it's ok dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
thanks for the pm


Thanks a lot for ur sweet comment. Next update will take time as I have to think about it. I will try to do it asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice update dear. since u cant send PMs, can u just update the pg no and date of ur update in ur title each time u update. that will make it easier for us to know when u have updated. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">hey nice update dear. since u cant send PMs, can u just update the pg no and date of ur update in ur title each time u update. that will make it easier for us to know when u have updated.😊</font>


Thank u so much and I have learnt to send pms so, I will do it next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here is the next part. CHAPTER 3 Dobriyal Mansion A healthy girl with black straight hair hair was crying and a tomboyish looking girl with curly brown hair was consoling her. Misha-: birdie stop crying. Nothing will happen to piya. She will comeback soon. Maybe she wants to stay alone for sometime and dad has also gone to police station so, don't worry they will find piya soon. Panchi-: but, mish u know na that yesterday's incident has effected are badly. Her mental state is not well. Misha-: I know but u also know that piya is a strong girl and she can handle every situation herself. Meanwhile the door bell rang. One of the sevant opened the door. A middle aged man looking weary came inside Misha-: papa what happened? What did the commissioner say? Arnab-: the commissioner said that he will try to trace and find out piya. He asked me to keep patience but u tell me how can I keep patience after knowing that my daughter is missing and about her bad mental state. Misha-: papa don't worry, everything will be fine. You go and take rest. Mom is also not at home, she had gone to temple to pray for piya's well being. Arnab-: ok, I am going inside but pls take care of panchi and ur mom. Misha-: yes papa. Raichand Mansion Abhay woke up in the morning and went to piya's room to check her. He entered piya's room and found her sleeping peacefully. He turned away to go out of the room just then he heard piya murmuring something. He went near her and heard her murmuring 'jay pls don't leave me...' Abhay-: (in his mind) who is thos jay? I need to find out maybe he knows something about piya's past or his related to her. Abhay kept his hand on piya's forehead to check her temperature. Abhay-: oh no! I think she have high fever.He immidiately called one of the servant and asked the servant to bring some medicine for fever. The servant came with a glass of water and medicine and within few minutes. Servant-: here sir,take it. Abhay-: (while taking the medicine ) Go and prepare some soup. Servant-: yes sir. The servant left the room. Abhay sat near piya and gently stroked her hair. After sometime, the servant came and gave the soup to abhay and left. Abhay Slowly woked up piya and fed her the soup and the medicine. After that piya drifted off to sleep. At around 12o'clock piya woke up feeling perfectly fine. She found abhay sitting in the couch and working on the laptop.Piya-: abhay, can I ask u something? Abhay-: yes, do u need something? Are u feeling alright? piya-: no, no actually I am fine and don't need anything. I just wanted to ask u when am I going back home. Abhay-:(Staring at her) do u remember where is ur house?or who is ur parents? Piya-: no, actually I don't remember anything. Abhay-: then how can u expect me take u to ur home. So, if u r,finished with ur questioning pls get ready as u need to come with me to city hospital. Piya-: what? But why? I mean I am perfectly alright. Abhay-: if u are perfectly fine then why don't u remember anything? And I can't let u stay in my house forever. Piya-: (angrily) I also don't want to stay in ur house forever.( in her mind) oh god, what is with this man sometimes,he is so sweet and caring and sometimes rude and khoods. I can't bear his mood swings but what will I wear I don't have any dress here.Abhay-: (listening to all her thoughts was slightly smiling) go to the next room, and look in the cupboard. U will get something to wear. Piya-: whoa how do u know what am I thinking?Do u read minds? Abhay-: stop questioning and I no, I don't read mind. I just assumed that u need cloths. Piya left from there angrily and went to the next room, which was,well decorated and belonged to mrs. Raichand. She searched in the cupboard which was full with beautiful black dresses and found a mini black dress and wore it.Meanwhile Abhay had called kabir and said him about the situation and had taken a appointment from dr. danish rathore. Kabir had promised to be there in time. Piya came and stood behind abhay. Abhay can feel her presence. As he turned around he was mesmerized by the angelic beauty standing infront of him. The black dress was hugging her slim figure tigtly giving a special effect to every curve of her body. A strap of her hair was falling on her face making her look more cute and sexy. Piya-: (feeling a little uncomfortable at his continuously staring)why are u staring at me like that? Abhay-: ( coming out of th trance) nothing let's go.He quickly grabbed the car keys and both left for the city hospital. So, do tell me guys u like it or not and pls comment. I have given a little bit long update this time.Ur comment means a lot to me. Sorry, for any grammatical errors.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
so pia belong to dobrial family nd is a mental case hehe...
nyc update plz reveal abt jeh...continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum...loved it...contiue soon n thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme...
Waiting 4 jay entry...
Thnxxx 4 pm :D

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