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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: luckdiya
nice update chanu... abhiya in jungle...bt mangal nhi kia🤣🤣 i wuld lik 2 c dem...doing jungle mein mangal😍😆😆confused abt "j"...piya is a brave grl... & poor crocodile.. he didnt lik abhay🤣🤣
update soon

j is wolf..and he is nice here...thanks for liking..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
superb update Chandni
Abhiya falling for each other
Abhiya scene at midnight was hawt n whats with the alarm
was it piya dream or is abhay really there?
hopefully they will be in love soon
thanks for the pm.

thanks for liking..and about u will see in next update..😉

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
awesum updt...loved abhiya scenes...continue soon

thanks for liking..

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
awesome FF.I loved it.Abhiya were cute.Plzz cont..😳

thanks u so much...willl continue..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update!!!!!

loved abhiya moments...last part was lovely

is jay a wolfy here also???

hope abhiya soon realise that they love each other.

continue soon

yes jay is wolf..and for abhiya wait and watch..😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Super Kool
Nice fan fic..great job...👏

thanks for liking..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
update... please continue... and add me in ur pm list

sure will update...

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Nice update Chanu 😃
Liked Jeh Pia convo though I hope he wont be a kebab mein haddi for them 😛 Abhiya were super cute. Loved Pia's dialog tat even a croc doesn like Abhay 😆 Alisha is worried so I assume she knows Jeh isn just a human 😕 Last part was hot yaar ☺️ Was tat Abhay or was Pia dreaming of him or was it someone else all together? Waiting to know tat. Continue soon.

oh mansha!!🤗
nope jay is not here kabab me haddi..use kuch or kam karne he..😛ann lya kare sab abhay jo itne darte he..😆 yup ayesha know that..thank u for last part//😳
wait for next update tumhe pata chal jayega..😆😆
yaa.will continue..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: -DreamGirl-
Its Lovely:) thanks 4 PM:)

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IN Guesthouse

pia just hit with something hard then her eyes open ..and she saw herself in ground..not in bed..then reality hit her..ITS JUST DREAM..she blush about thinking her dream and just remember that moment.."oh!! pia what r thinking..u r blushing bez of that CROCOHUT(CROCODILE HUNTER)??
wake up babes!! oh god u only find this man to send in my dreams?? now i am sure my whole day going bad.. oh today is my boss return and all people told me he is so arrogant..if i do one mistake he through me out.no..no..i have to ready fast.."and pia get up and run for bath..

After an hour she is ready to go..and she coming out the house..and seen shock her..her eyes big like it pop out any time..and anger spreed on her beautiful face..

In Raichand House

abhay is standing near the window he is think about that girl..why she always coming in my sight..she also increase my thirst of blood and anger but yet her sweetness spread light in my heart..i never fill like that for anyone..this filling is different.. then his jaw tight..what r u thinking abhay??she is human..yes human..i have to stay away from her..yes it only help me..then he sense some one behind him..smile spread on his lips..without turning"so how my sister coming in my room early morning...humm so let me think..kunal is not here..did he tease u again??" alisha pouted "what bro cant i come here without reason.."in low voice"or i shell see u r dreaming" and she cluck ..this made abhay turn around.."what u say?" shocked spread on his face"amm..nothing bro common get ready we have to go office and yes i am going with my own car with kunal so u have to come alone.."abhay smile "lovebirds..dont do so much chochi-co otherwise somes tress faint and he jump out of window before alisha hot him.."bro i will see it in office who do chochi-co.."and she laugh loud..that mad abhay alert what this means??

ALisha and kunal drove away in car ,chand and haseena both all ready gone so abhay think now only navabjada of house in home..and he laugh..he gone his room to get ready ,today he fill so much happiness but why he dont know reason..he get ready and go in parking lot to dive his BMW..

he happily drove away from raichand house..in his car some rap songs playing in high volume..after all he brock down music system last night
so that car is no use for him now and he gave it to mechanic as a gift...

Raichand Guesthouse

darnish standing near pia's guesthouse gate..lazily his back on car door and wait for pia to out..when he saw pia evil smile spread on his face and he though now how can u run today lets see..and he started waking toward her..

pia get so much angry see him here and also shocked bez of that he can find her house..unknown fear send shiver in her body but she control her emotion and she give him fake smile but curse him under her breath and though oh god my bad day is started..now i have to again do something think pia think fast...oh god why my car not coming yet..arrh!!!!

darnish"hay beautiful" took pia hand and try to kiss it but pia jerk her hand and smile at him and said" sir what r u doing here?? "

darnish made a face in disappointment: your driver is not coming today so i think to peak up u..after all u r new here then how u will find way alone?? (again evil smile spread on his face) so beautiful come with me..i am sure u enjoy it..(and again he take out his hand) shall we..??

pia with fake excitement: oh so u r my diver today...wow!! (darnish clinch his teeth for that but control himself ) but driver uncle( he get so much angry for that) opps!! sorry i mean driver bhaiya alisha(he get shocked) is already coming to peak me..so u r free from your duty..and if u want money...(and pia open er purse to give him money,she asked him innocently) how much money u want bhaiya??

now darnish anger gone out of control and he caught pia's wisest and just turn it..pia close her eyes in pain"what r u thinking your self huumm?? i just want u..only u..and u try to ditch me baby..then u dont know me well..if i want something then i will get it my way..so is better for u to take my advise and come with me.."

pia use her all force and free herself and slap hard on his face..her slap is so much hard then darnish fall on the ground..shock seen in darnish eyes no one girl's hand hit hard like this..and no one girl yet dare to slap him..and this girl... so much anger seen in her eyes and she shout"dare u again touch me this is only demo..next time your all teeth is out in your ugly mouth,now go from here before i called anyone ..and stay away from me in office.." she started walking leaving him back..and the car stop on her get..alisha get out of the car and saw darnish dangerously..kunal signal her to leave it on him and alisha shout pia's name to stop her..kunal go near darnish and help him to stand ..then try to just good her color's of shirt,so much authority and anger in his voice " next time if u try to touch pia,u will throw out from office" and he leave him and started walking..

alisha.,pia and kunal drove away in car alisha in carwith concerned" r u all right pia??"but pia not give her answer ask her question with suspect ion" how u know i am in trouble? i mean how u know i am angry and hurt? "alisha'a and kunal's eyes met and alisha shack her head in disappointment
"here i am thinking u will get scared but here u r ready with your question book..we r passing from here and see that u slap darnish..thats why i think something wrong" answer alisha rolling her eyes..pia yet not belive on it but let it go"i am fine..better after slept him..and she close her eyes and lazily lay down..

alisha and kunal calm down after saw her in peace..after some minutes passed pia suddenly jerk out "hey u bro is return?i mean my head boss ,i just cant stop my self thinking about him,all members tell me he is so arrogant and sadu...sorry for that but i have to prepare my self to meet him na??"alisha cluck on it
alisha: dont wary u will be happy so much after meet him ,,we all waiting for it for long..(pia narrow her eyes) i mean u r over new employed na so only u dont know him..we want to see his reaction after he will meet u..(and she hive-five with kunal)
pia-is that any secrete in it so u both seem enjoy our meeting?
kunal:good question but we will see ii in office..take rest pia now u need it..after all u r going to meet ABHAY RAICHAND what say ali..and again they both laugh and pia closed her eyes in announce...

they all reach on empire and as usual trio go in canteen for lunch..they meet thir misha and kabir and misha's joke relax pia and they all happily started moving in empire
misha: now all people come in attention our sadu and kadus boss and my frind is retun..and he love to insut people so stay out of his way..all laugh on it.but pia really eager to meet him..

they go to their respected sit and pia's face get angry seen darnish near her table..she go their and take her sit and started working on her work..
today she saw that all people busy in work no one talking oe wasting time..she amazed to see that what an imprecation of my sir..she again made her attention in work and she didnt know after sometimes someone is standing near her table look at her shockingly..pleasure,smile come on that person face..but after sometimes anger take it place..pia fill someone presence..it same smell of perfume pia blush thinking that whose smell belongs and smile ..she shake her head and started working again..angrily he gone from their and enter in cabin..and split the flower pot..in another corner kuof office kunal sign and told alisha" i think next time i have to place metal flower pot." alisha cluck and sigh him to silance..

PA called pia and told her mr riachand called her in cabin..she pray to god and started walking ..she open the door and asked permission "may i come in sir?" she saw some one set in chair but she can only see the back of that person..two fingers sign her to come in..she fill again same fragrance..she enter the cabin and stand near the table ,a husky yet authorized voice come "sit miss dobriyal" pia fill like she listen this voice some where..and after thought in some seconds she know whose voice is ..and it made her shiver...she gone in shock state and she read the name plate and again go in shock..she now so much want to run from cabin her mind didnt accepet it..how is this possible no this is not him..but her heart told her that this is him..abhay wait for her response but he not listen her voice yet fill her presence and frustrated he turn around..

Pia's fear conformed after seen same face they both share eyelock first amazed then happy then sad and last anger come in both of eyes and pia break eyes content and see down..she her this reaction green spread on his face and he thought finally i can shut her mouth...then back in his attitude" so miss u r working here humm?? yet u have a guts to speack me like that?" yet no answer"what happen with your always talking nonsense mouth ??"no reply.." i am asking u miss pia." he shout in anger..

pia not seen in his eyes and reply with polite voice" sir this is my office and i am employed her and i am only come here for work so i only give u answer which is our work related" this made abhay more angry" i am your boss so u have to gave me answer what i want"pia yet reply calmly " sir i will sure give u reply in parking lot after office if u can wait for me??" " what u think i will wait for your stupid reply in parking lot?"abhay roar in anger
pia: then forgot it sir i cant give u properly reply here..
abhay again shout "see in my eye when u replay me dammit.."yet her head down ..abhay stood from chair and started walking in her direction..pia get back step but tip with broken pot..and she just has to sleep and in fear of hit she close her eyes..but before she hit the floor two strong arms catch her..

she fill so much secure in that arm like for years she crave for it..she not fill this sereneness in rahul's arms and unknowingly one tear made out her ways..abhay fill pain see the tear in her eyes..he dont know why..he fill saw restless ,he huskily "pia.."pia never listen her name so good with so much care and passion,she didnt want to open her eyes ,its seem dreams to her..but again that voice come" pia u r safe...open your eyes" and she know she never deny that beautiful voice request..she slowly open her eyes and then innocent baby brown eyes meet with ocean blue eyes..they both fill connected and go in dreamland..

both dancing in each other arms on music,they so much near with each other,pia's head on abhay's chest and abhay's just close his eyes to fill pia..on both face smile spreading..and they enjoy their moment in each other arms..pia then see in his eyes their is so much love in it..abhay caress pia's cheek and kiss her forehead ...pia close her eyes and hug him tightly.. abhay caress pia's back lovingly and wishper in her ears" I LOVE U.." pia smile shyly and reply"I LOVE U TOO.." then they hear the knock on the door and both come in sense..its just dream..

abhay street pia and murmured miss blind and pia reply with same murmured mr despo..again they both staring at each other with murdered look..but alisha's voice get them back"so bro u met our new employed..humm seem like u both know each other,and abhay gave dagger look to alisha..and pia got ambassadress"sir i am going out "and before abhay reply she hurriedly got out..abhay just seen her to go and mischievous green spread on his face..alisha shockingly look at him and abhay see that and he come back to sense"what?" he asked her irritated knowing very well she know everyting" u do chochi-co.." listen this abhay get shock and shout"what ????NNNOOO,,,i am just save her to fall"
alisha"yeeh i can see that" before alisha started other thing abahy told her" i listen u and kunal planning to go Hanny-moon again?" it made her embarrass.."amm.bro i have to go..mom call me bye.." and she hurriedly gone from their..and abhay laugh no one can win from abhay raichand..

here out pia totally blushing and irritate and red darnish seen that and get angry..and without any reason he scold pia ,abhay finch listen this..and curse darnih under his breath then he he call darnish and threaten him that he always west his time and next time if he seen him leave his sit he throw him out..and green seen darnish red face ..whole day passing like that ..pia and abhay both avoid each other yet secretly never leave the chance to see at each other..

after finish office hour pia coe to parking lot and seen abhay near her car..and she understand why he is here "so u r waiting for me hh!!" abhay turn around and say"who said that" "oh then me.khadus..this is my car leave my way"abhay answer lazily"what if i dont leave??"and he smirk..pia fake smile back and go around the car..she sit in the car and told dirver start the car..but he didnt startshe say him"out!" and driver out of the car and she come to driver sit and just she about the start one arm snatch the car key..she horrorly see that..

that arm is none other but himself abhay riachand..he green see her reaction and she angrily pet out the car "give me back the key u jalaku" abhay got confused listen this"what u say?" " u r jalaku,crocohut give my key back"she roer in anger, abhay reply with same range"first give my answer
" i am not your employ here oky?? so its none off your business,now give me back" but abhay cross his arm and lazily lay on pillar" give answer and take key" pia's face got red in anger"fine" abhay green listen that"mrs raichand??" she shout.."today no one here to save u so better stop play trek and give me answer.."

Edited by cccppp - 13 years ago