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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk


Awww, really thanks.
Germany wow, gr8.

ohh !!!dont think that vivian is famous in india only !!!he is famous in other country also !!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

Hey dear awesome awesome awesome upd
Exteremly sorry for the late reply was a lil busy
Coming to upd wow yaar piya doing sooo much for food , loved her childish acts 😆
And wow abhay saved piya and piya neh uspe hi insaam dala 😆
And Wahh abhay ka charm inspector pe bhi Chala , Ganda 🤣
Waiting eagerly for next upd , conti soon 😃

aweee so sweet😃 ,thanku so much sweetz ,i am glad that you comment in your buzy shedule !!also 😃she is very foody!!haha ...this ws just a starting piya will going to start problems for abhay !!!😆..i will update soon !!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey its nice story add me too...thnx.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukugeny

hey its nice story add me too...thnx.

i will surely gone pm you next time😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampireking


</div><div>haha😆,i will update soon !!!!i am satisfied with the comments now haha😆update jaldi aayegi !!!are you on fb ??😉


Yipee glad u are satisfied, waiting for it eagerly. Yup Romita Mukherjee there with abhiya pic, piya and abhay coupe vala
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampireking


</div><div>ohh !!!dont think that vivian is famous in india only !!!he is famous in other country also !!!😆


Lolzzz, I know it sis
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Posted: 13 years ago
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#330066">hello guys,i am very happy that it is got goodresponse9 pages !!!!!!yupeee ithoughtthat this ff is not going to get goodresponsecoz this ss does have any romance much further !!!but the ss responce makes me said thanku so much guys ,and specially rmuk ji and chitti ji !!!you both rocked !!!these two peoples are there who makes me to write otherwise meine yeh ff second chapter ke badd quiet ar diya tha !!!!</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#cc0066">piya was really angry furstrated ,that how can he do this to her !!!i mean he take inspector in her side grrr he is such a womennizor i mean i think he did not eat food uska patee toh ladkiyo ko dekkar hi bhata hogaa😆i mean hedeservespanchi only suddenly she decided that she will going to make abhay suffer !!!</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#cc3399">abhay comes out with the victory smirk as usually !!!so mrs looser how are you feeling i mean now i will going to file against that you tried to rape me i mean i know i am really hot so you cant resist but what did you do you rape !!!!!!!</font><font color="#339999">piya was in fear what will be her repititution !!after some time piya seen herself in the court so mrs abhay tell us what piya do to you</font><font color="#330033">!!!abhay cried *sir plzz plzz help me mein aapki chokat pein aaya huise darindi se muje bachaa lije !!!!!judju :what she do with you ???</font><font color="#996633">piya screamed :no judje i did not do anything to him !!!!!!!!!i aminnocent</font><font color="#cc0066">abhay :sir plzz plzz i cant even say anything one night i was washing the utensils</font><font color="#00ccc"></font><font color="#9999ff">piya :what did you say !!sisr eh judh bol raha judge :maintain silence mrs piya !!</font><font color="#993333">!abhay :then he suddenly he come hugged me tight from behind and push me on the bed and open my braa ...(STARTED CRYING )</font><font color="#00ccc">.😭</font><font color="#9966ff">judge :do you wear bra !</font><font color="#00ccc">!</font><font color="#cc9966">abhay :yess sir otherwise piya will beat me !!!and piya wear shirts and jacket !!</font><font color="#00ccc">!</font><font color="#ff00ff">today we exchange the cloth !!!!!suddenly all the people in the court started saying *PUNISHMENT *WIFE KE NAAM EPIN DHABBA HAI YEH *suddenly piya comes oUTof the dream !!</font><font color="#996600">!with the sudden coz abhay pinched her !</font><font color="#00ccc">!</font><font color="#33cc99">piya occhh !!!suddnely abhay startd coming closure to piya one by one with each step piya heart started beating what is going to happen with her</font><font color="#00ccc">!!</font><font color="#999966">!piya *abhyy dont yu remember we are friends</font><font color="#330099">!11so abhay smirk and said *socant we do the friend thing !!</font><font color="#cc0033">!piya was now inched on the door she did not have any place to hide</font></font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#cc0033">now !!</font><font color="#cc3300">!</font></font><font size="4" color="#cc3300"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">!abhay started smilling and started opening his button of his white shirt !!how will you going to run away little puppy !!!😆</font>Piya(more annoyed more than ever) wanted to wipe that smile of his face. She grabbed a knife nearby which she used to brought for defence !! her brought for her yesterday as a defense weapon.Piya runned, and try to stab him. Abhay grabbed her right hand tightly, and pinned her against the wall.Abhay slowly smiled, and pointed the knife to her throat. Piya sweated, and was breathing heavily scared for her life.Abhay threw the knife out the window.</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="4" color="#cc3300">In turn Abhay touched her whole face, and slowly brushed every part of it. Piya shivered, and looked away. Ready to kiss him. She closed her eyes, and trying to find the strength to fight the temptation. He pulled away.</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="4" color="#cc3300">Abhay- Next time! I suggest use a better weapon.it only works on loosers !!!</font>
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[DIV]<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="4" color="#cc3300">[I][B]Piya- Next time
Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sis it's awesome, I so so loved it, specially the court scene and the last part piya with knife and abhay's smirk and action. It was superbly described. Infact I was laughing hard during that court scene, lolzzz.
Sis why u forget my name everytime, user name is rmuk and full name Romita, tum bhoolkar kyun ho itna.
Anyways a big thank u for listening to me and updating this ss as it's one of my fav one, though it had not much romancr but I love the storyline and both their attitude.
One more thing edit the title if u have prblm sending pm's.
Continue soon plz plz plz. Only three chappy left, koi nahi phir bhi update soon abd yea precap is really interesting. Thank u for messeging me.
Love u sis.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sis, i so much loved dis update...👏

dere was everything in it...hahaha...

romance(end wala scene),

action(knife wala),

comedy(court),

senti(bechara abhay kaise ro raha tha...)

hahahahha...loved da update...da court wala scene was damn funny...
n loved da last scene...
u r an awsome writer...👏
update soon...😆

what what what...????????????? marriage of abhiya...????????? now i seriously can't wait...😆

Edited by abc123chiti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story pl\z update soon
thanks for the pm

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