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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Superb update meera !!!

This abhay was totally different and funny too!!! love the way he talk to that lady !!! i think soon they start know that they made for each other . bike ride was superb!!!!Abhay was so naughty and he eat !2 chillies then not stop yet !!! End was amazing continue soon !!!

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Having fun in the littlest of things,
Finding happiness in small things,
That was the essence which was well potrayed here,
Good job Meera!

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

superb story...😊...lively life...Abhiya in colorful life...love it...plzzz pm me...😊

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

opps what a mad day.. its so awesome yaar. i fee like i am also with them... enjoying mad ride

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fatima

@Yumna786

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Posted: 13 years ago

#325

lovely update...i love all update dear..u r a great writer..u describeit very welln abhiya each n every dialoges,scene situation etc,etc,etc...awesome..loved it..abhiya gwent there on bike..simply romantic..hope they fall in love soon n very lovely update full of abhiya on happeiness n enjoy...loved it..aunty scene so funny n cone...running n every scene..luv u..thanks 4 pm..n continue soon..can,t wait to read more..

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
great update meera!!👏awesome to see abhiya like this!!wow!!

Thanks...

Originally posted by: _Sonu_
That was such a cute update Meera...😳 😍
Loved it..❤️
both of them r so naughty..😆

yup,abhay is getting out of his shell😉

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
brilliant update
lvd their outing
thanks for pm

thanks!

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
awesum update😃
loved it❤️
abhay is changing n laughing wid pia😎
that chilli wala part😆
they will go again 4 outing🥳
continue soon
thanx 4 pm😳

thanks...

yeah,she is indeed changing her!

i so loved to write tht chilly part😆

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Wowww WHAT a Lovely update:-):-) :-) I LOVE IT:-):-)

Thanks!

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Brilliant update meera really good chalo abhay jeena sikh gaya

thanks snig waiting for u to update ur i'll b der for u😉

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Amazing meera. I loved every part of it. Finally abhay je colourless life mein colour bhar diya, piya ne, gr8. Amazing tour and that chilli wala and aunty wala part was damn funny. Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Thanks romunow u'll see changes in abhay!

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: anjali0111
wow lovely update!!!👏⭐️Thanks😛

abhiya spent whole day with each other...enjoying...gr8!!!

loved every part if it right from their bike ride to the beach walk...i could imagine them enjoying each others company...so beautiful n cute😍
The bike ride was a glimpz of old coming back to abhay present!
liked their chillies eating race n the part where they tease that aunty...it was so funny.😆😆

when pia out her arms around abhay's waist while returning...it seems to me like a symbol of their growing trust n friendship...😍lovely...Yeah,i wanted to keep it simple like mostly we do with whom you are really comfortable!yup,pia has started to trust him!
just lean on ur frnd when u get tired frm the world!wow i got a quote by me 😆will use it😉
and when abhay simply asked her- "phir chalogi" n she smiled..was another beautiful moment.😊
Sometimes it is not needed to prepare everythng n do the best...its good to flow with the wind too...😊
continue soon

HIIIEEE!!! 😃 I am back with my sadi si update...turned out to be kachra na??but yet the love story seems heavenly isn't it? 😍Sadly this one is the last part 😭

i want to write more...and i am glad you all also encouraged me to do so,but i m afarid i will ruin it if i added anything else.I tired to keep it as realistic as possible 😛

But yay! abhiya are finally together 😛

Sorry for not updating from so looonnng!!!!!!!!!!had so much stuff to do...

ok now quickly read and temme hows the update!😃

Btw...Merry Christmas! ❤️

11- You brought the colors

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"Pia,what are you doing?Its raining heavily!!lets get in..."he said.

But she didn't budge and got drenched in rain...she even dragged him with her

"Abhay...life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass,its about learning to dance in the rain!"She grinned as he nodded understanding what she meant...and he mumbled "Crazy girl" and she giggled while dancing in the rain.

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"Dance with me!"he continued.

He kept looking at her as they danced, caressing her milky soft waist.

"Pia..."

"Hmm"

"everything seems so beautiful today na?"

"Mmm..."She rested her head on his shoulder as they danced.

Huh,Someone has said right..."Life isn't about number of breaths u take it is about the number of moments that took your breath away.

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A month went...their project was finally successful!

damn!she's dying to know why that MD ka bacha called him in his cabin!and why is it taking so long!!!!

Wait,did i just called sir,Md ka baccha? she thought. But then brushed it off thinking 'even he calls her abhay ki chamchi sometimes!' she frowned cutely.

Just then,Abhay came.She pouted," Abhay!!kitni der laga di...and what was he saying?"

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"Abhay,what did he say?" Pia rushed to abhay excitedly and asked him again.But,abhay didn't say anything and...just left.Confusing her.

"What?" she asked aggressively and demanding as the MD came outside.But even he was quiet. So spitted angrily "Were you guys planning your bidai inside the room ?" And went off.

A few hours past,and she felt something is terribly wrong.Abhay hasn't come inside their cabin yet.Where the hell is he!!!!

And there! As she moved out of her cabin she found him standing beside the coffee machine silently with head bowed to the ground,which actually seemed like wanting to be buried.

"Abhay?"

"Pia." his head shot up and uttered the words that irked him before she could open her mouth "Well,i got what i wanted."

Abhay looked in pia's eyes as she closed her lips.

"finally ...i got-it." he talked soft. " And after three days,am going to Europe."

Abhay stopped his lips. Pia's lips quivered.No one spoke anything but eyes spoke everything. Irony,abhay knew the reason,pia knew the reason...but no one spoke.Someone came and put a sweet in abhay's mouth but he payed no heed.He asked abhay to offer another one to pia,and as abhay did so...pia, blankly left chewing the sweet...and also the sadness...

Three days passed...Pia's room is dark,with purple light penetrating thru purple curtains that hung till floor.While pia sat beside her sofa on the floor, with photographs of abhay and her scattered all around.Abhay has not called her from 3 days,nor she had...they didn't try to contact each other.She smiled remembering what fun it was..."He was so happy that day,and the toher day he was so furious,and that...he is growling at poor kitty who just did pee over his shoes''

But now,he will be gone,the fun will be gone,the aliveness will be gone...he must be in airport now...doing the formalities...i wish,he had called me for once.she thought as a tear rolled her cheeks.'or i had the courage to talk to him..'

What vulgarity the did while dancing in a party made her laugh loud...

And also brought tears in her eyes...

"Abhay,i promised myself to fill colors in your life but meri life toh begrang reh gayi" She smiled watching the photograph in which abhay is angry and pia is laughing at him too hardly.

"Tumhare bina meri zindagi mein rang kaise ho sakte hain..." A voice came from behind,the dark side.

She didn't have to look to know who it was; this was a voice she would know anywhere ' know, and respond to, whether she was awake or asleep' or even dead, I'd bet. The voice she'd walk through fire for ' or, less dramatically, slosh every day through the cold and endless rain for. Abhay.

Pia turned hurriedly and stood up thinking probably he came from back door as he came towards her leaving his red wheeled - suitcase and stopped just 7 steps before her and bend to one knee...

"Piya,i guess ...I don't need words to express,shed tears,ask for a smile or yours,hold your hand possessively and ask you to walk with me...All i need is to be with you.Not because i want you ..bcoz i need to be with you...i don't feel alone without you now.I feel incomplete without you!i got what i always wished for but now it seems it was never what i truly wish for.I tried but...i couldn't leave you" His voice shivered but then he continued...

"piya...i owe you,i had nothing to live for...but you came in and brought colors in my life" "I love you."

And that was it...pia came running to his arms forgetting the past living the present she whispered to him "guess what,i do the same" and embraced him again not letting him to go anywhere again...

Time passed,they got married but you know what?they still go for bike ride and candy floss every Saturday ...

Edited by ilove99 - 12 years ago

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Simi.Sweet

@Simi.Sweet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

😆Haye haye haye mein waari jawaaan chich u've done it again ...Wonderful fantastic superb awesome blosom amazing abhiya abhiya abhaiyaaa😍chilli!😆awesome ...mazedaar update keep it up!🤗