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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great start. I think the work devil is Abhay. Pls update soon and add me in ur pm list.

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice start!!!! 👏

tell me r u inspired by holi...i mean lots of dialogue abt the colours🤣

jokes apart.😳...i really liked it.👍🏼 so as u mentioned 'beast' that means abhay is a vampire here also n pia a normal girl...n who was the MD of the co. is he imp. in the story???? n who is this 'work devil'?❓ is he abhay or sum other man is coming in pia's life????😕 u said in the last line that- -colours brought by one in other's life though itself remain colourless...does that mean it has a sad ending???😔 if so then plz make it happy ending.😍

so i will not bore u wid any more questions😳...i knw u cant answer all of them right now as u hv to maintain suspense to bind ur readers wid ss...so continue soon plz.😉

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megha sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice start.waitin 4 pia's meeting vid d devil abhay:)

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sandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

superb concept meera !!!!

so pia have some past !!!1

i think pia new devil is abhay !!!

lets see what happen then they meet each other!!!

its supernatural or human story i m confuse about it !!!

but i loved it !!!

continue soon !!!!

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

meera...it was a beautiful start..i loved it..waiting to read more...continue soon...

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Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 13 years ago

Accha upd8 tha!! Pls PM me the nxt time!!

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

Colours are what add fun to life..

Nothing is exactly colourless...

Lets see...AbhIya ka pyaar kya rang layegi!

Good start Meera

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Akshita

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Posted: 13 years ago

NYC start dear... cont soon and thanks 4 d pm

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coolcats123

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Posted: 13 years ago

nyc concept pls pm me wen u update again...

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hema

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice start ,cntinue nd plz pm me whn u update

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