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wow!! Awesum update meera! 👏
loved reading it! 😳
abhaiya's unknwn feelings for eachother, their intence gaze, pia's innocent beauty nd abhay's unrecognisble desires...and mst of all the rain..this entire part was writtn in a most beautiful n remarkable way!!! 👏
it ws dreamy n too romantic!! 😳
trust me,while readng it i felt it ws actualy raining outside tht too n such a hot weathr!!! 😳
and the part where abhiya fell on bed, from their intence eyelock,closeness,water drops fallng, to their unspokn emotions...each n evrythng was beautifuly potrayd!!! It was full of passion!! 😳
and the last part ws gud too! Bth of thm dining togthr nd bidding gudbye wth their unspkn words was just lovely! ❤️
aww..abhay hugged her be4 living!! Its grt!! 👍🏼
i just cnt belev it!! Bt does it mean abhay hs takn hs 1st step towards pia?? Hope pia wil do the same!! 😳
once again..the update ws lovely!!👏
plz do continue asap...awaitng the nxt chappy eagerly!
Thanks 4 the pm..tk.cre..😊
--indu
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago