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Posted: 13 years ago
just 1 word ! Splendid 😛!!!! I just read all the 11 chapters at 1 go 😃!!!! its just awsm !!! u 2 r really doing a great job !👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing dr... i m loving dis friendship...
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

Update kab milega..?



Jab bhi Juhi madam update likh le...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

brilliant Shreya both abhiya saved eachother so what is Pia actually ?



Wait for that😉 Pia is very...special, shall we say?😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Saayaniz

just 1 word ! Splendid 😛!!!! I just read all the 11 chapters at 1 go 😃!!!! its just awsm !!! u 2 r really doing a great job !👏



Thanks for reading Sayani😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

amazing dr... i m loving dis friendship...

cont soon



Thanks a ton Akshi😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 12


Pia returned back to the college.So many thoughts were running in her mind.She just cant able to think properly.What is all happening around her.From the day she had entered dehradoon her life has become a mess.The very second of the college she used her powers,Misha's b'day party was a disaster for her,she came to know about her so called father and then Abhay read her thoughts without her pemission and after that ..that thing it was still there in her mind fresh and raw.That night in her anger she had just let it go but today..today she was not angry but concerned,concerned that something doesnot happen to him.That feeling was very new to her,she was feeling this way for the first time.She had always been to herself never allowed anynody to come near for their own safety,she had always been alone.but now this new feeling was disturbing her too much,creating a havoc in her mind.Whenever she was around Abhay although till today she had avoided him but still whenever he comes near her she felt like this.Why???her mind was shouting.then come to think of those wolves-were they really there to take revenge from Abhay as what Abhay said or were they here for her.She doesn't know.So many questions and not a single answer.She has used her powers today also in front of those wolves to save Abhay god only knows what is next.Pia became frustrated with these thoughts,but this was not an and to her thoughts.Her mind again went back to today's events…"I saved Abhay,Why?No I saved because I did not want him to get hurt because of me.He went to the forest because he was angry with me.Yes this is the reason but then I was concerned for him…like this only one person is there for whom I am concerned so much…Dhruv.I can't afford to lose Dhruv and I can't afford to lose Abhay.HUH?WHY?WHY CAN'T LOSE ABHAY. HE IS NOONE TO ME…uff!! I will go mad at this rate.

Dhruv and Anvesha:

( They were sitting in the canteen.)

Anvesha-What happened Dhruv you look tensed?

Dhruv –No nothing actually I was just wondering where is Princess.You know I was not around her for years and now I can't let her away form my sight even for a minute.

Anvesha felt a lil sad and a pang of jealousy hit her hard but she saw something different too.A strong bond between Pia and Dhruv-You seemed to be very protective for her.

Dhruv-Yeah I am.He said with a smiled.

Anvesha twitched her lips nervously as she doesn't want to risk her new friendship with Dhruv but still it concerned her brother so gathering up her courage she finally spoke-ummh..Dhruv I understand your worries about her and I don't want to be harsh but you see I am not happy with her.You see yourself she hurt bhai.

Dhruv-Anvesha I know about this.But its is really hard for her to trust someone.And if you ask me the truth Abhay was the first person she trusted who eventually broke her trust.And don't include me,how much ever she trusts me but deep down I know she cant.(Me being a human how can she trust me-thought Dhruv).Just give her lil time I m sure she will come around.

Before they could say something futher,they saw Pia coming towards them all lost in her thoughts.

In The College:

Pia finally reached the campus to take the notes and give it to Abhay as she promised brushing all toronado like thoughts aside.She went to canteen area and saw Misha,Jeh,Dhruv and Anvesha sitting there.She always wondered why Kabir never accompanies them sometimes she started to suspect him never tried to check on him whether he is right or not but let it go.She walked over to Jeh and asked,"umm….Jeh can I please borrow your notes."Anvesha Misha and Jeh were shocked to see Pia talking so sweetly and nicely.Dhruv noticed a change in her."Good she is giving them a chance and giving a chance to herself too"Thought Dhruv with a small smile."Ya..y..aa..ya sure Pia have whatever you want.."Jeh almost stammered."Jeh I m so sorry for my past behaviour and to you too Misha.Its just I always kept to myself..I just..I am sorry"Pia said with a dazzling smile on her face but she doesn't know how to explain herself.She was coming around to these new surroundings of talks.Anvesha got up from her place and placed a friendly hand on Pia's shoulder"Its all right Pia we understand.There must be some reason behind it.All under waters now.""Pia is that blood on your cheeks??"Jeh asked her getting shocked.Pia touched her cheekand made it disappear"Oh goh it must have gotten while healing Abhay.What should I answer to him,what should I answer Dhruv."Thought Pia."No..no Jeh its nothing see it yourself.You must have seen something else."Pia lied.Dhruv was already paniced and had rushed to Pia's side.He knew she was lieing."Can I please borrow it"Pia asked again sweetly."Ya sure"Jeh said returning a smile.

Now Pia,Dhruv and Anvesha were there at another table.Anvesha asked her lil harly"Where is bhai?""In his room"Pia answered innocently.She looked at Dhruv and Anvesha's shocked expressions trying to get what wrong she had said."What were you two doing in HIS BEDROOM"Dhruv choked out."Huh?What happened why are behaving like this as if something wrong has happened"Pia still didn't get at what they are hinting finally making her so-called-fake-boyfriend realize that she doesn't understand a word about these things she is too navie."You didn't answered him Pia.."Anvesha asked again."Aa..actually he got a lil hurt so I just drop him by there."Oh cool so you are coming from home?"Anvesha was relived."Yes"Pia said.Pia and Dhruv started moving from there when suddenly Anvesha called them loudly making them jump."How is it possible?You you said you are coming from home.You left college around 3 and if we go by car it will take almost 45 min but you didn't go with Dhruv or anyone and you returned back in one and a half hours.How how can you be so fast?"Anvesha exclaimed."aa..wo I.."Pia fell short of words not knowing what to say that she also has powers."Oh no Anvesha I saw her going in a taxi.Right Princess"Dhruv looked at Pia hinting her to say yes.Pia nodded."And from there I went with Abhay and then came back by taxi only."Pia added before Anvesha could ask anything more."Oh ok then its alright.I better rush to bhai and check if he is alright or not."Anvesha said.Before leaving Dhruv and Anvesha had their brief eyelock which was broken by a boy who collided with Dhruv.Anvesha till now hadn't left.She was a bit angry on the boy with ruin this moment and blushed at this thought."Oh I am so sorry I really am sorry I did'nt notice you."said the boy making an apologetic face."Oh no no its alright its not your fault tottaly"Dhruv smiled at the boy glancing at Anvesha."Hey you look new here are you a fresher?I haven't seen you around."Dhruv asked rotating his eyes like a pandulem from top to bottem seeing the boy standing in front of him.The boy was wearing a simple shirt and a pair of jeans more looked like a nerd among all other students of the mount college."Oh no I study in your class only I just prefer to be mysely and focus on studies.."said the boy."Oh ya I remember now.Adhiraj isn't it.Hi .So this is Pia,my princess,and this is Anvesha.And I m Dhruv "Dhruv introduced all of them."Yes that's right.I m Adhiraj.Ok I should take your leave now bye."Adhiraj smiled and went away.Pia's turned her head in Adhiraj's direction sensing something off and kept staring that spot for a long 10 min until Dhruv shaked her."What happened is everything alright.Why are you looking at Adhiraj like..you know what I mean.""Hmm..no its nothing just drop it.Where is Anvesha.?"Pia asked looking around."Oh she went home.Come we will go too."

Raichand Mansion:

Abhay:

If Pia Jaiswal's mind was messed up how can Abhay Raichand be at peace.He knew Pia had many other things also to be taken care of instead of sitting and thinking about him,whereas there was only one thing roaming in his mind,PIA.He could shake off her thoughts from his mind and that that night when he had kissed her and today…Oh that has shaken him totally.She was different in every way not just because she had powers but there was something in her which was making him go crazy.His thoughts were intruptted by Anvesha who braged in the room looking very angry.

"For the last time I m asking you what happened?"Anvesha shouted at her brother.Abhay was very pissed off now from bringing him down off him dreamland.He has to know what all is happening."Look I told you its nothing.I went to the woods and was a bit injured and Pia saved me.You got your answer now get out from my room."Abhay shouted back."Pia saved you wow!"With that Anvesha went downstairs.She was angry at Abhay for behaving like this.Just then the doorbell rang and Anvesha found Pia standing at her doorsteps.Anvesha was really happy to see Pia there."Hi Anveshva I just came to give the notes to Abhay.""Oh Pia come in na."Pia came inside and for the first time saw how big the mansion was like of kings.She looked around the hall and was not surprised by the fact that it was dimly lit with all the high class decorations.She had figured this out from behavior that Raichands preferred to live in the darkness."So Pia tell me exactly what all has happened because bhai is not telling me anything."Anvesha asked her a bit sternly.Pia looked at her friend and thought for a while whether to say the truth or not because Anvesha was aware of the fact that Pia knew them being the vampires so why not telling a lil bit and mostly the thing is Abhay was injured."Actually Anvesha Abhay was attacked by the werewolves."Pia finally blurted out a lil hesistently."What"A sudden shock and fear ran across her face.Pia knew that Anvesha cared for her nosy brother a lot but he doesn't give a hoot to it."Anvesha I m soory I didn't mean to make you worry thats why…but he is fine now.."Anvesha was still recovering from the shock and looked at Pia who looked genuinely sorry."Ohk..I get it that's what he was not telling me.Thank god mom dad are out of town otherwise I don't know what would have happened…"

"Aa..Anvesha can you please give this to him I have to go somewhere with Dhruv.Pia said cutting her in between."Oh ya sure you come to hi is room only and hand it to him."Anvesha said moving towards the stairs."And Pia please don't tell him that you and Dhruv are only friends."Pia was a lil shocked at this."Hun?How do you know?"Anvesha mentally slapped her mind for her stupidity."Ah I just guessed."Pia said nothing and slowly started walking towards room carefully observing every place of the hall.

Anvesha entered his room bringing him out of his thoughts and said,"bhai someone is here to meet you."Abhay answered irritatedly"I don't want to meet anyone""Alright I will say this to Pia vaise bhi she has to go somewhere with Dhruv..I think on another date"With that Anvesha turned her back to him and showed that she is going to tell Pia."What Pia is here why didn't you tell me before.""As I thought"Thoght Anvesha mischiviously.Just then Pia entered the room."There ,Pia come you wanted to talk to him na..""Ya..I mean how are you feeling now Abhay"Pia was feeling a bit embaraced again standing in front of him like that after what happened sometime before."I m fine Pia thank you"Anvesha thought of leaving them alone for sometime,"Ok Pia you sit I will go and bring something for you…""Oh no no don't bother..(turning to Abhay)Here are the notes.I have to Dhruv is waiting there for me."Anvesha stooped her in her tracks and said,"I know we don't eat human foods but there is human food at our home so tell me what do wanna eat.."She was saying all this moving her hands in differt directions making faces which made Pia giggle."Ok if you insist just a glass of water."Anvesha reached the door and then turned around and asked,"btw we also have blood but I don't think you will take it"She joked and went away whereas the truth was Pia can feed on blood too.Both of them were feeling awkward too taqlk too each other.Pia just wanted to away from him ,he was doing something with her mind.abhay decided to break the silence,"Thank you Pia for the notes and you know for saving me.""Oh no need its my duty""So are you and Dhruv rerally serious I mean you both are dating?"Pia was furious at this why has he to poke his nose in between every time."That's none of your business and yes we are"Pia almost shouted.Before Abhay could say anything eles Anvesha entered and handed the glass of water to Pia.Pia smiled and thanked her."You know guys I have seen people doing weird things when they get angry but I have never seen anyone tearing the same shirt which he is wearing at that time.How your shirt got teared bhai?"Anvesha asked making a very confused look.Abhay who was continuosly staring at Pia and Pia who was trying to avoid his piercing gaze both were shock and looked and at Anveshva not knowing what to say,what story to cook up."Its nothing.It got stuck on the nail.."said Abhay trying to think what else to say."I am getting late..Got to go.Bye Abhay bye Anvesha."Pia hurried from there leaving a confused Anvesha.Abhay sighed it finally got over.

"IT WAS RELLY A HARD DAY"thought both Abhay and Pia.


Ps:guys I know boring and not interesting chap hai but plz comment zaroor karna.It means a lot to me.

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Mast mast ekdum dhinchak Juhi...Finally Adhiraj aa gaya...Ufff!!!!😃


Btw, zara spelling mistakes hoda dekh lena haan...I know jaldbaazi mein likha hai but if you get time...😛


Superb writing You introduced Adhiraj very well.😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

finally an update juhi.

it is really nice. the way dhruv, pia, anvesha and abhay are making halwa of each other's brain is just amazing.

Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update Shreya and Juhi...👏

I'm glad to see Pia opening up a little...and everyone's thoughts were hilarious...😆
I'm really sorry for keeping my post reserved for so long...
Edited by _Sonu_ - 13 years ago

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