FF-Hum Tum:) chapter 23 on pg 96...NEW UPDATE*****

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#561

Gal you left me speechless with your wonderful writing I wait everyday for you to update Lovely aww abhay gifted Pia a flower no wait the flower aww

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woooo23

@woooo23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

😊Sooper dooper cute😳
Awesome abhiya can't wait for your new update and thanks for da pm love youuu😃
And plzz give some abhiya scenes like before🥱

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

headline: "SPEECHLESS"

it ws beautiful... dear
i luv d way pia ws lukin herslf in d mirror...she liks him 2 much
abhay is sooo swt... his dialogue were hilarious...
he gv her d flowers of her choice omg!!!!!!!!! incredible...
is he a demi god?
a mesmerizing walk
pia ws blushing oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow!!!!!!!!!i really lik his style... he liks her sooo much bt stil nvr leaves a single chance 2 taunt her...d way he ws pulling her leg ws amazing
poor shaurya uncle...
moral: u r superb writer "k" luv u tk care

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#564

superb update

its so beautifully written

abhay brought that flower for pia...dat was so sweet

just lvd it

he actually made shurya singh believe that their conversation was his imagination 😆

abhay's dialogues are simply rocking

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

Hey krishi..cn u temme tat ven pia ws telin abt hr 'frnd'.. did he undstud tat c ws indicating hm or he ws getin red out of jealousy??*confusd*

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

Awsum as usual...
abhay pia went 2 d old temple dats cool...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

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chandni

@TeDylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

amazing update..i love all the parts..😳😳
krishi when u expose what is abhay?😕

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#568

ufff superb update yar...
loved abhiya too much the way you exposed them...
abhay really brought pink flower for piya...yupieee
loved the piya last dailogue daemigod wow...
so she is falling for him...
whats the mystery behind the temple?
its belong to abhays past na...
cont soon