OS:TRYST WITH DESTINY UPDT PG 5 (25 MAR)

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

great gng nidhi!!another fab piece f writing!!please cntnu ths,if u can!!:-)

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awesome OS ...
Abhay's inner turmoil was beautifully written!
write the another part soon.
Thanx 4 d pm
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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

beautifully written loved it Nidhi . thanks for the pm. 😊

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Very nice Nidhi... good to see you are writing another OS 👏

I would prefer if Pia came back for Abhay...the initial shock was predictable and ok but thn she sud have come back instead of trying to run... waiting for the next part and thanks for the PM 😳

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

beautiful ...wrk nidhi
continue soon...thanks 4 pm👏

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wonderful written dear

i loved it

continue soon

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

wow great story plz update soon
my name is Alicia pm

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navnit

@sukusnavnit

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

beautiful os .plzz bring pia back to abhay in a very different way which would prove her true love for him which the cvs failed to show in the show.

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

[QUOTE=abhayfan_dishu]had i been the CV i wud surely have made Pia rush back to the spot she had left ABhay. i m sure u would do the same😳[/QUOTE]yup dishu...ths scene whch ws one ov d most imp scenes was so poorly portrayd that tws heartbreakng...well u wl av to wait for what i av in mnd...😛