ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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great update!! Hmm...things happnd really very fast..i didnt xpctd dis so early...!! Bt d way abhay cravd for piya nd piya's suddn urge to drawn ws perfctly writtn...!! Overall an excillent update!! :) waiting to knw abhay's nxt move as well as piya's...!
thx fr d pm ayesha...tcr...

--Indu

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Ayesha Dear Best of Luck !! 😃

-Indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

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Whoaa... that was hawwttt ☺️

I wasn't expecting it to happen so soon offcourse but loved reading it. and best part was Pia got herself back instead of getting seduced by Abhay. Abhay will loose his marbels at this rate 😆 Its gonna be super fun...

Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Looking for next chapter
please up date soon

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Pallavi Sarkar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

thnx for d pm

gr8t 👏👏

loved it

cont soon

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#456

1 word..AWSUM!!seriously..w8n 2 c hw pia changes abhay..plz pm me dr..:-)kip goen..

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Piya really is a tease. Gauri,well written yar the official introduction was awesome!
Abhay is going to go all guns blazing for Piya now- this will be fun!

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#458

That was one heck of an official introduction☺️...

Good job Gauri

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#459

Oh man! That was hawt ☺️ Pia fell for her own bait 😲 She let Abhay seduce her and almost lost herself to him. 😉 Never expected Pia to give in so easily. She isn a human after all. Enjoyed reading the update 😊 Gr8 job 👏

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Oh man! That was hawt ☺️ Pia fell for her own bait 😲 She let Abhay seduce her and almost lost herself to him. 😉 Never expected Pia to give in so easily. She isn a human after all. Enjoyed reading the update 😊 Gr8 job 👏

Gauri did a good job. I just made a few adjustments. near the end so PIA isn't seduced full by ABHAY. We don't want a fallen angel and let the vampire in ABHAY win. Where is the fun in that????