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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u for pming me and iis jay,samar-alina and sid faking friendship with pia's gang for their benefit...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff now cave mystery... so many mystery... abhay, his human family, metz, dat kidnapper... sid plan... full on mystery... but i love to think abt mystery and to read them... nice part... waiting 4 next part...
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nice update
it's getting more and more interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...want to more...continue asap😊
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a v nice update.mystery he mystery hay.i have sent u buddy request plz accept it and do pm me ur writings
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...really what will happening to abhay...he is no more vampire?...i really felt bad to see piya like this...so now abhay went in cave...wondering whats the plan of sid...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read all the chapters...i really enjoyed it. Well done 👏
I still cant believe that piya did it to abhay..she raped him 😲 🤣 ..not actually..but it seems like
Aww abhay was crying after that 😆 ...
It was a long back chapter..but i read it now..
abhay is changing 😲 ..feeling very bad for piya 😭
I want now abhiya moments..they are apart from many days...
Update soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii everyone..
i m back with new update..
thanks for all ur comments...
i hope u all liked it...
please do comment and for pm send buddy request...
here is the next chapter...
hope u will like it-

chapter 25-
at chillies-
when abhay entered the ,the loud music was just cherry on the top for his head to blast with pain...
abhay(irritated)-"great.that what i needed"..
he was already half an hour late and he know if not all than misha wont spare him..he looked to locate them in this noisy crowd...
and yes!! he could locate them...braising himself to listen their banter he went to them..everyone was gathered around a table..and were chatting or having drinks...
abhay-"hey everyone!!!"
misha(sarcastically)-"hii abhay!!how come so early??i thought you would be on time.."
everyone looked at the duo..
abhay-"umm misha..im sorry."
misha(innocently)-"ohh no no why say sorry.u haven't done any wrong (turns to other)in fact i should say thank you to come so early..thank you so much abhay."
abhay-"no.i mean woh me.."(he looks at other for help but found them amused to his misery..now he has to handle misha alone )
misha(folding her arms cross her chest)-"yes what woh me..??"
everyone was amused to see abhay tongue-tied in front of misha.it was not every day to see abhay like this..they were happy to see a flick of old abhay after so many days and they were happy whatever the cause may be and it was hope that its not too late.something can be done..sid has discuss the plan with them and all agreed to be part in it and now they are in progress..hope what they plan works out...abhay looks at sid..
abhay-'bhai.."(call for his rescue)
misha-"what bhai..(turns to sid)sid do u have anything to say??"
sid shakes his head as no and raises his hand defeat..
sid-"little brother i can't do anything..it is your call..u handle it..i m off to drink.anyone wanna join than come.."
jay-alina-shanker-samar went with sid.
angad-"ruhi,will u dance with me??"
ruhi-"ofcourse.."
and they too left.
misha-"so yes!! mr.abhay riachand where we were??"
pia-"mishaaa ..leave it yarr ..at least he came...now don't be cranky"
misha-"i m being cranky.??me??oh yes!! u would always side with ur lover..who am i ??just a cranky sister.."
pia-"misshhaa"(looks at abhay who looked uncomfortable).
kabir-"hey champ.lets go have our shot competition let me tell you this time i will win..."
and kabir drags misha from there...now only pia and abhay are left...
pia sensing the awkwardness..
pia-"hey!!..sorry woh misha toh bas aise he.."
abhay-"no its..its alright..i know her..."
pia-"so how are u doing??"
abhay-"hmm good '
pia(smiles)-"if u say so...but (abhay look at her)i know its not.abhay please listen to me...i know something is wrong with u.u are not in urself..u are in some problem..please share it with ur family,atleast ur bhai..u know he would help u out..i know u don't need my advice but please for what we used to share "
abhay looked other side..
piya became sad looking at abhay's quietness towards her..but she know she deserve this after what she did with him..atleast he is here infront of her...
abhay was hell confused ,disturb with every thing around him and with him..his throat was burning..
pia-"what happen??"(seeing him restless)..you...okk??"
abhay(getting up)-"i..i need a drink"
and went to bar...
abhay gulp down a shot after shot...
after 10 shots of taqilla...
abhay-"damm its not working..i still..."
jay(interrupting him)-"hey,...easy dude...are u on run..10 shots!!!.."
abhay-"it..its nothing..i will just be in a minute.."
and walks out of club...

he began walking in the forest but didn't realized that someone was following him..he reached the cave and looked at it ...
voice-"this is impossible!"
abhay turned-"what are u doing here,pia.u were following me"
pia was shocked would be understatement...
abhay noticed it..pia walked upto the cave and examine it...
pia-"how is this possible.it was here,,in dehradun of all places!!this is ridiculous,,it was hidden for centuries.how come it shows up here out of no where.it shouldn't be..if someone will know..oh god!!"
abhay looked at her confused..it was like she was talking to herself...
abhay-"pia..i .."
pia(completely ignoring him)-"but how it appear??it was meant to be open by prince of pandher..but he.."
abhay-"thats me!!.."
pia(confused)-"huhh.."
abhay-"i m the prince u are talking about or should i say i was"
the last part was more like whisper but pia could hear...
pia-"what??u are prince of pandher.. the prince, abeyendra singh pandher(abhay nodded not knowing what else to do)oh my god!!!the prince of pandher!!!, is here..in front of me but how is that possible..the whole royal family were dead."
abhay-"not all.."
pia-"means the humors of escaping of royal prince and princess was true"
abhay-"yes me and my sister escaped..but were"
pia(completes)-"were caught and executed later"
abhay-"yes!!we were caught but then riachand family came and saved us..i was unconscious for 2 weeks but when i woke up..i was changed..i was vampire."
pia-"and your sister??"
abhay(with wet eyes)-"she died .they coudn't save her.."
pia came forward,took his hand and rubbed it
pia-"i m sorry!!"
abhay nodded..
abhay-"but how come u know all about this??"
pia-"being supernatural and dad interest in pandher history..i got to know all this..dad always used to tell me about the pandher kingdom,their royal family etc..."
abhay nodded..
pia-"how did u find it(abhay looked her)the cave.."
abhay-"i..just...i dont know how it happened ..(he lied.he doesn't want anybody know what he was upto)i just came to visit palace and then suddenly..."
explain about how a ray of light came out of his hand and shows him path and he found this cave ...
pia-"huhh this is wierd..we all thought we will never find this cave..."
abhay-"why??"
pia(confused)-"why do i feel you don't know what you should have known??"
abhay"and that is..."
pia was thoughtful...
abhay-"pia.."
pia -"ohh yes!!(seriously)did you told anyone about this??"
abhay-'no..first i want to know what is in cave.."
pia-"so what are u waiting for??lets go!!"
abhay-"there is problem!!..i couldn't enter it..its like some force or invisible wall is stopping me to go further"
pia(thoughtfully)-"ohh!! but how is it possible..u being the prince,the right owner is able to find the cave but couldn't enter it..thats weird "
abhay-"pia!!why did you say that i should have known??what is it??"
pia(hesitant)-"umm..woh.."
abhay-"please pia..i know u can help me with this.please.."
pia-"abhay..i think u should ask ur family.they know better.."
abhay(angryily)-"what do you think i hide this from them.didn't i know them!!.they won't tell me or they would lie to me like they lied about my real parents!!!(pia was shocked but abhay ignored)they have been lying all my life god knows what..and i dont know what to believe or not..and if you don't wanna help me than go away..leave me"
pia(came closer,staring in his eyes with love)-"i wont go away..i will never leave you..you will always find me beside you..i promise.."
abhay looked in her eyes and could see warmth,love for him..
pia-"i will help you..no matter what..but lets go from here..."
abhay-"but i want.."
pia(put his hand on his cheek)-"i know you want to know whats in there..but before that u should know something which is very important..okk(abhay nodded putting his hand on her hand which was on his cheek)but before that u have hide this cave so no one could see it.."
abhay-"but how?i don't know..."
pia-" just like u opened it.."
abhay look at her,she smile at his and nodded..
abhay closes his eyes,calm himself down,concentrated hard.suddenly wind flows furiously,abhay's tattoo shines and he opens his eyes,his eyes were all white,he raises his hand and a ray of light comes out of his hand and flows towards the cave and cave disappear..
abhay again closes his eyes.. and soon was back to his normal self..
pia-"lets go..."
abhay-"but how did i do that??"
pia-"u will know.."
and both walks to her house...
at the far away corner,three men were hiding..
man1-"master,we have finally found it.."
hooded man(same one who kidnapped abhay)-"just wait for the right time..we have waited for centuries..just few more days..prince abhenydra...your count down begins..(evil smirk)"
man2-"so what we have to do next??"
hooded man-"for now,just keep following him.we have reached till here..now the day is not far when this world will be in my feet".


in doberial house-
abhay(unsure)-"why we came here..??"
pia-"i want to show you something(seeing him restless).relax! abhay!!"
abhay nodded..
panchi opens the door..
panchi-"hey abhay...nice to see u here..come.(all move inside)party got over very soon!!"
abhay-"hey panchi!!.no actually.."
pia-"party was great but we have a project to submit in college on monday...so need some books from library.."
panchi-'okk..i have to go office ..have some work with dad related NGO..so help yourself ..bye abhay..bye pia and pia,please see that misha returns before dad come okk..'
pia nodded..
panchi left..
pia-"sorry..i lied to her"
abhay-"no..its fine..i understand..shall we proceed"
pia-"ya.."
both walks to library..
pia-"as u see i belong to your world(abhay look at her)..i mean supernatural..so being half white witch..i have some books of my mom and some are collected by dad..its all related to supernatural world including dehradun history..so i think may be we can get some clues from them..lets start.."
abhay nodded..pia walked a particular self and removed some books from self and with the key open a secret drawer...and took out some old withered yellowish books written in ancient language..
pia-"this contains the beginning of original wiccan family..."
abhay-"what it has to do with me??"
pia-"oh yes!! u have to..i m not going in detail..it will take time..(abhay nodded)see abhay this is the family tree of originals(shows him a picture)according to the tree your parents were the direct descendant of originals and thus you being a original wizard..."
abhay-"what??but is it possible??i never knew about this and i never used my powers.. and my parents,they didn't tell me..we were all humans or that what i thought.."
pia-"actually during pandher dynasty time,wiccan families were under cover or u can say that they preferred living a normal human life so may be they hide from you or were waiting for a right time for u to understand all this and moreover these wiccan power kicked up at age of 18-20..but as u told me,before you could gain or know about it..u were turned into vampire and being vampire you can't have wiccan power ..its nature law..a dark creature can't have something so pure,soulful..."
abhay-"what about cave??"
pia-"hmm okk(she turn the pages of book and show him sketch of same cave)see this is the cave..(she reads)this cave was made by the original wiccan family with help of other witches.. it was made when there was war between all supernaturals for the dominance in world thus,acc. to this,it contains things which could lead the world to its better future or its doom..it was so secretive that only original knew what was in it and they prevented it with there life..it was magically hidden from the world so that it doesn't go in
wrong hand..but one of original was rebel.he wanted something which was prohibited and thus results in big fight...but at last he ran away but made a prophecy to the cave..."
abhay-"prophecy??"
pia-"actually the prophecy is on the person who would be able to find the cave.i mean its right owner..."
abhay-"and that is me...this prophecy is for me.."
pia-"yes..and with the look of it..it doesn't seem to be a good one.."
abhay-"what is it??and what is in cave??"
pia looked at next page but found one page was torned..
pia-"see the page is torned..some one has torned it..i don't know what the prophecy is and what is in cave .dad didn't told me about it too and its not even mention in book.."
abhay-pia look at each other...and then abhay walks to window nearby and look at sky..
pia look at him with concern and abhay was expressionless..
after some time...
abhay-"now i understood the whole picture.."
pia(confused)-"what do you mean??'
abhay-"now i understand .."
pia-"what??"
abhay-"nothing...(turns towards her)okk tell me how can i enter the cave.."
pia(reads in book)-"i don't know..its so confusing..u are the one who could open the cave but how??..u are vampire..it says only the original heir would be able to do that...that means he has to be a wizard"
abhay-"but i did something back to open that cave.."
pia-"yes!!it only means you are gaining your wiccan powers..(to herself)and losing vampire power...oh i see that is what abhay is changing into..but how..is it possible..i have to talk to alina..they are really hiding something now also.. and i don't understand what was this whole issue of hiding all this from abhay..i really have to talk to them"
abhay-"hey pia where lost..???r u ok??"
pia-"yes!! so what were u saying??"
abhay-"i was saying why not try some spells or any magic to enter.."
pia-"no abhay,i think we should not go now..its too late..everyone will start questioning us for missing for hours.already,we missed the party..we will go tomorrow,okk..promise(smile)..but now u should go
home..u look so drained..go and rest okk we will do something about the cave tomorrow till than i will search in any other book for any clue..okk??"
abhay nodded,,
both moved back in hall
abhay-"thanks for the help pia.."
pia(smiles)-"no need..atleast i could do something for u.."
abhay smiles and walks out...
pia messeged alina
"part 2 complete..."



precap-
abhay entered cave
sid plan's part 3 begins...
disclosure of hooded man

note-
i know i have updated after ages..many of have left the forum also..
so now i wont be pming all .
please hit the like button or comment or send me buddy request for pming..
i wil pm from next time to those only
Edited by laxmii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..res
Edited
Hmm such a myterious update..so abhay is gaining his wiccan power and loosing vampire power.. 😲 ..the hooded men are doing this for the cave...both abhiya are keeping some secrets..what is sid up to..when will piya know that maithli is abhay's sister??that would be shocking to her..
Update soon..
Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago

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