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will be waiting...😊
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abhiya moment was hawwtt 😳
but hope pia dsnt hate abhay whn she comes to know the truth.. i think abhay should tell pia everything abt that panchi 😡
continue soon nafi 😊
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when you updateng dear😭

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awsm updates flora... update soon
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hey dude next one kab update hoga????
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Chapter- 8 (1)

Pia was blushing badly. She was hell confused of what just happened. Abhay was embraced and dont know what to tell?
At last abhay spoke...
Abhay hesitantly- pia...i think lets go!
Pia was not able to look in abhay eyes. She just simply noded and went in the car. Abhay went to the tyre of car and changed it. The rain has stopped now. Abhay went to open the car.
Abhay in mind- yeh kya hogya tha mujhe! How can i loose my control?? Shit...what i will tell her now?
Abhay got inside his car and drove away.
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THE RAICHAND MASION

Haseena is walking to and fro in living room. She is hell worried about abhay!! She saw something in abhay eyes which is not good...
Yes she saw love in abhay eyes fr that girl pia. But its not good...what if chand knows about it?
Maybe she is wrong?? But if abhay falls in love with her!! No this cannot happen cause abhay is engaged to panchi...
Haseena decided she needs talk to abhay!
But in her heart, personally she found pia suits abhay most...
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ON THE WAY

Abhay and pia r both in silence in the car . Abhay was feeling very guilty!!
At last he spoke' Pia...umm actually i am sorry! I just want to say...'
Pia inturupted- its ok abhay...it just happens! I am sorry too...
Abhay blankly- No u dont...actually...I...
Pia put fingers on his lips- sssh...its alright! No need to feel sorry...
Abhay was just lost again in pia soft touch and pia lost in his blue eyes.
They came out of tarance when sound of horn came. Abhay quickly looked at road and saw a truck coming in full speed. Pia felt frighten and screamed loudly. While abhay quickly turned to otherside with a jerk. Due to sudden movement, pia fell on abhay shoulder and her lips touched abhay cheaks. Abhay felt a jolt of current running through his body. Pia was feeling butterflies in her stomach. She slowly moved back and looked out side the window. Abhay started the car again.
Abhay in mind- oh god...what is happening? Kya hogya hai mujhe! Why i feel so good when pia is near me!! Oh god...pls help! WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME?

Pia on other hand was lost in thoughts. She was not getting what is happening to her! The closeness of abhay was effecting her so much...but why? She only knows abhay a little. They hv only met two days before...
She is very much confussed.

At last they arrived near the hotel, pia got out of car and began to walk without looking at abhay.
Abhay felt bad and could not stop calling her.
Abhay- pia!!!
Pia stopped in her way and turned back' yes!'.
Pia was holding a blank expression, so abhay thought that she is angry with him.
Abhay- take care...bye!
Saying this abhay went away leaving confused pia.
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The Raichand masion

Haseena was just waiting fr abhay. She needs to talk to him.
After half an hr, a sound of door opening were heard. Haseena got up from sofa and saw abhay entering with blank face. Haseena was surprised that her fun loving son was holding a worried expression. She thought it is better to keep quiet.
Abhay went upstairs without looking at haseena.
Haseena thought- what happen to him ? Is he in love with pia?? Abhay looks lost...he was never like this before! OH GOD WHATS GOING ON???
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ABHAY ROOM

Abhay came in with sad and angry face. He slammed the door hardly. He is feeling very guilty to loose control. What must she thinking??
She said it was nothing but...shit...he should not do that!!
Abhay sat on bed rested his forehead on his palm. He was not getting...he was hell confused!!
One side he was feeling guilty and otherside he was sad to feel guilty...
Somehow he felt good in his heart that they kissed in rain...and the scent of her milky skin drived him crazy!! SHIT...he is again thinking of her! Is he falling love??
Suddenly the thought that is he falling in love...made him alert...
Abhay in mind- Nooo...I CANT FALL IN LOVE WITH HER...I JUST MET HER TWO DAYS BEFORE AND...NO THIS CANT HAPPEN!! NOT ONLY HER I SHOULD NOT FALL IN LOVE WITH ANYONE EXCEPT PANCHI...I AM ENGAGED TO HER!! BUT...BUT...JAB BHI PANCHI KA SHAKAL DEKHTI HU BHAGNE KA DIL CHAHTA HAI!! OH GOD...WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME GOD??

Abhay got up from the bed and went near window. He saw moon shinning and falling light on him showing his angellic face. He closed his eyes and pia beautiful face came infront of him...Her beautiful smile, blush...
Abhay opened eyes with jerk and thought' WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME??'
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Chapter 8 (2)

THE HOTEL ROOM

Pia is standing near the window. She was lost in thoughts. She was not getting what happened today!!!
Pia was hell confused...all she could see abhay and abhay! His dimply smile, his naughty smile and his hypotenic blue eyes...
She never felt like this fr anyone. She remembered when she fell on abhay and her lips touched abhay cheaks...she blushed thinking of it...
Pia in mind- oh no...what i am thinking? Cheee...this is not good! Mujhe abhay ke bare me ase nahi sochna chahiye...but why i feel something fr him?? What is this feeling!! Am i falling in love? NOOO...I just met him just two days ago...it cannot happen!! He is just my friend...but why this thought hurts me!! I cant love him...he can be some kind of casanova! OH GOD...PLS HELP ME..

Pia closed her eyes. On the other hand abhay still looking at moon.
Scene shows pia closed her eyes and the moonlight falling on her angellic beauty whereas abhay looking at moon with worried face.
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EARLY IN MORNING

Abhay got really early in morning which was an unusal fr him. He hadnt a good sleep at night. He was just lost in pia...and confused with his feelings!!

Abhay just sat on dining table and began to read newspaper. Suddenly some one snatched the paper from him and began to gigle. Abhay looked up and saw its his little sis...Alice!!
Abhay smiling- Good morning alice!
Alice with a naughty smile- good morning bhaiy! Aj bara jaldi ut gayi...bat kya hai ha??
Abhay smirks- nothing! Just was not feeling sleepy more!! And by the way aj mujhe dad ke office me jana hai and start my wrk...
Alice teasingly- Really!! Oh how sweet...par mujhe lagta hai koi aur hi bat hai!! Ha?
Abhay- no ase kuch nahi he...
Alice smirks- kya kuch nahi he?? Lagta to bohot kuch hai??
Abhay smiles and began to drink water that was kept infront of him.
Alice continued- wase i thought u were just lost in panchi bhabi beauty last night so could not sleep...
Hearing panchi name abhay choked water and began to cough. Alice got shocked and thought' Lagta hai kal bhai moti bhabi ke pas thi! Isliya iss sawal pe ghab ra gayi...i will not leave him! He hv to give every detail.'
Alice teasingly- acha to ap kal raat bhabi ke pas thi? Kya hua waha? DID U KISS HER!

Abhay had already became red fr choking water and due to coughing he felt exhausted.
Abhay angrily- shut up alice! Kuch bi boli jati ho...i was not with panchi...i was out fr some wrk!
Alice sweetly- come on bhai! Dont lie!!
Abhay became furious and yelled' pls alice just shut up ok!! Tumhe bakwas ke sivaya kuch ata hai ye nahi...this enough! Me kal kaha thi, kiske sat thi, kiu thi!! IT IS NONE OF U BUSINESS...U GET THAT!

Alice became silence, shocked and hurt!! As far she knows her brother, he never gets angry this much! If he was angry...he never shouted like this on her or u can say he never shouted...and by the way abhay knows her well!! She is a full time joker!!
Alice was really hurt as he just shouted on a little thing...
She sat quietly opposite to abhay and began to look at her nails!!
After sometime servrents brought breakfast...they began to eat silently without any talk!
Abhay was not in his mind, he felt bad that he shouted on her sis with no reason!!
Abhay was not getting what to do...he was still in angry mood!!
He dont know why?? Alice just ask about panchi and he got angry on her...what is this? He knows that he doesnt like the maraige decision with panchi...but that doesnt means that he will get angry on his sis like this??
But most importantly, he should be happy...cause panchi is his fiance and soon would be wife!!!
But this thought is making him crazy...

Suddenly, haseena came down from upstairs...she was shocked to see that abhay was awake and was hving his breakfast!!
Abhay never gets up early and what makes him to get so early...
Haseen smiles- oh abhay, my sweetheart u r awake!! Good morning...i just went upstairs to wake u fr office!

Abhay with weak smile- GOOD MORNING MOM!!
Haseena came towards abhay and kissed his forehead' My God bless u a long life!'
Abhay smiles. Suddenly, haseena noticed that alice was all quiet...she is not in her talkative and naughty mood!!
She seems to be sad...
Haseena worried- Alice whats wrong? Aj bari chup chap ho!! Bat kya hai...har roz to tum apni bhai ki tang khench ti ho...chahe wo laptop me ye amne samne!! R u alright beta?
Alice gloomly- yes mom...i am fine!
Alice got up from her sit and said to herself' oh no, i will be late fr college!'

She got up and ran upstairs towards her room.
Abhay looked up and saw his sister ran sadly!! Abhay felt bad fr hurting her.
Haseena saw her son lost in thoughts and she became confused.
Haseena thought- what happen to him???
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Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Chapter 8 ( 3 )

ALICE ROOM

Abhay was going to his room to take some important files!!
When he saw alice sadly putting her books in her bag...
Abhay thought to apolise but he removed the thought and began to head towards his room.
As he entered his room, he was feeling wierd fr hurting his sweet sister...abhay decided that he will apolise her right now!!
Abhay imediately ran towards alice room. He saw that alice has packed her bag and maybe will be leaving now...
Alice turned to go when she saw her brother standing with worried face at the door. Alice was still sad and angry on abhay so she was all quiet.
Alice tried to go by passing abhay when abhay blocked the way by putting his one end on wall. Alice tried to go from other side when abhay again blocked the way!!
Alice glaring- bhai let me go! I am getting late...
Abhay teasingly- awww..my little sis is getting late! I never knew that u r so curious in studies...
Alice angrily- bhai i hv no time fr joke...so let me go! Now move from my way...
Abhay smirks- not so soon...first forgive me! Then i will let u go.
Alice glares- what frorgive??
Abhay pouts and holds his ears- i am cholli..i didnt mean to hurt u!!
Alice in broken tone- pls bhai, i dont want to talk to u!!!
Alice began to go when abhay catch her wrist.
Abhay sadly- pls alice...forgive me na! Actually i was so tensed fr some wrk...that i just brust on u!! I love u sis so much that i will never think to hurt u..
Alice angrily turned- oh yeah...what so important that u became so tenced? And scold ur innocent sis!!
Abhay smiling- cholli my innocent sis...it will never happen! Ok.
Alice turned her face- Huh...
Abhay- ok what should i do? Wait...i will stand and sit!
Saying this abhay began to stand and sit holding his ear. Alice was hving very hard time to control her laughing...at last she brust out..
Alice gigling- ok ok...fine! U r forgiven!
Abhay laughing- thats my girl...ok now get ready..i will give u lift on the way to my office!!
Alice laughing- ok bhai just 10mins...wase u r becoming puntual day by day! Kya baat hai ha? Anyways, its good...afterall u will be get married soon!
Hearing marraige, abhay became tensed but didnt show off.
Abhay- ok sis, u just come down! I will be there...
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ABHAY ROOM

Abhay is standing infront of the window letting the sun rays falling on his fair handsome face and making his eyes shining blue...
Abhay is feeling that the arrange marraige of him is going to bring disaster fr him!!!
He is thinking that if he marries panchi...will he be happy? Ofcourse, panchi is his friend of childhood but...he is not in love with her!!
Abhay always wanted to make his lifepartner whom he loves...
Abhay closed his eyes and the face of pia came infront of him!! Abhay open his eyes with fraustation.
Abhay- what the hell? Whats wrong with me!

When suddenly, alice rushed in with mobile in hand.
Alice panicking- bhai...bhai! Ur mobile? Dad is calling...he wants u to reach office right now!! He is very angry...
Abhay frausted- damn it...ek to dad aur uppar se...
Alice got alert as she saw her brother frausted.
Alice worried- what wrong bhai?
Abhay gritting his teeth - nothing, lets go!
Alice sternly- no bhai...first tell me! Otherwise i will not let u go to office?
Abhay frausted- i dont know alice what is happening to me? That pia...
Alice shocked- who is pia? Bhai r u falling fr someone...
Abhay irritated- no, no i dont know! Its like...argh!
Alice- but who is pia?
Abhay- let me explain u...pia is a girl came from italy here to study...the day when she arrived she got lost and cops were after her...i saved her from them! From that day...we became friends! But whenever i am around her...i just feel like i like her...and she is really beautiful( abhay smiles ) but...we met only before two to three days and i am feeling like...
Alice inturrepted- u r in love!!
Abhay shocked- whhaatt??
Alice smiles- yes bhai u r falling in love!
Abhay smirks- really! R u PHD in it?
Alice- shut up...i know that i never fell in love...but it happens when u fall in love u get new feelings!
Abhay- but i cant fall in love with her...i am engaged!
Alice- yes bhai...but i know that ur going to hv arranged marraige! And its obious that u can fall in love...
Abhay worried- but alice how can u be so sure that i am in love??
Alice sighs- look bhai...i dont know u r in love or not but the way u telling purely shows that u r in love...u said that u r liking her!! But even if u hv any confussion then remember when u will care fr her...her sadness will hurt u...u will feel that u cant live without her...then it will be clear to u that u r in deep love!!!
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PRECAPE - ABHAY DECIDES TO STAY AWAY FROM PIA...
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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hey dude when u will post next update????? now its almost 1 month yr... plzzz next 1 jaldi update kro man!!!!! m waiting!!!
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abhay n alice were amazing...abhay is gonna avoid pia😛😲😉
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