abiya ss: Love will never lie pt 10 onpg 61 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds interesting 😊 Please update soon n add me to ur PM list 😊
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Part1

"Its beautiful" said a beautiful voice of a beatiful girl with straight black hair sitting infront of a lake watching sunset. " Yeh very beautiful " said a strickingly handsome boy with jet black hairs n beautiful, deep n intense grey eyes in his deep n manly voice who was sitting beside d girl holding her in his strong, well built n musculine arms looking at her while admireing her natural beauty.


Suddenly girl came out of trance of admireing beauty of nature realising his gaze on her n looked at him n said " I was talking about sunset ". Then boy come to his senses n thought to tease her n looked infront of to the sun which was setting down n then looked back at her n said with a smirk on his beautiful lips " Even I was talking about sunset what did u thought " . The girls cheeks flushed with red colour turning it pink realising his tease. The boy saw the change of colour on cheeks n said n amaze " I just love those colour of your cheeks n can keep on stareing at u n looking at u through out my life. ". The girl blushed n said " n i can stay like this sitting in your arms throughout my life n when i will die i want to die in these strong arms only " the boy gave sad, broken, hurt n disapproveing look to her n said " never say that Metz I will never b able to live without u i will die the moment you will leave me. I love u a lot Maithali n cant imagine my life without you. Promise me that u will never leave me." in a hoarse voice . She saw the look on his face n emotions in his eyes it pinched her heart to look at him like this it filled her eyes with tear n she said in low and emotion filled voice to him while putting her both hands on his both side of the cheeks and cupping his face "I promise i will never leave you alone and even if i die i will come back to you in any other form."."I love yo to Abhay and cant imagine my life without you. So now cheerup and dont spoil your mood afterall its our BIG DAY WE ARE GETTING ENGAGED." said Maithali hile holding his face and trying to cheer him up . "Yeah I am too Happy in few hour you will be officially my fiance and next month we will get married . I just cant wait to make you mine ."said Abhay " n then I will put my stamp all over you " Abhay says again naughtly while making her go scarlet red on her face . "Abhay..." she said while blushing and burrieing her face in Abhays broad, musculine and well build chest. " I think we should go home everyone must be waiting for us back there." said while holding him from the waist and almost hugging him and him doing the same noded at her. Both got up from there and headed towards their car Abhay the cars door and Maithali seated at front passengers seat and himself setled at drivers seat . Abhay starts driving and soon both reached infront of Dobriyal House Abhay hugged her and kissed her on her forehead and said while smileing lovingly at her " I love you." "I love you too see you later " said Maithali and came out of the car ."Bye " she said after coming out of the car while waveing at him "Bye" says Abhay while Maithali turns aroud to leave after giving him a sweet smile in return and saw her leaving and leaves from there for his house .

At Dobriyal House :

Maithali enters her house and a voice calls her from behind " so how was your coochie coo with your soon to be fiance. did u guys hug ?did u guys kissed eachother ? tell na" asked a cheerful voice while imitating to hug n kiss an invisible person draatically. Metz turns around while closeing her eyes getting ready for teaseing session by her bratty sister and says "Mish.."opening her eyes.

At Raichand House :

Abhay enters his house and saw his brother and sister standing infront of him and grinning and smileing at him . He rolled his eyes understanding what is coming upand says "u guys r 2 much" while shaking his head making them smile even wider like devils. ( u think kabir n alina r 2 much😆 just wait till u meet KING OF BRATS himself SID he will teach u d meaning of 2 much in true senses🤣 )

Later on Party Venue:

"Hey baby were r u everyone is here except u come soon Metz" says Abhay to her on phone. "I m on my way baby just stuck up in a traffic jam. Did mom, dad n Mish reached there? they left before me I had some work so i said them to carry on n i will come in a seprate car later." said Maithali from other side. "Yeah they have reached here u come soon " replied Abhay "I will b there in 10 mins " she said " I will b waiting for u outside" he said.

10 mins later outside d venue;

Abhay was waiting for her and c came n steped out of d car looking beautiful. Abhay looked at her n got dazzed by her beauty they had an eyelock. There was only a main road between them. She came walking towards him not breaking d eyelock and was standing inbetween d road in their trance none of them noticed a out of control jeep coming towards her it hit her throwing her to d side of d road making her scream. Abhay felt like a truck has just run away crushung his hear into peaces .He saw his world coming shattering down infrnt of him "Maithali" he shouted while coming running towards her n taking her into his lap " Maithali open your eyes talk to me " he said while crying n shakeing her tears were flowing down from his eyes .She stuttered her eye lids n said through her breaking breaths " i l-lo-love u Ab-Abhay" n closed her eyes ." M aithali " he shouted while crying n said "u said u promised me u wont leave me ever Maithali open your eyes talk to me " shaking n crying till then all came there siren of ambulance could b heard some people were crying but Abhay wasnt hearing them. He suddenly stopped crying n in a low voice said "Maithali "n became silent someone put his hand on his shoulder n said in a shocked n crying voice "c is dead c is gone Abhay" but least did he knew even Abhay is gone away in someother world n lost there.

Precap: 1 year leap


phew finally done😊 it was a really long one but i had to show ametz love metz accident n death n abhay loseing his mental balance in this only so became so long .😳 anyways tell me how was it 2nd part is almost ready so hopefully will update it soon😊 n do leave comments😊

Edited by pkyekfanclub - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful character sketch
different story line
nice start
plz pm me wn u update
Edited by meerubzara - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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give a long update...edit soon

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aaw!!!Ametz were so lovely poor metz...they were so happy saare lovebirds na yahi karte hain eye lock ke chakkar mein pure se hi eyes lock ho jati hain😆waiting for abhiya😍update soon...plz abhay ko jaada paagal mat batana😆
Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww...pls update soon...Im waiting eagerly...The ss is so beautifully written...pls jaldi update karo...😆...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was beautiful and tragic..update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome and beautifully written but a tragic one..ametz were superb..i really felt bad for abhay! Poor soul..hope he finds happiness soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was so sad. Beautiful updated but sad
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UPDATE IS SUPERB DEAR , MAITHLI DEATH SCENE WAS REALLY TOUCHING U ARE VERY AWESOME WRITTER . ABHAY AND MAITHLI SCENE IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL. UPDATE SOON AND THANKS 4 THE PM

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