Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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sudeshna banerjee

@sweet_sudeshna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

wow a cute n a romantic choppythnxx a lot 4 da pm

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

res- aww..that ws a mindblowing update tanzie...simply superb 🤗
you deserve a big round of applause 👏
will leave a longer comment very soon... 😊
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so,atlast amber hs falln fr arman.!
Omg..in such an urgnt sitatn amber wants to knw y arman wudnt hv killd hr!! Girls cn nevr chnge..!
Ohh..pure arman s hvng nightmares..ahh..i guess bth r hopelsly n luv wth eachothr!!
Um..pia wsnt ready to go wth abhay bt thn abhay's abhay...!! Glad tht he took pia wth him.. 😉
Nd arnab didnt gt to knw bt gud or else mre prblms wud hv emrgd n pia's alrdy cmplcatd lyf...!!
I lovd dis line..'the silence nd d only sound of pia's deep breathing is the sweetst kind f sound fr abhay raichand in dis entire world nw'. ❤️
'none givs silent treatmnt to Abhay raichand'..haha..lovd dis one..so true!!
And dis ws fav...'tht idiot messed...He is so dead.'👍🏼
Pia-'I cn alwz tell whn you r near me. I feel you.' nw tht's y she is abhay's pia..!! 😳
Oh..no..pia once again strtd wth hr QA round!! Bt pia's concern cnt b ignored,coz we all knw hw fast abhay changs hs mind...!!! 😕
'I really lyk dis punishment '...wow tht ws class...nevr so dis abhay before..!!!! 😲☺️
Pia ws unperturbd by abhay's suddn vampy avatar...hope abhay undrstnds nd nevr tries hs stay away mission again...!!
Ahh...Lovd the punishment session...it ws very cute,romantic nd emotional.. 😳so pihu is in ddhradun nw! hope to see arhu tgthr again..!!
All in all a terrific..awesum...beautiful...lovly update..!!! 😊
And tanzie i want to thank you for giving dis ff...it hs dis dark aur nd passion tht is inexplicable...!!! nd u already knw dis is my fav ff...!! 😳
P.s..i made it atlast...bt i thnk bohot lamba ho gaya...!! 😆
A/w...awaitng ur nxt update...tcr...love you 🤗

---Indu 😃

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

thanks for pm

superawsum part

abhiya were too cute and romantic...

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Monkey

@TISA0711

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

awesome Tanzie.that was lovely.👏Armaan loves amby so much.felt so bad for them.AND I m loving this naughty naughty ABHAY.☺️☺️sooo cuuuteee. . . . .counting while kissing.😆.nw peehu is back,dn't hurt aryaan too much.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Tanzie!! 🤗

A beautiful valentine gift 😃 242 Kisses + 2 bonus!! U don have any idea of how I'm blushing now ☺️! Their love is too cute! I adore the way u wrote their romance!!

In my Flashbacks, I remember u say u are bad in writing romance parts..! See now, u are almost in expert level!! Well done dear!!

Armaan - Amby conversation was so practical and matured enough!

Pia's irritation on Aryan and Abhay when they tried to help her walking 🤣

Phst! Slight miss for Arnab for find the truth! But let him be aside for some days.. Let us have only Abhiya for sometime 😃

When is Mish gonna rejoin her parents? When they find about Pia??

Thanks for the PM dear!!

P.S: Still didn't come out of 242 kisses magic..! That too in a single day ☺️

Edited by Sivaranjani - 13 years ago

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

OMG! Superb update. Abhay teasing pia by his hot kisses was too hot. Each and every part was superb. I wish Amber and Arman could be together and waiting for ur next update crazily. Thanks a lot for the update.

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Oh oh looks like trouble in paradise again. But the punishment was worth reading. Pia couldn't see herself through the punishment. And Pia is more cross with Aryan. How can that be after all he has always tried to help Abhay come out of his shell.

Now is next part going to be a Aryan Peehu story starting all over. Just wondering how Alina is going to take in. And is it the end of Amby and Armaan. I was hoping that Arnab would find out that Pia is his daughter. Now is there going to be another drama when finally Misha decides to go home.

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Awesome part tanzi , wow abhiya romance , mast update

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

brilliant update Tanzie loved Abhiya 2 d core both of them were smoking hot n now Armaan knows about Amby being vampy and her family hmmm and also her past n felt bad as well so I guess he won't be excepting her soon enough n will b in denial mode for a while n poor Amby baby is sad felt bad for her and this Gaurav aaarrrggghhh 😡 😡 😡 😡 hate him he also tried 2 kill Armaan n Aryan was right he messed with Abhay's 2 fav ladies he is so gone n loved d treatment Pia is giving both Raichand brothers n now Peehu is back Woho that was a surprise wasn't expecting her back in this update now wonder with whom Aryan will end up anyways nice update n update next part soon 😊