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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: priya.1
lovely ending aysha with a perfect family...
loved abhiya's baby name...
making abhay a ilm star ws a great idea...
abhiya romance in the trailer ws 😳😳
il surely miss this ss aysha...
lovely ss buddy 👍🏼

I tried to add as many elements to this Last update to show how an ending can be done if U speed the timeing and give straight to the point UPDATES. So in one update we have Pia pregnant, tell Abay, He's a star, then she has the baby. I know i fluffed up the timing its 10 moths but babies can be overdue i know a colleague's baby born 10 months later and it was a girl she weighed a tonne.😲

I tried to maintain ABHIYA romance and even included their anniversary.

Thanks buddy for the replies and the compliments it means a lot

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: kuttu
Abhay as a movie star was a surprise what happened to the introvent arrogant guy who likes to hide himself from the world. And loved Haseena and Chand as a doting grand parent. So the romance is still int he air and our Pia is as possesive as before.

The introvert became an EXTROVERT on becoming a HUMAN and a PLAYFUL one at this too.Pia was bound to have this influence over ABHAY. She's learning to curb her possessive streak its not always easy but U gotta try right?

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: .rumki.
awesoe ending ayesha
abhay became a famous actor
abhiya got a baby girl and waiting 4 more
this ss got different and lovely ending

Why stop at one baby when its fun to make more ABHIYA babies☺️🤣 I've turned into ABHAY.🤣I told U PKYEK withdrawal symptoms are making me crazy

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
thanks for pm
the perfect ending...
luvd it.😊😊😊😊😊

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: Neytiri
Dat ws a lvly updte ayesha...it ws gr8 readng ur os...u r a brilliant wrtr...i ll b waitng 4 pm of ur anothr literary piece...all d bst...tc.

Thanks Neytiri.. For a moment then i thought U were referring to my FF ETERNALLY waiting for U. But then realised i ended it😆

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: anjali0111
wow.😊nice part n nice ending.👏...loved ur ff...specially abhiya.😉..they were super hot!!!!!!!😳

hey plz write another ff soon😊

Oh i have 3 FF's more than enough😉

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome loved it that was perfectly done love the ending they had a baby and he did the films and it good he still has some of his powers loved it begin to end awesome will miss this ff thanks for the pm

I'll miss this SS too. I felt this was more of a normal track and more sensible than i've ever had.

Its more emotional and on the angelic side as opposed to my other works

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Sorry for the late reply. Brilliant ending Aysha. Can you write another one please i am making puppy faces

Another one R U CRAZY. I have 3 FF's already. Abhay and Alina's DARK ANGEL, Firefly come fly with me on ABHIYA, Then the SEQUEL. 3'S the limit now. My brians empty why do U think i keep asking for idea's from others now. Itni lalaj achi nahi hai🤣

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
superb ending to a wonderful ss aysha
i seriously want to thank u for this one
abhay being an actor seems gr8 considering his good looks and character
and finally they got a daughter
well perfect what more can i say always up for reading anything u write
best of luck

I intended ABHAY to be an actor in this SS but backed out. If it wasn't for DISHU i'd never have completed this track. So kudo's tpo her for her part she played on this.