::SS::Abhiya's Heavenly Little Paradise upda pg126

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anjali

@adnilover

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Jealousy games never get old esp when it comes to abhay and piya. I love abhay's jealousy coz of the inslaught of dialogues expressing his posssiveness for piya😳. Poor abhay, he is having a hard time having piya in his room and not being able to do something about it

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Superb update aysha i so luvd dis jealous side of abhay both abhiya were burning in jealousy..nd dis preeti is vry smart yaar ek vi mauka nhi chorti hai abhay ko kiss krne ka nd last part was also awesome continue soon nd thanks for the pm tc:-)

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Brilliant update Ayesha.
You wrote that jealousy thing so beautifully.
Poor My Abhay he is having a hard time controlling his human emotions. But he is a superman will tackle anything

Edited by snitchseeker - 13 years ago

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

awesome ya...oh i loved this part..the J part was described so perfectly...haha..both were giving each other the taste of their own medicine...

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

you did this jealousy part so well😳much better than the original show😊
so abhay lost to piya...i was so praying that piya would win😃😳

continue soon sweets😊

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

awesome...bichara abhay😆kab tak sant bana ghumega😎...pia ke rehte hue toh..*ahem!!🤣

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-SnowKid-

@-SnowKid-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

great part..thnx for d pm

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

Nice update
the jealousy game was superb!
Aww! Abhay is so cute when he is possesive!
The kissing scene was hawt! Naughty pia toturing abhay.. Lol
thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

I quite love this ABHAY RAICHAND because he isn't so expressionless nor is he emotionless to a certain extent being able to handle most of the difficult situations with ease as a VAMPIRE because now as a HUMAN he has no means of ESCAPE. He is stuck with these emotions bubbling to the fore.

Possessive ABHAY is one we haven't seen before. I am just trying to show Human ABHAY as PERFECT as he is has moments where he is now a prisoner of his HUMAN shell now. ABHIYA R both possessive when it comes to each other and even Protective.

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: prerna26
Super cute update!!😊

Sometimes Jealousy and other emotions (Ofcourse not to an extreme level) are also important. It makes the other person feel special and loved. Continue asap and thanks for Pm.😃

Bring out the claws🤣🤣🤣

Yeah we all wanna feel special and LOVED so i don't see the harm in harmless ribbing so long as its healthy and not a force of habit.

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Ayshu 🤗haye kya update tha...so the jealousy track worked ha...two passionate kisses...thank u for writing it...and i guess age mujhe aur romance milega...😉so pia wants to save energy for making explosive love ha...btw engage kara unko...u know na me kitni bhuki ho hot romance ki ...

Rashu never say i never did anything for U😆 U and Ruksar roz meri peeche rehte ho Romantic UPDATE keliye. Lo maine tum dono ki kwaish Kabool ki hai.

I will get these 2 engaged ASAP. I just need another romantic Update. In this SS Abhay will kill JEH using his INTELLECT alone and will end up being a HUMAN only.