ABHIYA FF never leave me again pt 34pg148 *28 may - Page 18

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

yes sabko reply kardo . i also think to write another ss is ff ke first page par second story hai to soch rahi thi ke usko b update karo ajj rat ko wat say ha i update karo ja na .

Originally posted by: priya.1

Awesome update dr!!!!👏

Abhay couldn't resist pia dancing with Jeh...

Felt bad for abhay whn pia didnt evn care abt him aft da party whn he came to her plc... 😭 Poor abhay..

Abhay hs some mental prb 😲 who murdered hs dad????

Hope pia stands by abhay...

plz continue soon... cnt wait to knw the truth...

thnx dear sort out all problem soon

Originally posted by: ilove99

ya thats great i thought to ask u to cont. that when u end this one...great but pehle iska update de do!!!!!!

and yes i guess u didn't notice iss update mein tumhari kuch lines beech se cut hoke new para par start ho rahi thi...

pahle isko hi update karogi . woh is lie kyou ki mein notpad par type kiya jab yaha copy kiya pata hi nahi chala kya ho gaya but i think lenght problem jaski baja se line cut ho rahi ho wase kal type karne ke badd jayda dayan nahi tha

Originally posted by: mossgreen

Oh god!! Murder!! N abhay hs a mental prob!! Plz dnt tell me dt abhay kiled his dad!! Now wtz gonna hpn?

Originally posted by: madhuri16

res...😊...sonu..m reading it 4rm d start sry 4 being very late!!!

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sonu it was an awesome concept.🤗...i luvd d way u write..🤗.

i luvd d way misha refused piya 4rm attending d call.😆...

so its all d flashback...is alina d good one r not..😕.

but sonu..wat is with abhay...he behaves so strangely...i really can't see my abhay like this.😭😭

coz i have only seen him with attitude or cuteness...never even imagined him like this...😭...

..n wat u mean by mental problem????😭

...sonu pls..don't kill me...i know i resd all d parts n didn't unres...m sry 4 that...😒

continue soon...u said abhay disappeared right.😲😭..m really curious 2 know wat happens next...m waiting eagerly..n thnx 4 d pm...luv u tons..take care🤗

thnx madu dear for lovely comment. kitna rooti hai yr tu dekh sara jaga pani hi pani ho gaya hai. yes abhay disappeared

Originally posted by: TISA07

Sorry,couldnt cmmnt on part 4.well part 4 nd 5,both were awesome.jst love reading ur writing.

thnx dear😃

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

sorry for late reply yaaar
exams hain m very busy
update was superb
but i m rally feeling bad for abhay
pia should give him a chance
but abhay mental 😲please yaar don't do this to us i want him happy soon
and what did abhay killed his father but why
i want to know pretty soon
thanks for the pm and do update soon

not say sorry shivani . surly pia gave achance yr hero hai story ka . thnx for lovely comment .

Originally posted by: bellaaa

nice update continue soon i hope piya make him strong and give him strength to fight with his inner problrms

thnx dear dear she surly do that .

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome update
loved it
so Abhay's father was killed
waiting to read more
continue soon
thanks for the PM