os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28 - Page 11

Originally posted by: madhuri16

shivani..🤗🤗.. hey madhuri🤗

m in my seventh heaven reading ur OS...😍😍. glad u liked it

i have 2 say u r an incredible writer.⭐️...now i m blushing😳😆 u always make me land in seventh heaven with ur compliments i so want this 2 happen in d show...😍 we should not expect cvs to give us this much lovey dovey stuff i just hope for a happy ending in the show. the lack of romance in the show make me take out my frustration in the os

marvelous update !!!...each part contained d love n passion of abhiya.☺️... i always wished to see a passionate side of abahy

start was awesome..n abhay being human..😍...i luvd it..😳. trust me its my utmost desire to see him as a naughty romantic human

thum itna romantic hoon..itna romantic hoon pocho math😳... hey my friends say that i m the most unromantic person in this world u r contradicting them😳

d rain part was awesome☺️...n abhay wanting piya 2 be d old one..not a model was cute... i guess abhay also has the right to be possesive over pia

abhiya's marriage was d best.😳...

d messaging part of abhay 2 piya on d saloon was cho chweet😆... glad u liked it i thought it would be good to show their desperation

misha giving joote 2 kabir...n abhay's convo with d boys was so perfect⭐️...

n d first night part was my favourite😳...u portrayed it perfectly☺️...i was blushing hard..☺️☺️.. even i was blushing while writing it. i have never written something so sensual before. i tried to make it as divine as possible

brilliant piece of work⭐️...i like yr way of giving detailed description...i can't stop myself when i start writing so sorry u have to bear such a long updates

n m really sry 4 being late.😭..u know d reason...hey dear of course i know u were having exams no worries n continue d part where piya is expecting d baby😊...i would luv 2 read... i will update next part on sunday

luv,

madhu😊 luv u too madhuri🤗

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

😡 not fair shivani u stopped at such an interesting part 😭 sorry yaar i was busy and at that time i was still thinking about where to take them for their honeymoon so thought of stopping at that point only loved misha and panchi so cute they were teasing abhiya 😆 yeah they should after the antics they have done if u know what i mean 😆😳their romance was cute and decent this time 😳 comeon yaar it was decent last time as well actually i have a sizzling hot update planned i hope u won't mind my indecency that time😉😆 loved this chap pls pls update soon i am waiting for their hm part 😉 i will update on sunday u are good at writing ha 😛 thanks for the compliment yaar but honestly i m not i m just trying

u didnt knew my name na

Rashmi😭 oh thanks for telling me but why r u crying😕

Originally posted by: renuka1997

it is a really cute n romantic update... glad u like it

Abhay is really naughty... he has to be after all he is a married human being now😳😆

Piya is really really a bossy wife... of course pia raichand has every every right to boss over her husband

but has been arrested by abhay's love... they r soulmates and are trapped together for eternity

the dining room part was really lovely n cute...

hope the Abhay in the show speaks with his friends openly like this oneday... i so want him to be like this😭

n the part where Abhay holds Piya's hands n she raises it...

was really hillarious... it was a personal experience so i decided to use it on abhiya😳😉

thanx for the pm... my pleasure

continue soon... i will

i love this cute love story... thanks

n love u too Shivani di... luv u 3 renuka😆🤗

Renuka (Remona)...

Originally posted by: madhuri16

haiyee..shivani...it was marvelous.👏👏... thanks for appreciating madhuri

u explained piya's after marriage state well☺️.😳..

gosh...abhay being so romantic☺️...i luv him..😳. we all luv him yaaar i always wanted to see him like that so wrote it

d dinning table part was fab😆... thanks😆😳

abhay entwining his fingers with piya...it was cho chweet.😳.. it was a personal experience dear so i decided to use it on abhiya

still i don't like arnab dobriyal.😒... nobody does yaar but he will soon accept abhay completely

misha n abhay convo was cute.😆... i always want their bonding in the show

i like abhay's dialogue..😍..good they r soo romantic with passion..orelse teasing...m luving it..😳.. he has changed a lot after turning into human he has started opening up

continue soon..would luv 2 read more😊...luv u n take care🤗 will update on sunday

Originally posted by: anukrati

it was superb