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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
brilliant ayesha. it was just superb. hope show also takes a similar track.

I spent ages trying to make it sound like it makes sense.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: prerna26
I was waiting for this OS only!😊 Brilliant OS.👏

I can't even explain how much i Loved/enjoyed reading this OS. I never liked this Jeh and now i hate him even more.🤢😡 Wow Abhay's human but he still has powers (Best of both worlds) , Great!!⭐️ Arnab accepted Abhay, Abhiya are together and now Alina is also part of Raichand Family. I wish something like this happens in the show too.😃 Thank you so much!🤗

I can't believe i ever liked Jeh😭😭😭 What hopes i had for him and what has he cbecome.

Sorry it took a few days but i had the story in my head but trying to make sure there weren't any loopholes or questions here i tried to answer them best as i could. I have been writing like a crazy woman to keep me from losing my sanity.

I want Alina to be adopted into the Raichand if not Dobrial family. She deserves a little love.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
superb update

finally abhiya together . awww pia acha sabk sikha arnav ko har waqt detective bane ka bhoot swar tha na . jey😡 no comment . abhay eating human food my dream come true . ialso want abhay eat human food abhiya engaged dats wonderful . alina also accepted by abhay family and clan . wonderful written yr

I didn't want to write too much on Jeh. Abhay will kill him but i wanted a little happy ending here. ABHIYA engaged and accepted by all and Alina being welcomes in.

I always imagined Abhay having human food and how it would feel for him😆

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sailboat121
wow... Very nice story. I really wanna c this in the show. Bt don't expect that much 40 the cvs

& is it finished or u r going 2 continue iT? Wanna c abhay vs jeh fight & can't wait 2 c abhay crash the doggy into pieces.

tnx 4 pm

Even i wanna see Jeh dead but i have another OS LOVE BITES to write and i'll cream JEH there😉 Even i have no expectations from the CV'S seeming as they've killed this SHOW with fillers and nonesence. We never even got a LOVE track between ABHIYA going😭😭😭

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Awesome OS! I loved how Piya with the help of Alina brought Abhay back! I liked the idea of Abhay still retaining his powers after returning again!

Personally, in the show I really hope Abhay is still a vampire when he comes back because for me, it makes Abhiya's love story so much more interesting, dangerous and passionate as there always is a factor that Abhay can kill Piya but his love helps him fight the urge! 😳

Anyway, I loved the happy Abhiya ending at the end of the OS! 😳 Fantastic job 👏

I'd rather Abhay remain a vampire too but i wanted to change it a little. Abhay with powers would be super cool. I expect Pia will fight for her LOVE and bring Abhay back Alina's help.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: seabeauty
awesome.. nice os.. update soon and pm me 2 :)

This was just a one off😆

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sohiniluvsabhay
Awesome os dear i jst luvd it the way piya told the importance of abhay in her life to arnab is amazing thanks for the pm:-)

I expect Pia to unveil the HEROICS Abhay has shown and kept secret from everyone. I wanted Pia to convey and pour out her HEART and show everyone just what ABHAY is to her and show that to her he is her EVERYTHING. We've never seen Pia fight for ABHAY against her family before. To hell with the world. Abhay is all i want.😉

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: priya.1

Awesome OS!!!!!

Hope the CV's also do something like this in the show...

Loved the idea that Abhay has all his powers being a human...

thnx 4 the pm

Don't expect anything from the CV'S its the best way

Jeh will be quaking in his boots with the new and improved ABHAY RAICHAND

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
I was crying with Pia.
This is fantastic then can be imagined.
Thanks Ayesha for not making Abhay a normal human but like someone with power.
Loved it.
Please continue soon

Normalcy is so overrated. We want a SUPER POWERED ABHAY RAICHAND

I want Pia to emotionally break down and show her family exactly who ABHAY is to her and life without him is no life for her. Maybe then ARNAB will see the importance of ABHAY in Pia's life. I want a fighter to emerge out of Pia. Abhay's done this all the time against the world and his family.

Pia heartbroken is something we have yet to see. I mean really broken and this is what gives ABHIYA that extra factor

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: kuttu
wow that would be a wonderful way to see the end but I doubt we will get something like that. Ekta sure will add more masala and melo drama and it will turn out to be something else all together. I just hope they don't ruin the entire thing.
But reading your version was really interesting and nice. Abhay gettting the best of both worlds. That would be nice to see.

We normally get served garbage by the CV'S And Ekta complicates this supernatural show by over playing it with mystery. Simplicity can be perfection sometimes.

I hope we get to see a rollercoaster ride😉 Abhay maintaining powers and gaining more will shock Jeh and the other werewolves